@caliban22 Okay, I read over your character sheet and... well there are a few things that seem kind of odd to me.
Reading over your personality, I feel like I didn't really learn much about him. Other than... he was calm and enjoyed being around people. Which, I need a lot more. Like... a lot.
Your history also seems kind of off as well. Not only am I getting a re-written Itachi/Sasuke history vibe, I feel like it didn't make sense how his parents blamed him for everything, when really he didn't do anything. It's kind of all over the place, which I wasn't expecting. Its like you were trying so hard to give him a fucked up past, but as a result it didn't make sense.
I'm not saying you made a bad character, I see potential here, I just don't think it's very focused and though I never really mentioned it, I expected everyone to be on a high-casual writing level when it came to things like the personality and history. I don't know if what you've showed me so far meets that standard.
That being said, if you still want to make your edits, that's fine. Though I have to say with some people PMing me saying they want to join, I may not be able to hold your reserve spot for too long. Please let me know if you think you can still pull through since I know you're busy and, honestly, the Jonin have a big role to play here.
If you have any questions, let me know.
