It's growing to be as big as the original again...
And why not just give him sci-fi tech from some weird-ass interdimensional place. Simply lasers and whatnot, instead of herpderp time and space manipulation? Alternatively, use some creativity and make a character that isn't just rehashed Add~
"Kekekeke... Madness isn't so bad, all you have to do is let loose, relax a little. I promise, it all will slip away."
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human/Youkai
Height: 180 cm (5ft 10 in)
Weight: 59 kg (130 lb)
Blood Type: B-
Birthday: January 2nd
Alignment: Shifts from Chaotic Neutral to Neutral Good
Aliases/Titles: Diabolic Esper
Personality: Best described as stably unstable, he was never very sane to begin with, but due to his fusion with a youkai's power he is on the edge of outright insanity. Despite this, he is completely in control of his insanity, and fine with it. Although, his personality sometimes takes radical shifts for little to no reason. He does obsess a little over technology and has a tendency to go on a rampage during battle destroying anything and everything. Underneath the madness, he is actually a nice guy with a good and dry sense of humor, if a little anti-social.
He likes sweets and music.
Bio: As a kid, Zane always was a little crazy, like mad scientist crazy. This never changed as he got older. He is a genius with technology, by ten he had dismantled his computers and put them together, better than before. He always felt uncomfortable around people, which drove him to technology. He never knew his parents, he was raised by a foster father, who was very kind and good to him, like a real father. His foster father always treated him well; his kindness left a lasting impression on Zane and helped to reduce his 'crazy'. But, when he was sixteen, during a routine shopping trip that ended in a surprise eat-out dinner from his father to him, they where attacked by a powerful Youkai, although he had no idea at the time. He watched, helpless as it killed many people and his father, before dragging him to the Crimson Sky. Under that blood red sky, his power awakened, and his rage and madness burst forth, destroying the Youkai. But something went wrong, the remains of it's power enveloped Zane and fused with him. Mad, and completely out of his mind, he wandered the Crimson Sky for a long time, almost three years. He remembers little of this time. Eventualy his sanity (sort of) returned and he found himself in the ruins of some vast city, filled with amazing technology. He got a hold of some that worked and from there he designed and built his Dynamos and TechArmor. During this time, he also worked out his powers. Soon he tried to figure out a way to escape, and using his powers and the technology, he was able to. However, when he got back, he realized that many years had passed in the other world.
Powers: Energy- His power is to generate and to manipulate large amounts of energy. Energy generated by him looks like purple lightning, but is oddly silent. The Youkai power made his energy so powerful and he generates so much that it overflows and can manifest in destructive ways if he doesn't expend it constantly.
Skills: Spatial Distortion- His power, boosted by youkai energy and focused by his dynamos is so powerful, it is able to warp space, to what extent is unknown, as he has had no reason to push himself. He is able to teleport himself and others, generate barriers, open portals, make pocket dimensions he can put various items in and at an extreme, cause a small, temporary black hole.
Weapons: Dynamos- Highly mobile drones of his own design, made with technology he found in the other world. They are bladed and conduct his energy, and able to weaponize it in various forms. They can also be configured to form just about anything he needs (although they are only so big) from a powerful plasma cannon to a high tech skateboard.
Equipment: TechArmor- Made of the same technology as his dynamos, this functions as a powerful defense and an conductor for his energy. He made it to provide an outlet for his energy, and slow it's build up. It is able to shrink into the jewel on his chest, but only for a limited time.
Other: Various tools he keeps in a pocket dimension. Some scraps and parts of various machines and tech, found and brought over by him.
It's growing to be as big as the original again...
And why not just give him sci-fi tech from some weird-ass interdimensional place. Simply lasers and whatnot, instead of herpderp time and space manipulation? Alternatively, use some creativity and make a character that isn't just rehashed Add~
:P the joke is he is the Add to KoL's Eve, I wouldn't take away from that.
:P the joke is he is the Add to KoL's Eve, I wouldn't take away from that.
I'll see what I can do about a suggestion to Zane, later. I like him, but it's still a fact that he's kind OP.
Since I'll be doing some editing of Eos' powers to move her a bit away from being a clone of Eve (mainly, I think of dropping the drones in favor of innate powers), maybe doing some changes to Zane won't be too bad also.
I'll see what I can do about a suggestion to Zane, later. I like him, but it's still a fact that he's kind OP.
Since I'll be doing some editing of Eos' powers to move her a bit away from being a clone of Eve (mainly, I think of dropping the drones in favor of innate powers), maybe doing some changes to Zane won't be too bad also.
He is not terranly Op I mean we have an immortal that could one shot almost everybody He would eccel in mid to long range combat, but would be comparatively vulnerable up close.
Plus, he is mad and self centered, so he wont be any sort of a Sue.
He is not terranly Op I mean we have an immortal that could one shot almost everybody He would eccel in mid to long range combat, but would be comparatively vulnerable up close.
Plus, he is mad and self centered, so he wont be any sort of a Sue.
I do know, I trust you on that, but maybe a bit of change could breath new air on an old concept, don't you think?
He is not terranly Op I mean we have an immortal that could one shot almost everybody He would eccel in mid to long range combat, but would be comparatively vulnerable up close.
Plus, he is mad and self centered, so he wont be any sort of a Sue.
An immortal who's immortality doesn't activate until he suffers a mortal injury, and who basically has to rely on peak human speed to approach people and punch them out...compared to someone who can control time and space, skateboard around, and use plasma cannons.
It's like saying that someone with a knife is overpowered because they can oneshot any other human with a knife. XD
An immortal who's immortality doesn't activate until he suffers a mortal injury, and who basically has to rely on peak human speed to approach people and punch them out...compared to someone who can control time and space, skateboard around, and use plasma cannons.
It's like saying that someone with a knife is overpowered because they can oneshot any other human with a knife. XD
Fyi, the time powers were removed.
Edit: @KoL You know that I took out his time powers right?
@TheFake I'm curious. Think Rui-Ling would know of Sheridan? Seeing how the both of them are basically undead kiddos who do things related to souls? They could bitch about the younger generation together, while eating a fancy meal that neither of them actually need~
