(running the first chapter through here before Wattpad)

Vanoss, Delirious, Ohm, Wildcat, Mini, and Bryce were recently dared to go to the abandoned insane asylum where Ohm's dad was kept until the day he died. Mini made a nervous noise catching everyone off guard. Delirious asked, "Did we really have to accept this dare?" It was Wildcat's idea to accept it. Vanoss spoke up, "Don't worry Delirious just stay by me and I'll keep you safe from any ghost." Bryce held onto the hood of Ohm's jacket and even though Ohm wouldn't admit it he was scared like he had never been before. The moonlight gave the old building an erie feeling that even chilled Wildcat. "Ohm I'm scared," Bryce said holding onto Ohm. "It's OK Bryce just like Vanoss told Delirious stay by me and I'll keep you safe." Ohm said calmly.

(let me know if it needs work I will fix it before Wattpad if it's good)