[OOC] RWBY - Downfall

[Sagittarius]

Long collab post is long

@Raijinslayer

No kidding?!

[datadogie]

Blame him for that. xD

[Raijinslayer]

Sorry, but at least it's a good read, right?

[datadogie]

Should I just post this with a short closing post, can't think of much to write.

@Raijinslayer

Just leaving that there. Heh.

[Raijinslayer]

That closer was short. . . compared to what I wanted to post.

[Dragonite777]

Sorry, but at least it's a good read, right?

@Raijinslayer

It was indeed a good read. I'll probably just post soon. I was trying to wait on Fey, but I haven't heard anything.

[Dragonite777]

Well, I'll at least make a Roman post, lol. Delivery has arived. With Roman's present wrapped

[NeloAngelo]

Hmmm, this seems interesting. And I do love myself some RWBY >.> <.< *Works on a CS*

[Dragonite777]

@NeloAngelo me too. Binge watched the both volumes. Now hopelessly waiting for more 0_@

[Raijinslayer]

@gamer5910 If I can give some constructive criticism on your guy, I think you should fix up his weapon a bit. To go from a handgun to sniper rifle to sub-machine gun is a lot farfetched considering how big sniper rifles have to be to function, also I think you should only stick to one gun, since in the show you never see a weapon with two different gun types, and for good reason, as every type of gun uses different ammunition, and so your weapon would also be impossible to use given the vast difference between all the weapons.

The next thing is you sembalance, which is rather against the flow of Sembalances in the show and this RP. In the show, Sembalances are supplememtary to the fighting style of each character(Yang getting stronger with every hit, Ruby's speed, Blake's Clones, Weiss's Glyphs), as is the same for this RP as far as the characters we have. So if you want to have you guy use dust, then just have him go with the Dust in clothing method, it's awesome, effective, and makes you look like a total badass when your clothes start to glow.(1/1 Cinders agree with this statement)

I suggest that your guy use a handgun mixed with shortswords or SMG's mixed with daggers. I really don't see why you added Sniper Rifle, as it contrasts heavily with his fighting style of quick and light attacks. As for a Sembalance, how about Dust enhancement, making his use of Dust more effective than normal, or a sigil thing similar to Weiss's sembalance. Just my thoughts on the matter, do with it as you will.

[Dragonite777]

@Raijinslayer hm... Sorry, I had accepted it over PM. I guess I'm kinda braindead from school, and I didn't really think of cannon. Or physics. Or ballistics.

[Raijinslayer]

No need to apologuze to me, at the end of the day, it's your rodeo, man, Just wanted give him my 2 cents is all.

[Dragonite777]

@Raijinslayer yeah, but I've been kinda trying to stick to RWBY-verse logic at least.

[Raijinslayer]

As is best, just talk with the guy and I'm sure there'll be no problems with making a few changes, albeit major ones.

[Dragonite777]

Yeah. Just sent a PM asking for some fixes, giving suggestions as well

[Suku]

hello is this still accepting because if so I would like to join if possible

[Dragonite777]

Yep. Still accepting. We're also kind of at a standstil, so any addition is welcome.

[Raijinslayer]

@Dragonite777I feel like I'm to blame for that. I hit a wall, than kinda forgot. I'll get a Butcher post up soon. Again, I'm real sorry for forgetting about this.

[Dragonite777]

Nah, man. I think everyone kinda forgot. No worries

[GingerBoi123]

I still here!