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@Dynamo Frokane

Should the be a spot for any head attachments cause the stuff in shoulders would go there


No, anything that would go on the head, will just be in the gadget section.
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I might be up for this. Going to give it some thought...considering a character on the run from something-possibly war crimes or looking for revenge.
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@Dynamo Frokane How are mechs transported and whatnot? Would they be stored somewhere or should I expect them to be running rampant like cars and bicycles?
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@Dynamo Frokane How are mechs transported and whatnot? Would they be stored somewhere or should I expect them to be running rampant like cars and bicycles?


Professionaly they are transported with airships, but regular folk in the freelands cant usually afford that so they are running/flying around and what not. But Mechs are very expensive and only a small percentage of the Fortune State own them.
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Work in progress, but let me know what you think so far.


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@Gisk Yep you got the scale right on the stats, looking forward to the finished product.
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@Dynamo Frokane

Fixed the stats up. Still gotta add back story to the build
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@Dynamo Frokane

I think I'm good
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Technical difficulties going on, this a test.

Rejoice, we passed.
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Super shite W.I.P. but I'm done for the night. I have a lot of things to work out for his backstory, flesh out some motivations etc. and figure out who was at war with whom when. I'm taking liberties with some worldbuilding type stuff, but I think that was encouraged-if it's a problemo or anything needs to change, let me know. I'm pretty much assuming that dozens and dozens of conflicts were taking place during the Hylo-Therux war and the Great Orio (oreo?) War.

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@Polybius

whose the artist for that picture? its fantastic!
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And I think Im finished with mine. Was going to put it out as a WIP here, but Google Documents covered for me. How does it look?



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@Lmpkio

Would Alex have crossed paths with Nathaniel?
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@FallenTrinity Not directed at me, but I'm gonna say I highly doubt it, unless you two are planning some sort of deadly rivalry dynamic between your characters.
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Would Alex have crossed paths with Nathaniel?


They might've yes. Maybe even with Alexander's father in the early years too.
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@FallenTrinity Not directed at me, but I'm gonna say I highly doubt it, unless you two are planning some sort of deadly rivalry dynamic between your characters.


@Lmpkio

I like that idea or maybe Nate let's Alex in on a dark plan he's got. I gotta talk to the gm about it first but it will differently make for an interesting plot/twist/addition? Idk it might be good
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@FallenTrinity You're only allowed one character, so unless you literally mean it's for fun alone, I'd save yourself the effort. :p
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@BurningCold

I know the rules as I saw them in an earlier post hence why the hider says what it is intended for because I'm literally bored out of my mind as my other rps I'm in are on pause, moving too slow or have just died.

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I think I'm good


A few things, Backstory is still too thin, 'classified' isnt going to be acceptable I understand not revealing everything. but we need to know more about your character, two meaty paragraphs please. So far you have a timeline like description just telling me about his military career.

Too many listed in the Gadgets slot, really should only be 2, apologies if I didnt make that clear.

In your gadget slot you have an 'elementus reactor' which is unlikely seeing as your Mech is a Mk2, youll have to pick 2 of the gadgets and stick with them I'm afraid.

Also if your solo/skirmisher rating is 8 he would be more of a skirmisher, I put Solo first for a reason

Solo 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 Skirmisher

So you might want to change it to 2

apart from that everything seems fine.
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