[OOC] Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

[Fieryfly]

Alice are you ever planning on posting with Rini? Because otherwise I'll just move ahead with Sho and talk to Kira... because I've been waiting for you with doing that...

[Roran Hawkins]

@Agent57: If you have not posted by tomorrow I will consider you kicked from the squad and continue without you. You have repeatedly promised to post and not done anything, so I see no reason to wait any longer.

[Red Fox]

If people from Team 6, meaning Bell and Fattwan will not resume activity, I will be forced to remove them from Team Six and move on with only Roro.
As much as I hate doing this, I am fed up with inactivity. I know, I am not the most active myself, but I am an university student. Should you leave me a note or anything, it would be alright, but dropping just off ... that´s a dick move. Same goes for the Amegakure ANBU.

I am expecting a reaction in the next couple of days. If nothing will happen, I am afraid we will have to part ways.

On a more positive note, I look forward to see a new Genin joining my village. Your sheet looks good so far, keep it up!

[Blandman]

Speaking of Skype, could I grab some details regarding that so as to join any discussions?

Also; welcome back Jacob.

[Gamer geek]

In honestly seems like inactivity is becoming a issue now with most teams. Perhaps we need to start collecting phone numbers and do nothing but call those would don't post constantly at night. Seriously though: maybe it is time to remove inactive people from the roster?

I honestly don't expect people to post the day after someone posts but continuously taking weeks to post with no heads up can get fairly annoying. I know god modding is usually frowned upon in RPing but perhaps we start allowing inactive characters to be god modded as an alternative to removing them. If people refuse to have their character god modded then they agree to terms of posting in a reasonable time? Its only a suggestion.

[j8cob]

By posting a CS, everyone actually consents to the GM use of god-modding if the need arises. Tis in the rules.

[Gamer geek]

j8cob said
By posting a CS, everyone actually consents to the GM use of god-modding if the need arises. Tis in the rules.

We have rules? Even with that rule it place it only addresses people leaving the RP not going AFK for a while.

Gowi said
Working on a post right now, would of started working on it sunday but shit came up. - more bullcrap came up, but there's tomorrow. Sorry, guys.

Always the day after tomorrow too. Teehee. Just poking fun at you.

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GlitchyBugger said
Gamer, you and I need to think of something for Team Shinichi's first post in this IC >:D

I dunno. We could do some solo training while we wait for more people to join the team.
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[Gamer geek]

(Removed By Me. Somehow something got double posted)

[Gamer geek]

This post was my bad. I meant to edit a post but ended up posting a 3rd post in a row. Oh well.

Here I will make use of this post.
Should I make a female genin for Kiri? Not sure where the biggest need for people is.

[Little Alice]

-Blandman

Add any of the GM's and they will add you to the conversation. My skype is : alicehondemon

-Gamer

So far I am aware, the GM team is trying to do that. The rule of when one leaves that we godmodd the character, to work it smoothly out of the story is the same as when one is very inactive. I remember there were some guiding rules to jounin, that worked in the same way.

-Fiery,

I am sorry, will try to post now!

[Red Fox]

Several notes.

Alice, we already tried to limit other posts in the OOC and if you ask me, it failed miserably. While I agree that the OOC should be kept for out of character matters, we can't forbid people from posting small talk. We habe to keep it lively here. Fishing sheets can be a nuissance, but we have to keep the OOC living. Now, writing from a tablet is rather slow so will continue later if needed.

God-moding is despised by me, but if two people are inactive and slowing one down, I will always prefer to give that one player a full experience.

Gamer, I am going to say a no to it on the principle of disturbing the privacy of the said person. No.

[Gowi]

Not too proud of that post, but let me know whatevs.

[Gamer geek]

Gowi said
Not too proud of that post, but let me know whatevs.

Other then Kato being spelled with an M, it wasn't bad.

Edit: Still see a few Matos in there but it isn't that big of a deal.

[Gowi]

Fixed. No clue how I screwed that one up.

[Gerontis]

Due work, I will not be able to review CS's very soon. I will try to review a CS this evening, but make sure that you've sent me one.

[Gamer geek]

BTW Gero I just re-read your post with Satoshi like a page back saying something about Kato not being able to go through the wall. Just wanted to say that he didn't go "through" the wall. He went "over it."

Its basically pointless to point this out which is basically why I'm pointing it out.

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The real reason for posting was to ask a question. If Kato was to use dirt swarm on Satoshi would Satoshi be able to see the chakra being fed through the ground or short distances away? I know that being a Earth user like Kato he probably is used to having dirt in his face but I still feel that he doesn't have a jutsu specifically like Dirt Swarm where small dirt particles are continuously confronting your face, therefore making it relatively difficult for Satoshi to see in the swarm. Just wanted to know before I progressed onward with a post.

[Torris]

Name: Banshii Aburu
Nickname/Alias: None Yet
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 13; 23 August
Age Appearance: Early Teens
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents:
Father - Dona Garu
Mother - (Unknown)
Length and build: 5'5; Athletic Build
Weight: 125lbs
Favorite weather and season: Cold; Winter



Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization:

Clan/Bloodline: Aburu Clan

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature:
Katon(Fire Release)



Appearance:

Banshii looks the part of a normal physically active 13 year old. His shoulder-length hair is usually kept wild and messy, and is a scarlet color. As for his eyes, they are the same unnatural color as his hair, giving him a fierce look. He is brown skinned, and sports a usually emotionless face. On his right cheek is a horizontal scar. His usually outfit is a solid black sleeveless top, with a hood attached. The top has a zipper right in the middle, and it is usually kept unzipped, partially revealing Banshii's chest and stomach. He sports solid black pants that stop just above his ankles. His sandals are black as well(I swear he's not an emo!).

Banshii also wears two crimson colored, fingerless gloves. Strapped to his left thigh is a small tool bag, holding multiple shuriken. Around his waist is another small tool bag, holding multiple explosive tags. His Konoha headband is tied around his right arm; He only wears it around his head during battle.



Personality:

Banshii does not act the same towards everyone. Firstly, he can be labeled as a bit of an introvert to those that he just meets. He likes his space, and taking care of things on his own, but as he gets close to certain people he will not mind them being around, or being around them. Banshii can also be sort of a 'dick' to those around him, even friends. But most of the time, this is done in jest. Banshii cannot be a true asshole to those who he doesn't truly dislike. He also secretly likes to help others, and not because it's the right thing to do, just because the recognition and thanks makes him feel important.

Banshii can be impatient at times, but he can hide it well. When tasked out he will rush his objective, but will still be able to get the job done quite well. He is extremely intelligent and adept though it may take some time to show. It is not wrong to label him as lazy also. Banshii will be the most active person when it comes to becoming stronger, learning techniques, or combating opponents, but when other things arise he might choose to slack off.

Now, being 13, Banshii is growing more and more attracted to females but he does not exactly know how to show it and often gets embarrassed when trying to be nice to one. This causes him to resort to childish teasing, which usually gets him nowhere. But once he gets comfortable around people, he often becomes comic relief which is a positive to some females at least. He often believes the stronger he gets, the more girls will notice him, which can cause him to go overboard at moments.

Lastly when it comes to interacting with those he feels superior too, Banshii will either take on an "experienced mentor" role, or a "I'm too good for you" facade. Some people can just rub him the wrong way from the beginning. When interacting with his superiors, Banshii will show much respect until of course, he gets comfortable. He will still show respect, but will also treat some superiors as friends as well. Superiors that don't gain his respect will often be dismissed by Banshii, and he usually doesn't care for the consequences which leads to more trouble for him



History:

Banshii does not have much of a history, as his journey as a ninja has barely begun. He was born in Konoha 13 years ago, and his birth killed off his mother who was apparently weak from a recent conflict. His father refuses to talk about anything to do with his mother, or the past. All that Banshii currently knows, is that he and his father are the last of his clan. His father won't even give the history of the Aburu clan, and for some reason this is fine with Banshii at the moment. Banshii looks up to his father, as he is quite an accomplished man. He loves to train with him, and does his best to impress him, even if it means bending the truth a bit.

Banshii grew up always knowing he would apply to the ninja academy as soon as he was eligible. For some unknown reason he has always loved the rush of watching others fight, and drama and chaos intrigued him. He hated it when things were calm, and hopes that becoming a ninja and going on missions would eliminate too much peacefulness. Banshii had a strange affliction for conflict.

Theme Song:




Weapons/Items[/u]:
10x Shuriken
15x Explosive Tags



[u]Skills/Abilities
- Banshii has proved to be good at chakra control as a result of extensive training with his father.
- Banshii is able to use long ranged abilities, but he much more prefers to fight an opponent at close range. Because of this, he has tried to learn as much taijutsu as possible from his father, and his body is more adept to it. His reaction times and overall speed and power are above average for a ninja his age.
- His style of combat is called 'Dragon Boxing'. The user fights in a smooth manner, helping to disguise techniques so that counterattacks are extremely difficult. A deep hissing sound is exhibited with each strike to add power and train body control. Inhaling lightens the body for evasion or attacking maneuvers. Banshii has been trained in this technique since being a child, but he has not yet mastered it. Even so, he is adept enough to use it in combat efficiently. The fighting style focuses on mostly tiring opponents out, while providing no openings for the enemy. This technique's main tactic is evasion by twisting the upper and lower torso. The attacks can vary from quick strikes to weak points, or powerful blows to external areas. The body is calm and relaxed, and users leg work exhibits a zig zag motion. When striking, maximum power is exerted when movement originates at the feet, is guided by the waist, flows through the body, and exits through the fist.
- Because of his likeness of close range fighting, Banshii is not as talented when it comes to long range. Even so to the point where his skills at throwing shuriken and kunai are slightly below average.



Special Traits
- Despite outlying conditions, Banshii's body temparature is always higher than normal due to the unlocked potential of his KG. This does not effect him in combat though. Those standing around him are even able to feel the heat his body naturally gives off.

Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Entenasahi(Scorching Morning Sun)
Clan: Kanderi Clan(Aburu)
Description:

Entenasahi is a technique widely exhibit by the Kanderi clan many years ago. In modern times, this clan is rarely known by anyone. It is said their power was used abused by others, which led to Banshii's father changing his and his son's last name just in case someone where to recognize the clan name. This is only delaying the inevitable though, as users of this technique usually unlock it when they are teens. In the past, users of Entenasahi were used as weapons for war. The technique was powerful, but it skipped over every other generation. Bashii's grandfather could use this technique, but Bashii's father cannot. This of course means Bashii will find out soon. His father promised to reveal all to him once he unlocks this ability, and he is thought to be the last one to be able to use it.

Entenasahi is a technique that allows the user total control over heat, allowing many possibilities. Users will spend life unusually warm at all times, even while in the cold until the ability is fully unlocked and they train to control it. It is said that the ability will reveal itself once a user is near death. Complete masters of this technique are said to have been able to manipulate heat temperatures to Absolute Hot but Banshii's father and more believe this to be a myth. At it's highest form, users can even absorb the heat from objects, even humans and animals. He can only absorb half the amount of heat from objects and organic beings, able to weaken fire techniques and drop opponent body temperatures to dangerous levels. Heat can only be absorbed from two objects at a time, and must be expelled somehow before more is absorbed.

Users may be able to melt certain items through touch, or even incinerate them causing nothing to be left but ash. At the lowest level metals such as Brass and Copper can be melted, and at the highest level of control, metals such as iron or titanium can even succumb to this melting ability. Upon unlocking the KG, the user will feel something similar to an adrenaline rush, forgetting the pain of any wounds. The skin will begin to turn red and steam will rise from the body. The user's body will heat up to the point where touching others will leave serious burns. This super-heated body allows semi-immunity to fire techniques as the heat of the fire will hardly have any effect against him, while some water techniques may turn into steam before actually even touching them because of the level of heat being emitted. This lasts anywhere between 3 and 5 minutes. In the end, the user will pass out for hours, and their previous wounds will probably have become worse. If medical care isn't administered quickly, the user runs the risk of death. This also will leave the user useless for the next few days because of the foreign strain put on the body.

Users of the Entenasahi have considerably lower lifespans than most others. Living to see 65 is thought to be a miracle. Controlling techniques requires a very large amount of training, and developing control and skill takes many years. Once a user has completely mastered Entenasahi, they will be considerably formidable to any and all foes. There have been only a few, because most users do not live long enough to master such a technique.



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Clone Technique

Custom Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique: Great Salamander Fist
Type of Jutsu: Nintaijutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger, Boar
Description: With exceptional chakra control, the user creates flames around either one or both fists, to strike an opponent. A coat of chakra around the users hand prevents them from being burned.
Weakness: With Banshii's current level of control the flames disperse after one punch.

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[Gerontis]

@Torris

Sorry for the short review, but I have not a big amount of time for a big one. My excuses.

1.) Good chakra control is the limit of starting genins. Starting genins/characters of that rank are just people who got out of the Academy. Excellent chakra control is above good, thus something a starting genin can't have. At the start. (can be trained over the course of the story.)

2.) Same for the durabiltity and stamina. A genin, no matter the age or history (thus we are looking at the game balance) can have a too high stats from the start. Like the way you describe it and see not really a need to change it, but keep in mind to not go overboard. Its just a starting genin,

3.) Mind to fill in the traits?

4.) There is some need of change in the KG. It allows to be summed up :

A.) Absorbing heat.
-- That is a no because of the other traits so far. Besides, there should be a limiter on what he can absorb and how much. To balance it out.

B.) Melting touch
Though heat can indeed melt things, it depends on the material and I would rather see a limiter on it. Wouldn't want to see somebody to melt through stone/steel with ease or without any huge risks. After all, it takes a ton of just heat to melt through such hard materials.

C.) Immune to fire techniques
That is a no from me. Think that is a bit overboard with the other traits/advantages of the KG.

D.) Stronger and faster
Its based around heat and allows one to become physically stronger as faster? In my opinion that doesn't really add anything to the heat theme. Rather train that, as I am against it.

In overall, its a nice KG, but it is in need of some balancing. If you need any help with it, please contact me and we will work it out together. If you would want that. :)
Other than that, the personality, history and jutsu section are more than fine. You should probably give him the Konohagakure Earphone communicator as well. You can easily check that out on another Konoha CS. ;)

Anymore CS's to be reviewed?

[Red Fox]

@Torris
Two thumbs up from me for the fighting style - I would really love it to clash with the Gentle Fist one day. Everything looks solid to me.
However, before accepting, I noticed you left your Special Traits column empty - was that on purpose or mistake? I really recommend to fill that area in and after that, if the traits are in line, I will be glad to accept your character. Other than that, things that Gerontis said.

I iz sorry, my brain is not at its best early after waking up.

[Torris]

Thanks for the review. I will work on editing the character soon.