[OOC] Guilty Gear: X-tinction

[Ontos]

Venom said
Ontos all I can read is "Get zoned" XD

What?

[Salroka]

Kal-El said
As Co-GM, I approve you both. No sheet needed.......(but you really need that sheet tho)

Oh yeah. I forgot to mention Kal-El would be helping me in this little endeavor. Thanks for reminding me, broham.

[Venom]

Lol think about him in guilty gear or blazblue. He would have "zone" control. Basically locking down movement and or straight up countering most forms of offense. Eddie had good zone control for example. It wasn't an insult by any means.

[Taka]

@Venom, the Sheet is...okay...but it just meets the minimum acceptance. Though as the Co-GM, I feel as though the sheet could use more detail. The ideas aren't bad nor is the effort. TBH me and Beta feel as such. We both feel it could use more detail to it and it would be appreciated if you worked to do. We are both here to help in that regard. All in all though it is an acceptable sheet.

[Salroka]

Venom said
Lol think about him in guilty gear or blazblue. He would have "zone" control. Basically locking down movement and or straight up countering most forms of offense. Eddie had good zone control for example. It wasn't an insult by any means.

Ontos is not familiar with BB or GG, believe it or not. I applaud him greatly for putting together such a character with no previous knowledge of the games.

On that note, Ontos Lestrade has been approved and added to the roster.

[Venom]

No worries! Feel free to send me a pm with what needs to change. My brains a little frazzled from finishing up assignments here at mid terms. But make your request oh lords!

[Salroka]

Fired off a PM to you, Venom.

[Ontos]

I figured that Ontos would be a lot more of a 'suppressing fire' character, if there was such a niche.

And I keep confusing BB with GG.

[Salroka]

Ontos said And I keep confusing BB with GG.

Same developers and basic structure as far as gameplay. No harm done, man.

[VitaVitaAR]

Going to work on my bio more another time, eh-heh, um. ^^;

[Salroka]

VitaVitaAR said
Going to work on my bio more another time, eh-heh, um. ^^;

No huge rush. I can wait. Like what you have so far, though.

[Venom]

I made some revisions hopefully the back story has a little more ummph.

[Salroka]

Venom. The story is a moderate improvement, but the CS is still missing a certain... I don't know. Something. I can't really tell you what it is without compromising my position as a fair GM, though. I do hope you can figure out what it is missing, as I would hate for it to keep you from joining us.

[Venom]

Is it because of grammar? Or perhaps its just the text wall. (I know about the other thing) but its just A moderate improvement Q.q what makes good improvements?

[Salroka]

It's a couple things.

1.) If you could put a space between your paragraphs, it would eliminate the "text wall" as you called it, and look much cleaner.
2.) You added detail as to Shard's home BEING destroyed, but not how or why it was destroyed, OR who did it.
3.) The "other thing" that you have yet to correct.

[Venom]

Her home being wrecked is a mystery, I left it open so I could make it a cool surprise later. All she knows is it was a bit of scorched earth. Ill try and make it spaced better.

[Salroka]

Anyways. I am off to play GTA Online for a while. VitaVitaAR! Finish your character!

[Salroka]

Vita! Finish Alison! Please?

[VitaVitaAR]

Rin was helping me out with her but she was tired a lot today. ^^; I'm stuck on things without her.

[Salroka]

You DO have two GMs that are around and happy to assist...