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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Kafka Komedy
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Savo and Tearstone have yet to report in.
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Yeah, Tear hasn't posted their CS yet. In fact, my team hasn't been very much active at all... Psst, that's your cue guys!
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Yea. I'm giving Savo some time to get his first post in before replying. If he is even out there.
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Saw Tearstone over at the Interest Check, guess he must have gotten shot and hospitalized.
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He looked into the eyes of Kuhaku, which Gren had referred to as Shiro. From what Abel had heard, it was his last name, but the idea of someone preferring to be called by last name was not alien to him.


Kuhaku Shiro is a Japanese name and while I can't speak for Hari this means that most likely Kuhaku is his surname and Shiro his given name. Calling people by there surname in Japanese culture is not uncommon but is generally reserved for close friends and family members.

Not that I'm asking you to change anything, that is a mistake that very likely would be made by the characters in the RP, just reporting data.
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Well Gren is his partner. That's pretty close.
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Hmm, I just realized that I use the pronoun "he" a lot. I'll try to do that less often in my next post.
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That is exactly how it is. Abel just isn't aware of such customs.
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Hmm, I just realized that I use the pronoun "he" a lot. I'll try to do that less often in my next post.
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Well Gren is his partner. That's pretty close.
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Not that he'll ever remember their first encounter. Each 'reset' and everyone becomes someone new to him! Bwahahahaha! I'm leaving some memories irreparable and others able to be restored. Because I fucking can and want to. xD
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Yeah, Gren is going to fi d a way to fix that. Like some sort of memory chip or something.
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Yeah, Gren is going to fi d a way to fix that. Like some sort of memory chip or something.
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Tiger boy may be fond of technology and weapons, but he's not going to like artificial parts implanted into him. Anyways, I'll be posting soon.
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Hmm, I just realized that I use the pronoun "he" a lot. I'll try to do that less often in my next post.
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Man, just use name's more often, read the sentence over, and if you think it'd be hard to discern who you're referring to when you use the gender pronoun, then insert the name instead. It may look or sound repetitive to you, but it helps the reader understand so much better that way. Just don't go overboard on it, lol. I never use the name of the individuals more than 2 times, 3 if I'm pushing it on the length of the sentence. It's more spacing than it is using a word multiple times. If the same word or name is used close together, it's always going to sound repetitive, but if you space it between pronouns and other words, then it'll do what it's meant to be doin' and identifying who the hell you be talkin' bout. I don't know. Does it sound like I'm making sense or am I just spoutin' bullshit? I'm probably spoutin' bullshit. Ignore this~ Slap me because I am trash. Trassssshhhhh. Also, fuck Worcestershire sauce because it's so fucking delicious and I just wanna drink it, but I didn't buy it, so I can't. Fuck.
Yeah, Gren is going to fi d a way to fix that. Like some sort of memory chip or something.
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Tiger boy may be fond of technology and weapons, but he's not going to like artificial parts implanted into him. Anyways, I'll be posting soon.
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Just get him drunk enough to where he'll say yes because that's the same thing as if he were sober, right? Too soon? I'm a fucking terrible person. I'm sorry. That's not even funny. >_> Screw me.
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Slap me because I am trash. Trassssshhhhh. Also, fuck me. Fuck. I'm a fucking person. Screw me.
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Righto buckeroo.
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Team Rampaged, please be aware that right now the time is in fact still the evening after the ceremony. The cafeteria wouldn't reasonably be open except for a small do-it-yourself line, and there certainly wouldn't be very many people.
Here's a bit more about my current plan.
As a rule, I'd like people to wrap up whatever they're working on and get to bed. I want to get into the RP pretty quickly; I would not expect this night to last past page 6 IC. Once morning rolls around, there will be a few minutes for people to do their own thing before the first bells right, and everybody (yes, all present teams) move off to their first class. I have a very special event in the works, but for now all I'm going to say is the name of the game: conference.
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Trash posted. Hack and butcher me apart, but know I tried to make it as confusing and yet as readable as I could.
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It works.
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It works.
Sweet. That's all I needed.
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Well Gren is his partner. That's pretty close.


No I don't think you understand. In Japan the last name is stated first. So in Kuhaku Shiro, Kuhaku is his family name while Shiro is his given name. Not that it is really relevant either way I just thought I'd tell you.
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Yeah I know. Admittedly I wasn't sure which order Kuhaku is, but Gren calls him Shiro nonetheless.
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Yeah I know. Admittedly I wasn't sure which order Kuhaku is, but Gren calls him Shiro nonetheless.
Which order?
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