[OOC] Souls of Atlas

[Estylwen]

Hey Demon, thanks for the submission. There are a few grammatical errors with it. In my opinion, sarxasm is one of the weaker emotions, your character won't have much dynamics until he breaks and shows true feeling.

For your writing sample, it's not quite what I was looking for. Having everything in one big block doesn't read as easy as spaced paragraphs. Haha, I'm like a bickering critic, sorry. Unfortunately I don't think this RP is the best match for you. I'll let you know if we have something ready later, but right now I can't accept your CS.

Xiga said
Name: [[n/a]]
Gender: Female
Age: Young adult
--Notable features: Her golden eyes, that seem to almost pierce through another person when looked at. Her hair is worn as dreadlocks and her style is.. very earthly and she likes face paintings and decorating her dreads with feathers and cloth.
Personality: Stubborn, gruff, not at all lady like. She comes off as threatening and kind of mean, however she's really just a softy once a person gets to know her. She is loyal to those she trusts but most often sly and sneaky in her ways.

Hi Xiga, lovely CS. You've created an interesting charrie. Gold isn't quite natural, but I don't mind. Your personality made me chuckle. XD I'll add it to the list soon.

[Andre Valias]

Hnguuuuuuh, need... To... Character Sheet... Guuuuuuh.

Okay, I'll work on it tomorrow, if that's okay? So much to do! D:

Foooorgiiiive meeeeh. ,_,

[Dlayeth]

Oh yes, can you guess what my character was in her past life? And do you think it shows enough of her "self"?

[Estylwen]

Dlay: Here is what I deduce from your character. She's a drug addict prostitute who had an abusive childhood, mainly from men she depended on. I also believe she's 18 due to her rough hair style. Am I wrong?

Oh yes, I totally got a good feel of your charrie from the CS. The perfect amount of confusion and things. :)

Andre: Can't wait to see that charrie, darlin'~ x3

[Dlayeth]

She's drinking age :P

She mentions that, though she doesn't know what drinking age is. Oh right, US drinking age is 21. Oh well, she's somewhere in that area. 18-21 :P
It's not like she'll remember dates much.

And I'm glad that much carried through haha. I wondered if the clothing was enough a hint or if I might have to hint a bit harder :P

So yes, abusive childhood, multiple rapes when she became a prostitute, and ofc, because prostitution is illegal, she'd be tossed in jail by police, who probably wouldn't give a shit about her or her past. And as a prostitute and rape victim, she can't go to the police, because they'd never believe her :P

A prostitute getting raped? Pfft, you probably asked for it.

And I'm very glad she was carried through well, I wasn't sure how well she'd be received because things clear to me might not be clear to others.

[Xiga]

Gold, as itself isnt a natural color, but both Amber eyes, and some Hazel eyes with brownish tints look golden, especially in certain lights, and in contrast with skincolor :>
So thats what I meant when I say Gold

Examplesssss :>

[DogDemon67]

Alrighty~ well thanks for telling me what I can improve on! :D I appreciate that, since now I can work on making myself better. I wish you all the best of fun in this rp :3

[Estylwen]

Everyone: Just waiting for a few more people (Andre, Wrens, other people), then we'll get this RP started, eh?

Xiga: Ah, now I understand the type of gold you were talking about, thanks. xD

DogDemon67 said
Alrighty~ well thanks for telling me what I can improve on! :D I appreciate that, since now I can work on making myself better. I wish you all the best of fun in this rp :3

Of course, good luck to you man. :)

Dlayeth said
She's drinking age :PShe mentions that, though she doesn't know what drinking age is. Oh right, US drinking age is 21. Oh well, she's somewhere in that area. 18-21 :P So yes, abusive childhood, multiple rapes... I wasn't sure how well she'd be received because things clear to me might not be clear to others.

Darn, I should have taken location into more consideration. Where I live, the age is 18. :p Oh yeah, Dlay. Real clear. -w-

[Dlayeth]

Heh, sorry, but her exact age doesn't matter, so there's at least that. :P

My sentences are so fragmented, even I wonder what I was trying to say sometimes. Heh.

[WrensthavAviovus]

I'll go with the old windbag for this one. Its been a while since he has had a chance to walk around.

[Estylwen]

Dlay: No such thing as too fragmented! ...But I'm bad at that too. XD

Wrensthav: Excellent choice! I'll add him to the list in just a minute. =w=

[Dlayeth]

Lol, I'm sure there *is* such a thing as too fragmented.

Well, at least I'm not alone in that XD.

[Dlayeth]

Forgot my charger, it'll be 2 days before I'll have it back. Like... Friday is when I get it back. So.... I won't be around much.

[Estylwen]

Alright, Dlay. Unfortunately you probably won't be missing much. XD We need Andre's Cs, then we can start.

[Dlayeth]

Okie, I also invited someone else to join, he may or may not show up. Much to my amusement, we actually think too much alike when it comes to combat.

He says he'll have a CS up this weekend.

[Xiga]

So... whats happening?

[Dlayeth]

waiting for 1 or 2 cs-es

[Estylwen]

Nah, let's get this party started. Andre and Dlay's friend still have time to submit CSs while we start everyone's first post. There's not really an order of posts we need. Posting back and forth between two people is allowed a few times (especially if you're fighting), then someone else needs to post. We'll try and make it all the way around the circle for the most part, though. And if anyone falls too far behind, I'll help ya out.

Ready to explore Atlas? :3

[Dlayeth]

Sure.

[Xiga]

Hells yeah!