[OOC] Souls of Atlas

[Andre Valias]

Fiiiiiiine, if I must. ,_,

Name: Him

Gender: Guy

Age: Young

Appearance:

Cutie

Starting out with nothing, you said, so he's naked.
It's okay though. He's cute, so it doesn't matter.
BUT, if he must be clothed, then he would be wearing a navy blue jacket hoodie with white trim, and no shirt underneath, a pair of belted jeans, white socks and black-and-white shoes. Love heart apple not included.

Height: 5'7" ft

Weight: 123 lbs

Hair colour: Shimmering Black Hair with Silver Streaks.

Eye colour: Really Dark Brown.

Skin tone: Slightly Olive.

Notable features: Sexiness.

Personality: Boisterous, a little sassy and a little annoying sometimes, but enjoys amusing himself first and amusing others second. He can be really touchy-feely though sometimes too, when he finds someone who would be open to it.

Back story: File Not Found.

Fears: Spiders, Rats, Lions, Death, Semi-Scared of Heights.

Loves: Hugs, Socks, Fire, Chocolate, Reading, Writing, Drawing, Blue, White, Blue-and-White Together.

I have read and accept the terms and conditions. Yes [:3] No [ ]

Not my best CS ever, I'm sorry. ;A;

[WrensthavAviovus]

ok who posts first?

[Xiga]

I shall post today about my characters awakening :D

[Estylwen]

Come on, guys. Still no IC posts? You're over-thinking it, I'm not expecting too much from first posts. Do we need an order of posts? Cuz anyone can post right now. I could line us up, but I'm not sure how far anyone is on their writing. XD

Xiga, you get a cookie.

Andre, your Charrie is perfect. I'll add him in soon. Love the shimmering hair, by the way. :3

[Andre Valias]

Estylwen said
Come on, guys. Still no IC posts? You're over-thinking it, I'm not expecting too much from first posts. Do we need an order of posts? Cuz anyone can post right now. I could line us up, but I'm not sure how far anyone is on their writing. XD Xiga, you get a cookie. Andre, your Charrie is perfect. I'll add him in soon. Love the shimmering hair, by the way. :3

<3
Will make up an IC Post soon, hopefully~

[Andre Valias]

Oh, well. Uhm. There you go, done. :D

[Xiga]

Actually; Im heading to Malta tomorrow, for 5 days,so no internet connection for me. So.... Should I post now, or should I wait till i come back?
(gonna try to contact GM on other than this ways)

[Andre Valias]

Xiga said
Actually; Im heading to Malta tomorrow, for 5 days,so no internet connection for me. So.... Should I post now, or should I wait till i come back?(gonna try to contact GM on other than this ways)

Well, at this rate, me thinks it would be better to get a post in now. But me dunno much else. D:

[Estylwen]

Xiga said
Actually; Im heading to Malta tomorrow, for 5 days,so no internet connection for me. So.... Should I post now, or should I wait till i come back?(gonna try to contact GM on other than this ways)

What Andre said. Try to get in one post before you go, just to get the ball rolling. You can catch up when you get back, but I suspect you wont miss much. :)

EDIT: Andre, excellent first post! I liked it. Though I should have mentioned that soul-bodies cannot be punctured or bruised. Mortal bodies damage like that, but your souls do not. It's your advantage. Right now you feel exhausted and cold, despite being in a burning hot crater. Tired, woozy, a little sore from the landing, but not physically harmed. ^^

[Andre Valias]

Estylwen said
What Andre said. Try to get in one post before you go, just to get the ball rolling. You can catch up when you get back, but I suspect you wont miss much. :)EDIT: Andre, excellent first post! I liked it. Though I should have mentioned that soul-bodies cannot be punctured or bruised. Mortal bodies damage like that, but your souls do not. It's your advantage. Right now you feel exhausted and cold, despite being in a burning hot crater. Tired, woozy, a little sore from the landing, but not physically harmed. ^^

I figured I would miss something like that, I'll edit it now. <3

[Nytem4re]

Name:
N/A

Gender:
Male

Age:
Appears to be Middle to late twenties.

Appearance:
He's tall, but is very thin. He’s not bony per se, but seems like he’s been on a diet for a while… or gone a few days without food. As for his clothes, they’re nothing special. Outdoor boots, jeans, and an olive drab shirt.

Height:
Six Feet Tall. A bit taller than the average male would be.

Weight:
One Hundred and Forty-Four Pounds.

Hair colour:
Black hair with a few graying areas. Pretty strange for someone of his age.

Eye colour:
His irises appear to be green in color.

Skin tone:
If one took a look, they could plainly see that it is white, but they would also see that it’s beginning to tan.

Notable features:
Has a severe burn scar that runs across his arm, very noticeable as of now as he’s wearing a short sleeve shirt.

Personality:
This man can end up saying the wrong thing at the wrong time, but he generally doesn’t mean to harm anyone by his words, and when he does it’s plainly obvious. Subtlety is not a word in his dictionary, and he acts accordingly. If he doesn’t like someone, he’ll go up to them and personally tell them that he does and why. He calls things as he sees it… but will grow quiet in the face of criticism, or looks of disgust, as he hates it when people stare too long at him, especially because of his scar, which even he admits is not very pretty.

Back story: [[n/a]]

Fears:
Has a fear of being burned. He doesn’t know why, just does. As such, he avoids flames whenever possible. He will however, in a dire situation, allow himself near a fire if the circumstances require it to be so. He also has a fear of heights.

Loves:
While not a social outcast, he does enjoy peace and quiet from time to time. Loves the sea a great deal, so he likes to swim or boat.

I have read and accept the terms and conditions. Yes [X] No [ ]

writing sample

“My name is Pyotr Nikolai. Thirty-Three years of age, Serial code 040147. My name is Pyotr Nikolai. Thirty-Three years of age, Serial code 040147. My name is Pyotr Nikolai-” The man repeated these words as a mantra, the only words Pyotr had allowed his captors to hear, as he was imprisoned god knows where. He carved another tally mark into the wall with one of his fingernails. If he hadn't lost track of time, it should have been one year, one day, fifty-two minutes, and 33 seconds since the moment he had been captured.

And of course, he was tortured to no end. Geneva Convention my ass. It was just another piece of paper the bureaucrats signed, as people like to believe their government keeps their word just because they “swore” to it on paper. Sometimes his captors would go with the classic waterboarding everyone hears about. Sometimes they’d take his clothes away and throw him in a cell that was extremely cold, and throw cold water on him to add insult to injury. Or they’d simply punch him in the abdomen, perhaps out of anger.

Pyotr didn’t even know why he was here. It was barely a year and he’d almost forgotten his past life. From conversations he heard outside his cell from time to time, they’d said he was a tough one to crack, probably intent to keep his secrets to the death. They’d break him someday.

Problem was, he didn’t even know any secrets. He’d screamed out several times that he knew nothing. His captors took that as a sign of defiance rather than genuine fear.

What could he say? It was a year of pleading, that fell on empty ears. Pyotr tensed as his cell door opened. It was right on time, as always. Did it matter anymore? He could do nothing. Pyotr wasn’t James Bond, he was some janitor at some small town college.

Maybe they’d let him go after a few years of this, and see he was truly innocent.

---

Today would be the last day of the torture.

His captors decided that they simply hold him at gunpoint. Pyotr Nikolai wasn’t talking, so they’d grant him one more chance. Tell them everything, or die. That surely would get him to talk. Hold him down to the ground, shoot a few rounds near his head to scare him into submission.

If he still denied everything, they’d kept him here long enough. If he wished to take his secrets to the grave, so be it. They’d have someone else that they could torture to find out what exactly he was hiding anyway.

Writing sample is a bit long, but that's something from one of my rp's before the guildfall.

I am also Dlayeth's friend, so hello to everyone. I hope my writing is something you're looking for, but if not, I'll just let myself out, haha.

[Estylwen]

Nytem4re, thanks for the submission! Dlayeth told us you were coming. Lovely character and an amazing sample. The dark twist at the end was dynamite. I'm very excited to RP with you, welcome on board. :)

Andre, I appreciate the edit, thank you. ^3^

Wrensthav, excellent first post! :3 You don't need to edit it, but for future note, typically you refer to your charrie in third person. And to differentiate thoughts better, rule of thumb is to italicize them, and then you can refer in first person.

[Andre Valias]

[WrensthavAviovus]

Estylwen said
excellent first post! :3 You don't need to edit it, but for future note, typically you refer to your charrie in third person. And to differentiate thoughts better, rule of thumb is to italicize them, and then you can refer in first person.

Ahh ok i should have asked what narrative point we were using with our characters. I assumed 1st since there are so many participating.

[Dlayeth]

Why first with more characters?
Wouldn't that make it more confusing?

Third person gives the names etc of the character.

[Xiga]

I apologize for not posting earlier. I posted that message as I had 3 hours left before going to the airport, and then I had to fix my travel music so I never got around to do so x.x

I realize I might be delaying the roleplay by failing to post at my given time, so if you want me out, I understand. Happy role playing anyway!!!!!!

[Andre Valias]

Its okay, we can just poke the sleepy head until she gets back, right?

[Dlayeth]

Well, perhaps the travel hit her soul harder than expected, or she's not as good moving around, so it takes her longer to come around.

[Estylwen]

It's all good, Wrens. Mistakes are totally fine. XD

So who's posting next? ^_^

Xiga said
I apologize for not posting earlier. I posted that message as I had 3 hours left before going to the airport, and then I had to fix my travel music so I never got around to do so x.x I realize I might be delaying the roleplay by failing to post at my given time, so if you want me out, I understand. Happy role playing anyway!!!!!!

No need to worry, Xiga. What Dlay said (and Andre said rather eloquently), maybe you're slower coming around. I'll give you a few more days to post, but I want to wait for ya man.

[Xiga]

Im still in malta though . Ill be home on sunday :(