Hidden 1 mo ago 1 mo ago Post by Ozerath
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Submitting for GM approval, mostly done still need to work on some stuff.


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It's good enough beyond the couple concerns I brought up in the discord.

Mainly how it is very unlikely you'd be able to hide the location of Dawn, even if you can obscure the purpose of the station or what goes on within it and noting that it is likely your worlds have wide ranges in regards to gravity.
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@Ozerath You also say that The Vae’shan are "the most numerous members of the Conclave" and then in the history part "of a now extinct mainline species called the Vae’shan", that doesnt make much sense.
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@Raylah
The first kind of Vae'shen died at that one world which was rendered lifeless while their genetically modified descendants who lived in other worlds are still around.
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@Raylah
The first kind of Vae'shen died at that one world which was rendered lifeless while their genetically modified descendants who lived in other worlds are still around.


Well, cybernetically modified, but same diff.
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Sorry for double post. Made some updates to the NS, altered descriptions of Dawn and the Tet, added a new place called Batala. Thoughts @Arawak?
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Yeah it looks good.

Hidden 29 days ago Post by Raylah
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Sorry about the monstrous post, I got super bored at work :D I can provide TL;DR if you don't want to read the whole thing.
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Sorry for the (potentially lethal) inactivity on my part, but various poorly timed obstacles ave delayed me until now. If any of you who are about are still up for keeping this going, I can provide a collaborative effort here or there (@Arawak or @Raylah in particular).
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@Oraculum Well Arawak hasnt been online for over 20 days, I think it's safe to say that he isn't coming back any time soon. I am not sure if we can continue this with just 2 people.
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I'm still around. Just was locked in a weeks long loop of inability to focus long enough to have RP time. If that makes sense. I should be fine now.
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@Arawak Understandable. When you have time, we could write out the Domain delegation's arrival to Iural.
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