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@Mister Thirteen Absolutely! And not a problem!
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Alright @LadyRunic, here we are;
As stated, the next episode begins exactly seven days after the night at the bar. Throughout these seven days, Liza has done much for Alice:

-She has taught Alice the extent of a Vampire's abilities, the increased strength, speed, stamina, and leaping ability, as well as the ability to tap into the minds of more simpler beasts of the Earth such as rats, bats, dogs, wolves, cats, smaller creatures. Granted this is very draining and can lead to exhaustion if done extensively, like in fantasy worlds where Mages cast spells which tax their mana to the extreme and exhaust them.

-She has informed Alice of the two primary ways to kill a Vampire, by beheading or piercing their heart. There are other ways too, such as cremation, acid baths, and high explosives, anything that can destroy the body entirely.

-She has instructed Alice to adjust her sleeping schedule from 7 A.M to 5 P.M, and to avoid extended sun exposure, which will exhaust her body and temporarily drain her Vampiric abilities.

-Liza also bought Alice several coloring books, sketch pads, and sewing and crochet magazines to keep her occupied while Liza is at work. She also told Alice she can use any of her clothes she wanted and feel free to explore the surrounding neighborhood, just stay vigilant, stay disguised, and don't wonder too far from the apartment.

-I'm thinking Alice hasn't yet asked about immortality, for whatever reason, but wants to so bad.

So, that's that, what do you think for the past IC 7 seven days of events?
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Works for me. Any damage to Liza's clothes however have been expertly repaired. Alice has been worrying about her former life and the missing search for her.
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Dandy. I'll of course expect you to effectively list all of that in your first IC post, it'll be a lengthy one, but so will my opening post.

BTW, would Alice be comfortable sharing the bed with Liza?
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@Mister Thirteen She'd get used to it.

And I will.
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Right then @LadyRunic.

I'll have the opening post up later.
It'll vault back to Thomas and Dalton, then you can do your post, and it'll flow from there.
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My next post will have Liza's concurrence and then skip to that next morning as she and Alice arrive at a boutique. Fair?
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Sorry for the 2 day delay.
A possible real life drama scenario and school assignment has been poured onto me this whole week.

I'll have something up hopefully tonight, definitely tomorrow.

My posting will be faster this weekend I can promise you that.
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Pardon that shortness there. -.-
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Well that's the end of that little scene.

I guess next we can time skip ahead to the night of the ball.

You can write a good lengthy post about Alice and her 3 days of making the dress.

Sound good?
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Will do though most likely sometime tomorrow.
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@Mister Thirteen I'm going to be honest and probably sound harsh, but I don't intend to be.

I love the Rp, the characters and the story. But can you give me more to work with? Because Alice is repeating a lot of prior thought and can't really do anything as a character beside dwell on things she already has. To lengthen my posts to an acceptable length and all.

I've got family coming over, I'll try to get a post up tonight, if not tomorrow.
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Sure, no problem. Thank you for voicing your opinion actually.

I was noticing that myself but didn't say anything because I felt that I was pestering you with the constant OOC mentions.

Are you thinking maybe some deeper character development with Liza?
Perhaps her and Alice getting to know each other better? As in talking more about their pasts maybe?

I do intend for some deeper development with Dalton at the ball, and of course Thomas and his "associates" will be coming into the picture at the ball as well. And of course Liam will be returning this episode as well.

So, I'm thinking deeper understanding between Alice and Liza and our up-and-coming lore cluster at the ball. Sound good? Any comments?
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Perhaps. I just want a little more to write than dwelling on Alice's thoughts and detailing surrounding we already know about.
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How about a somewhat tense conversation in the cab on the way over regarding Liza's past? She tells Alice of how she was turned and how old she is, perhaps they could address the question of immortality finally.

Then of course their will be the dramatic events at the ball.

Trust me, I'd rather not spoiler everything, but things turn ugly at the ball and Alice's already crazy new life is warbled even more by the appearance of a "vampire family" and their feud with Liam and she's caught in the midst of it all.
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@Mister Thirteen Will get a reply to you late tonight or tomorrow. I'm passing out for the current point in time.
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Now you have me properly curious! Loving the RP!
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Tis good that @LadyRunic, I feel like we've finally edged out of that little dry spell.
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Setup! And is the man in the white mask Liam, because Alice would recognize the voice?
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Yes it is he @LadyRunic, I'm thinking that the noticeable voice is thrown off by the dark hair and the white garments which make his skin look darker than Liams. Illusion.
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