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*** VOID MASTERS ***






”I have served the Order of The Light nigh on three decades now. I have followed my orders, performed my duties, and enacted upon The Maker’s will. I have purged many heretics and abominations in my time of service; witches, warlocks, demons, and shades. But now a greater evil approaches, one elder to The Order itself, of corrupted gods and the darkest of malices.

Far to the north, there are rumors of profane rituals and black magic. The Order of The Light has received word that a cult of black mages are attempting to open a Void gate. A portal into the Void; the realm of the corrupted gods, demons, and the damned. This cannot be. For if it should come true, all or our world will be destroyed. Such evil cannot be allowed to free roam.

Such a threat has not been faced in century now, long before my time. But we are the Paladins of The Light. It is our duty to defend mankind from heresy and the evils of the Void. We are vigilant, we are the protectors and crusaders of the righteous. When man faces peril, it is we that will guide the way.”


**RELIGION AND THE VOID**












**THE ORDER OF THE LIGHT**






**PLOT, MAP, AND CS**










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Unacceptable. This has to be some kind of boycott between this and all my other ideas.
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It's been thirteen hours. Patience, dude. This too shall pass.

If you're interested in knowing why I, personally, am not interested, here's the line which turned me off to the otherwise intriguing idea:

But we are the Paladins of The Light. It is our duty to defend mankind from heresy and the evils of the Void. We are vigilant, we are the protectors and crusaders of the righteous. When man faces peril, it is we that will guide the way.”


This idea has a lot of potential but I think you limit it severely by expecting all the players to play Lawful Goods, or at least characters who can adequately pose as such. There's less room here for selfish or conflicting interests than there ought to be. Maybe some players only want to save the world in exchange for a reward; but as paladins they cannot reasonably demand that. Some might even want to join the cultists and see what the Old Gods are all about, if your worldbuilding is interesting enough and they're intrigued enough to want to explore the more mysterious side of your world. Which is all plausible enough seeing the effort you put into the Interest Check alone, never mind an OOC.

Unacceptable. This has to be some kind of boycott between this and all my other ideas.


I'm not sure whether this was a joke but it didn't read like one to me so take this with some salt if necessary. But before blaming yourself, or, worse yet, the players, for a lack of activity (if it even continues——thirteen hours are not enough to tell, no matter which way you slice it), please contemplate whether you're truly catering to players' interests if no one is joining the game at the pace that you want. While you do have final say over the vision of your project, making some concessions and compromises for the sake of player creativity may bring in the audience you seek. And they are never at fault for liking what they like, whether that includes your RP or not. Best of luck to you.
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