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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by ImportantNobody
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Now you tell me. (insert crying face here)
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Either way she gets a busted leg...
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Sorry my post was a little more lame than normal, but it's the best I could come up with.
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Wait, I thought I posted...dammit.
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Wait, I thought I posted...dammit.
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Fun with playing Niks in the Arena without his suits is playing dirty.
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I'm kind of at a loss as to how I should reply. There isn't much detail in your defense, so I'd have to make something up about your character and some aspect of her actions pretty much no matter what I do. Things like the exact position of the sword (which could be the difference between her losing a hand and him losing a head). I'm also not sure how the sword got there fast enough, since it would have had to come from the other side of his right arm and cover twice the distance that the baton had to (or more).

Any input you've got would be very helpful.
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She's had a post or two (maybe just one?) of not using her sword, so could have easily covered the distance during this time. Her block is vertical with the point going upwards, likely close to her body due to his attack coming in close.
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Ok, thanks for clearing that up. :)
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The Final Showdown, eh?

Let me tell you one thing: When the Trickster smiles. Beware.

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Alright. Posted.

Also, a small note. While Aurelia isn't sure whether or not she overdid it, I can safely say that Evvie wouldn't die even from a point-blank hit of that. She may be weak towards magic, but it was uncontrolled and with no real purpose aside from a direction, and Aurelia isn't one for powerful magical blasts like that.

Chance of survival - 100%

Chance of Losing consciousness (if hit square in the face) - 70% I'd say.

If you have any issues with what happened, just tell me. The ending I wrote kinda hinges on the fact that it hit, but given the fact that she unleashed it before they met each other, and at such a close range, I feel that it's fair to say she didn't get out of it in time, which is what gives Aurelia the time to think all that stuff and feel worry: She's pretty sure she has won, so she now feels sorry for her opponent rather than determination to win.
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Err...for some reason I think I'm too sensitive to describe the damage to poor Ryomi at the moment...
Maybe I'll just be intentionally vague on that aspect but that's what happened. I tend to stick to more fantasy violence of "I sliced him and he fell down" sort of thing.
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Oh... uh, sorry. I tend to go into details that are perhaps a bit too graphic (depending on the audience), due both to the fact that it doesn't bother me personally and that I like to be as accurate as possible. But simple descriptions are absolutely fine with me if you're uncomfortable with more detailed graphic ones. And I apologize if my own descriptions are too much. Just let me know if that's the case and I'll tone it down.
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It's good to keep with realism for the fight, even if it's mangling, but I'll just stick to the less graphic descriptions of the realistic outcomes. What you posted was fine. I'll just try not to picture it...(pictures it anyways)...*shivers
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Btw, Lin's air bomb is full concussion blast, right?
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Alphakoka said
Btw, Lin's air bomb is full concussion blast, right?


Yes. If other objects got within the blast they would be flung around dangerously, but in this case it was just in the air without much debries to pick up.
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Right, I'll try to post tomorrow.
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So kapuchu, with our battle done I'm assuming we could just leave the rest of what happened there open ended. Schradinger can do a conclusion post from your character's point of if you'd like.
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I would prefer to write my own character's conclusion as she's a tricky one to write.
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PS: orb effect is blurred vision.
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