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Totally fine with it, in fact I actually intended to make Balthier dislike Lorinthians on principle of the fact that most treated him, his people, and his mother like dirt.
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Any chance a necromancer character could be done? either as an antagonist or an Ally, trying to right the wrong of his or her peers. Doesnt have to be the whole "Summoning hordes of Undead" kind, but someone who does creepy shit with dead things.
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@Varromere Hey! I made a few changes based on your feedback, feel free to check it out here. :)

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@Kaiachi I see a great potential for friendship! They both love the fight and a good laugh.
There might be something there!

@BurningCold I can see mutual respect since they have the same determination and hatred.

@TemplarKnight07 Now here I see two people who had both been abandoned by their fathers and were born into bad circumstances. Also both seem to share the ability to make people laugh. This could be a real dynamic duo.

@Mr_pink They probably know each other and did a few hunts together. A bit of friendship but mostly respect perhaps?

@Argetlam350 Both had very religious upbringings although Xho motivations in life are far less noble. The probably don't have that many problems with each other.
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@Argetlam350Welcome Lethodus of Lorinth, accepted!

@RyuShuraSmall thing - Hunter-Captain, not Captain-Hunter. Nitpicking aside - welcome to our resident warlock Talia!

Warlocks and daemonic magic are largely viewed with suspicion and fear, as they have a history of cruel users (crueler than necromancers, really) and addicts to power. My friends, take that as you will. I look forward to the discussions taking place, thank you @BurningCold for getting the ball rolling.

What if Xho's noble father is the warlord that tortured Talia? @The Narrator

@TemplarKnight07Let me know when Balthier is ready! :)

@LucidnonsensePM me with your ideas. :)
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Is this still open yeah?
Hmm, I'm not entirely sure that I've got everything right here - so please let me know if anything needs changing.

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@Argetlam350Welcome Lethodus of Lorinth, accepted!

@RyuShuraSmall thing - Hunter-Captain, not Captain-Hunter. Nitpicking aside - welcome to our resident warlock Talia!

Warlocks and daemonic magic are largely viewed with suspicion and fear, as they have a history of cruel users (crueler than necromancers, really) and addicts to power. My friends, take that as you will. I look forward to the discussions taking place, thank you @BurningCold for getting the ball rolling.

What if Xho's noble father is the warlord that tortured Talia? @The Narrator

@TemplarKnight07Let me know when Balthier is ready! :)

@LucidnonsensePM me with your ideas. :)


Balthier is actually ready for your review now.

@The Narrator Quite possibly, we could work something out.
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What if Xho's noble father is the warlord that tortured Talia? @The Narrator


Now that would give them both a person to hate and though possibly forming something of a bond, perhaps Xho feeling incredibly protective like an older brother for Talia, to somehow make up for the sins of his lineage. @RyuShura How do you like the idea?

@TemplarKnight07 I could see the two as kind of buddies, having done a few hunts together and Xho listening and laughing at the bard hunters tales.
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@The Narrator Yeah, that sounds great! I can quickly change it so Talia didn't actually kill the Warlord when she escaped his clutches. (or as a plot twist, thought she did and he 'rises from the dead' later. Figuratively or literally.) But I'd expect her to still not trust Xho, out of instinct than reason, since he probably looks similar to the person that tortured her for, practically, her entire life. Insert horrific PTSD scenes between the two here. But he can more than definitely try to dispel those thoughts! :)

I don't expect many people to like Talia, simply because she's weird, so it's all in good fun.
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@Filthy MudbloodFirstly, where does her surname come from? Her mother? Herself? I ask because Jzarea is a Mesoamerican-inspired culture (I nitpick, I apologise).

Secondly, a vamphiir must be incinerated and reduced to ash, so revise this part. Perhaps a Hunter/Huntress did the burning for her?

Sivar Velg is a continent, and it is also on the other side of the world from Jzarea, just in case this wasn't considered. When you're ready, let me know and we can officially welcome Eris to Black Cinders!

@TemplarKnight07A warm welcome to the Bard, Balthier!

Nitpicking though - people from Lorinth are Lorintines, people from Baruvad are Baruvadi and people from Paerium are referred to as Paeric.
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@RyuShura I could see Xho desperately trying to get Talia to trust him and always looking out for her. She on the other hand just sees a younger version of her torturer, making that pretty difficult.
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I'm going to give this another day and then I'll start writing up an IC, unless you guys would like more time?

In the meantime, expect some PMs from myself regarding your previous mission, how you're arriving in Isamanca, where you're supposed to be going and who you're with.
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It needs to be said, this is going to be awesome.
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@Filthy Mudblood@RyuShura

If either of you wanted to be connected to Denric in some way, say so here. If not, we'll let it be.
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@TemplarKnight07
My character would probably try to start arguments with yours in jest, as a challenge. I could see them doing this frequently.
And he's a bard....oh boy. I would see her pushing him to play his lute and sing often.

@The Narrator I see a great potential for friendship! They both love the fight and a good laugh. There might be something there!
-I think Ehnleth would admire his fighting skill with that blade dance of his, and would have been curious about his tattoo, so she would have tried to share stories. I agree that they have a potential friendship, especially centered on bloodshed and joking around.

@BurningCold Denric is generally pretty absorbed in his own work, though he might've taken notice of Ehnleth's fury in battle. She might have been on hunts with both Denric and Xho.
-I'm going to agree with you on this, actually. I think she would have admired Denric's skills enough to feel them as worthy hunters, especially if she's already friends with Xho.

@Argetlam350
There's no doubt that these two would have traded many tales, in my opinion.
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@BurningCold

I'd say Talia doesn't really have any positive relations with anyone in particular. I'm sure she knows of Denric, and vice versa, but they would not interact much. Her history there is pretty short as is, but Talia liking to be alone since she doesn't know when a hallucination might attack her doesn't really help her social skills. That kind of scene doesn't bode well for anyone. She also looks pretty eerie, essentially like a walking ghost, so it's not fun just being around her. Many might associate the term "undead" just from a glance at the sickly and scarred girl, so it might already spring up bad memories. That's why she generally covers her body fully in robes. But robes can only hide so much.

Besides Xho, who has a strained relationship due to the direct connection to her past, she is a passive member of the Order, tending to silently follow orders and spending her days time solely deepening her knowledge over Arcana. So she wouldn't have time to make connections.

Well, until the RP starts and big events start to change things. :^D
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@RyuShura Though Denric wouldn't mind her appearance at all, I agree with the rest. It fits both of their personalities to not have much interaction with the other.
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@RyuShura@BurningCold

Not to mention, how does Denric feel about a warlock being in the Order, especially given his own furtive activities? How do the others feel about Talia? The Order opposes necromancers, blood magic and undeath, yes, but warlocks have a dark and destructive history.

I don't mean to put Talia on the spotlight, but to get a bit of dialogue going on how a warlock is received and perhaps encourage some conflict between characters, especially Talia and Xho (who cares for her). This is also a good way for me to design characters too, as a warlock might be a part of the story as well (this is not a definite - no spoilers, you fiends!)
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@Varromere@RyuShura Anyone who has a problem with her or wants to hurt her can get ready for a dance...

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Just came here to say that this exploded, and I am back burnt from a day in the I'll have my character up soon though (its my priority!)
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