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Hi, I'm a friend of Unlucky Knight. My genin is on the way, so don't worry.

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Would the Storm Release Kekkei Genkai be alright?
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Referring to rule 4..

4. Use common sense and make your character as strong as a character of his level would be.
Nothing to add here, this should make sense to you.


.. if you can make it work? Heck yeah! Why not? Reasonable use of his powers and skill with the release is more important than the actual release itself in general, unless the release is so broken that we just say no outright no matter how well it's written. Just keep in mind that he'll probably be a genin and therfore not spew out laserbeams from his mouth every times he opens it :P
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Good to know. I was just worried that rule 6 might be a problem (even though it only mentions Sharingan. Although I had assumed that was only an example). Just wanted to check first
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That's fine, and it's appreciated that you did. It's a sort of general thing, like if everyone has storm release, it won't be much fun, but mostly this problem is usually with Sharingan. I'm gonna sleep now, finish my genin tomorrow.
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Because there's only two Storm Release jutsu's, I'm going to to take a few creative liberties with how this chakra nature works. Since the wiki states that Storm Release is 'electricity which flow like water', I'm going to be working off of that


Since he doesn't carry any kind of weapon, I'm not sure what to put under 'Backpack, stocked with supplies'. What do you think of the rest?
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Fancy. Color me curious.
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Scio said
Fancy. Color me curious.


/me colors Scio curious. What colour is that?

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Because there's only two Storm Release jutsu's, I'm going to to take a few creative liberties with how this chakra nature works. Since the wiki states that Storm Release is 'electricity which flow like water', I'm going to be working off of thatSince he doesn't carry any kind of weapon, I'm not sure what to put under 'Backpack, stocked with supplies'. What do you think of the rest?


I got a few pointers. First off, I don't really know the whole ordeal with Storm release as I only saw it in the anime a few times and not much was explained about it so I used the wiki and you were right.. creative liberties were in place here haha. So the fact that notable users were Kumogakure shinobi (which were unrelated by blood) means that it's possible that your clan died out and other people wanting to join could have this release and have the jutsu for it because apparently anyone can have this release as long as they meet certain unknown prerequisites.

That aside you messed up the URLs for the jutsu. Don't worry I did that a million times, just put [url= before what you have right now.
As for the techniques being D rank... I can see that. But that also means that they likely won't be as powerful as when someone who is much stronger than him would use him. For instance the water bullet would be less powerful than what powerful characters have shown in the anime. Not really a problem but keep that in mind. Imagine the difference between a raikiri from Kakashi, and then imagine it from a young Sasuke. The difference would be pretty big.

Well as for the backpack, kunai and shuriken are counted under basic tools and amenities so basically you don't have to put them there. If you feel it's too empty you could put them there. If you don't want him to have any weapons whatsoever save kunai, shuriken and explosive tags etc (basic stuff) then just remove it like you did. Nothing to worry about.

All in all it's a good, solid character.
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- CONFIDENTIAL -

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Personal files.
Name: Kyouka Hasegawa
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Village: Yukigakire
Birthplace: Unknown

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Known outfits and mugshots.

Appearance:


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Personal info, to be kept in the archives and never taken out.

Known history and secrets:
Kyou's Father needles to say, does not entirely speak of the past nor what happened to her mother. At a young age of 5, her Father would involve her in business matters, a merchant to be exact, together the father and daughter would travel to other countries such as Suna and sell goods and products. As a commoner of Yukigakure, Kyou aspires to be a splendid Kunoichi to honor her Father and partly to find answers, however; it was the opposite, her Father was reluctant of her being one, she was given two choices, if she doesn't make any progress within a year, she must give up and continue the family business but if she succeeds, she is free to continue and pursue her life as a ninja(She succeeded becoming a full fledged Genin, however). She attended the ninja academy at the age 7 after eavesdropping from her Father's conversation with a close relative, Kyou took her training seriously ever since. Now, an adventure awaits for the young Kunoichi.

Personality:
Kyouka usually has an energetic personality like a walking battery, excited and fired up. She is good at negotiating, thanks to being brought to business with her Father. Apart from her workaholic like energy,she strives for perfection and excellence which is one of the causes of her mild cocky attitude and inconsideration however; she is still kind to her peers and makes up for her misdeeds. When it comes to people her age, she is a bit shy and resorts to a mean fashion of expressing herself thus the latter gets her int fights. She easily gets angered when things don't go her way and will do anything to get what she wants. Kyou can be at her best if she thinks things through than acting first. She's a pretty bad liar as well, not wanting to admit her faults and is prone to naïveté when not having a full proof counter/resolve. In battle her fighting style is deceit which comes out as a disgrace; this is an aspect that fits her business persona where she uses tricks to bribe a client.

Clan: N/A
Dreams and aspirations:
kyou's desires are either planned or claimed by opportunity. The personal ones are finding answers about her Mother. The major ones is to be a splendid Kunoichi and give her all to she does best. She's finding herself and painting her own canvas to dictate her own path not given by her father nor anyone else.

General strengths:
The Ninja Mindset; it's all about deceit and smarts to get the job done which plays a major aspect to her fighting style and ideals.
The swords woman. Currently one of her prized assets, she practiced wielding a wooden sword four months before Genin promotion. She is still a novice at it.
Capable at performing genjutsu.

General weaknesses:
She is so self centered that it's all about "me" and this strucks up a fatal flaw when it comes to teamwork or not. Teamwork or not, she is blindly selfish enough to assist her needs and get people to do things her way. A perfect example is doing things on her own. Recklessness can get her killed.

Jerk has a point; she's not too empathic; her lack of consideration sometimes can lead to downing her peers instead of cheering them up, she is frank and awfully honest. This can even come straight out rude and disrespectful which in return became a habit. Worst comes to worst, it adds up to her arrogance, it comes closer to superiority complex.

While she has a good body built; she lacks proper chakra control.

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Combat information analyzed by the village researchers.

Known chakra natures: Fire
Kekkei Genkei: none
Jutsu's that (s)he has shown capable of using:
Jutsu: Subsituition Jutsu, generally the act of body replacement to deceive the enemy.
Jutsu: Henge no Jutsu; transforming into a henge/impersonate someone.
Jutsu: Great Fireball
Self created jutsu's: None for now.

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Backpack, stocked with supplies.

Shown weapons: basic weapons like Kunai etc.

Special items, keepsakes, necklaces or amulets: her Mother's sword(based on pic).
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Just wondering, but aren't Genin who are able to use elemental jutsus, like considered to be high-tier among their rank?
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I wonder that too.
Gaara has sand.
Sauce has fire/lightning.
Naruto had none but is still high tier.
Neji had no element but is still high tier.

Then Storm Release boy is a high tier?
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I think so, since you'd need a ton of chakra to perform those jutsus.

Actually, any Genin who can use elemental jutsus since it wasn't that common.
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Being able to use a jutsu =/= mastery. An Uchiha is considered high tier for it's class. None the less, any Uchiha genin would likely get his bowels kicked out of him by a chuunin. Unless you play some form of a prodigy.

But yeah, all in all, a genin with elemental jutsus available is probably quite strong or misses a lot of the basics a shinobi would have.

Kyouka seems like a walking paradox.. which I like. She's well balanced so Kyouka is in. In case I missed it, Shinka is in as well.
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I think so, since you'd need a ton of chakra to perform those jutsus.Actually, any Genin who can use elemental jutsus since it wasn't that common.


Shinka is a ninjutsu specialist. He focused most of his training on improving his chakra control and capacity. Because of this, he's sub par at everything else. Think of him as a ninjutsu version of Lee.
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That's what the strengths and weaknesses are for, in it's essence. Also the reason you need to kinda balance it - a character with superb chakra control, Naruto-size chakra levels and a kekkei genkai will simply not be good. Even if he got accepted, he'd just be a bad character story wise.
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He doesn't have Naruto level charka capacity. I don't think that's possible without some kind of special Kekkei Genkai or being a Jinchurikin since the day you were born. I'd say that at most, Shinka has Chunin levels of chakra. As for chakra control; well, Sakura had good enough chakra control to complete the tree climbing exorcise in one try, despite the fact that we hadn't seen any indication that she had put any significant work into her chakra control. Am I saying that he's at Sakura's level? No. I'm just listing a cannon example of insane chakra control from someone without any kind of special power
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No, good sir. :P I wasn't talking about you, I was talking in general. Sorry for the confusion.
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