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@Natsu Only thing I have to note is that you wrote Memory "Munipulation" instead of Manipulation. lol

Otherwise, the power is fine.

I did it!


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I'll post an IC tomorrow when I have a keyboard.
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Well uh...I guess I can't come up with any more excuses. They're done now. I think. I mean, they're done enough. Lord knows if I don't post 'em now, I'll just keep going back and changing shit. Bad Ogo, bad!

Well...there is one more in the works, but I reckon for my sanity I should probably hold off on it tonight.










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@Natsu Only thing I have to note is that you wrote Memory "Munipulation" instead of Manipulation. lol

Otherwise, the power is fine.

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yay


Thanks, sorry about the spelling. I meant to run it through spell check at the end, but I must've forgotten.
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@Ogobrogo

I actually love your sheets. But I have one issue with what you have so far. Biggs, while lovable and cool as a character, has a power that's kinda... erg. Twenty tons is very much over-kill. He weighs 350ish pounds, but can lift 40,000lbs? That's... way over kill. He's lifting over a hundred times his own weight.

I also fail to see how his power can work if his durability isn't enhanced to a degree as well. I can be okay with him lifting a car, MAYBE, with his enhanced strength, but that's ONLY if his skeleton is reinforced too. Your skeleton is just not built to support that kind of weight. It would collapse upon itself, as you can imagine.

Nothing in nature has gone to 100 times their own weight, but lifting ten times, give or take, I can see as more plausible.
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@Ogobrogo Interesting characters. Only thing I have to reasonably call out is how some of the faceclaims - specifically Bigs, Gabe, and Jay's - don't look teenage at all. Biggs looks like he's thirty. lol

The powers seem pretty balanced overall - except for Biggs. Sorry, but his strength level pretty overpowered (Not to mention nonsensical lol). Twenty tons is a freaking lot, enough to pick up a semi-truck, and he can somehow accomplish it without any durability? Yeah, that doesn't make any sense. His skeleton would have been crushed from lifting a piano. Even without the logical implications of the power, I think twenty-tons is pushing it waaaaay too far. I'd say around two-through-three tons would be fair.

Otherwise, the rest of the characters are accepted.
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@UrbanEvolution@Mr Allen J
Completely fair gripes. I'll admit that with Biggs, I completely pulled the numbers out of my ass. Not to mention I kind of changed his shit time and time again over the last few days. He was originally going to be a telepath like Gabe, then I switched him to have tangibility. In fact, I'm not 100% sure I was able to correct all of the pronouns in that section when I swapped it over to Jordan. And I believe at somepoint early on I was planning to have him do something with earth manipulation? It's uh...it's been a long journey for the big man. Strength kind of came last second despite Biggs being the first charrie I made.

So yeah, I can tweak the numbers no prob! Switching to two-three tons with enhanced skeleton durability sound alright to you fellas then? Pretty much going to shoot for him being able to support ten times his body weight, but that'd be the absolute maximum. 2-3 thousand lbs would be much more doable for him, but still remain a rather unpleasant experience.

Interesting characters. Only thing I have to reasonably call out is how some of the faceclaims - specifically Bigs, Gabe, and Jay's - don't look teenage at all. Biggs looks like he's thirty. lol


Hahaha, alright that? That was actually on purpose. It was kind of a tongue-in-cheek reference to Hollywood's habit of hiring actors in their late twenties, early thirties to play teenagers around their early twenties in movies.

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Hahaha, alright that? That was actually on purpose. It was kind of a tongue-in-cheek reference to Hollywood's habit of hiring actors in their late twenties, early thirties to play teenagers around their early twenties in movies.


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Alrighty, Biggs 1.3 should be ready.
Changes include:

  • Reduced Maximum Weight from 40000lbs to 3400lbs.
  • Added Enhanced Durability.
  • Added more SNARK to power description.
  • Modified to include Resistance as well as Exertion when determining amount of energy spent/progress to Ashing.
  • Added Slow Healing trait to offset Enhanced Durability.
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They all look swiggity swaggity to me, @Ogobrogo
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@Ogobrogo All good, homie.
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yay
Praise C'thulhu!

Anyyyyywaaayyyy, I'll try to get an actual post up in a jiffy then~
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yay
Praise C'thulhu!

Anyyyyywaaayyyy, I'll try to get an actual post up in a jiffy then~


you best not disappoint.
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<Snipped quote by Ogobrogo>

you best not disappoint.


you betta believe I'm gonna disappoint. Is what I do, mang.
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

you betta believe I'm gonna disappoint. Is what I do, mang.


god damn it
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I realized after I wrote I'd have a post up, I fell asleep immediately after. Whoops.
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I realized after I wrote I'd have a post up, I fell asleep immediately after. Whoops.


I don't have to tell you how disappointed I am. It says itself.
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I don't have to tell you how disappointed I am. It says itself.


Girl bye, you'll live.
I'm off work and I'm off tomorrow so I have plenty of time.
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Failure runs in your veins
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Girl bye, you'll live.


Who you callin' a girl?

I'm man to my fuckin' bone.
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