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β–ˆ Eleanor Hill


β€œHe’s going for it.”

β€œWho?” Elly replied, half-bored.

β€œAdam Johnson. I wish you wrote more like him.”

He spoke of authors the way other men spoke of football games. It made her sick, and other times, it made her swoon.

Until the icons on the wall interceded.

β€œLike what?” She asked, taking another sip of wine from her glass.

β€œHeavier. Deeper.” He took another huff from the paper, not bothering to even look at her. His body was stretched out on the navy sofa, taking more space than necessary.

β€œReading your work is like reading Eowyn Ivey or worse Kate Quinn. You keep trying to expand your emotional depth, but honestly, it’s stuck in shallow water.” His tone was dry and accompanied by a shrug of constant disapproval.

He didn’t stop even when her body shifted nervously and the seat dipped next to him.

Elly’s voice was too loud, too concrete, too her. She needed to unlearn this voice and use the next one waiting.

She needed more patience.

β€œKate Quinn? Come on, I’m not that bad.” Elly took another sip. The glass was draining quicker than she had expected.

Her eyes glanced at the bottle. It was almost empty.

β€œLet’s take The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison. Incest. Rape. Pedophilia. And that’s only surface level pain.” He blew smoke from his lips and added one more comment about war and women’s suffering refined into a laureate’s work.

The conversation died with the smoke. It lingered in the air and slowly faded.

Elly watched the smoke.

The ceiling fan spun circles. It was making a numb noise that reminded her of childhood.

A nervous hand ran through her dark hair, and she took the final sip from her glass.

The empty glass stared at her, and Laszlo Krasnahorkai knocked on her mind. A barbed loneliness entered. It reintroduced her to names and faces she could never ignore.

Tears began blurring her focus. Her lips pressed together, and she dabbed her eyes.

He sat up, unzipping his pants.

β€œI don’t have much time, Elly.”

β€œI really shouldn’t.”

She hadn’t received Communion for a month, and her apartment was starting to feel muted.

She was no longer present.

β€œIt doesn’t matter. Elder Thaddeus said I can’t have Communion until Pascha.”

Elder Thaddeus. His Spiritual Father, who lived on Mount Athos β€” the holiest place on Earth.

Elly couldn’t imagine having a monastic as a Spiritual Father. Let alone one on Mount Athos. Their penances were stricter.

All she had to do was tell him, no, and on Sunday, the veil would be lifted.

Don’t you think my writing would be better with Communion? She wanted to ask.

But, she never did.

And when she woke up in the morning, she was still on the couch. Curled into a ball.

He was gone.

Morning light peeked through the window. It cast shadows on the floor and couch.

There were two text messages on her phone, β€œDon’t worry. Nothing happened last night. You passed out on me. You’re welcome” and, β€œTell Father Thomas hi for me. Thanks”

The phone’s cracked screen went dark.

She closed her eyes and listened to the room breathe.

There was a relief in her soul, but her heart ached.

Was she Natasha, with a candle burning at her window? Waiting for patience to finally make an announcement?

The thought haunted her before evaporating.

It’s not as if her dad rescued her mother.

Books rescued her mother.

Elly had to write her own.
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πšƒπš‘πšŽ π™Ήπš˜πš‹: π™ΏπšŠπš›πš πšƒπš πš˜

π™Έπš 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝟽:𝟹𝟸 πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšŽπšŸπšŽπš—πš’πš—πš. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‹πšŠπš‹πš’πšœπš’πšπšπšŽπš› 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πšœπšπš’πš•πš• πšπš›πš’πš’πš—πš 𝚝𝚘 πšŒπš˜πš—πšŸπš’πš—πšŒπšŽ πšπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš‘πš’πš•πšπš›πšŽπš— 𝚝𝚘 πš‹πš›πšžπšœπš‘ πšπš‘πšŽπš’πš› πšπšŽπšŽπšπš‘. πšƒπš‘πšŽπš›πšŽ πš πšŽπš›πšŽ πš˜πš—πš•πš’ 𝚝𝚠𝚘 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽπš–. π™·πš˜πš πšŽπšŸπšŽπš›, πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπšŽπšŸπšŽπš— πš’πšŽπšŠπš›-πš˜πš•πš πšŽπš—πš“πš˜πš’πšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš‘πšŠπš•πš•πšŽπš—πšπšŽ 𝚘𝚏 πšπšŽπš‹πšŠπšπš’πš—πš πš‘πšŽπš› 𝚘𝚞𝚝 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽ πš™πš›πš˜πšŒπšŽπšœπšœ, πšŠπš—πš πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš‘πš›πšŽπšŽ πš’πšŽπšŠπš›-πš˜πš•πš πš‘πšŠπš 𝚊 πšŸπšŽπš›πš’ πšœπšπš›πš˜πš—πš, β€œπ™½πš˜.” π™±πš˜πšπš‘ πš πšŽπš›πšŽ πšŸπšŽπš›πš’ πš–πšžπšŒπš‘ πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšπš‘πšŽπš’πš› πšπšŠπšπš‘πšŽπš›.

π™Έπš 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš–πš˜πš–πšŽπš—πšπšœ πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšπš‘πšŽπšœπšŽ, πšœπš‘πšŽ πš›πšŽπš–πš’πš—πšπšŽπš πš‘πšŽπš›πšœπšŽπš•πš πšœπš‘πšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš‹πšŽπš’πš—πš πš™πšŠπš’πš πšπš˜πš› πšŠπš•πš• πšπš‘πšŽ πšŽπšπšπš˜πš›πš, πšŠπš—πš πš πš‘πšŽπš— πšπš‘πšŽπš’πš› πš™πšŠπš›πšŽπš—πšπšœ πšŒπšŠπš–πšŽ πš‘πš˜πš–πšŽ, πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš˜πšžπš•πš πšŒπš˜πš•πš•πšŽπšŒπš πšπš‘πšŽ πš–πš˜πš—πšŽπš’ πšŠπš—πš πšœπš’πš–πš™πš•πš’ πš•πšŽπšŠπšŸπšŽ. 𝚈𝚎𝚜, πšœπš‘πšŽ πš•πš˜πšŸπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš‘πš’πš•πšπš›πšŽπš—, πš‹πšžπš πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšŽπš—πš, πšœπš‘πšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš˜πš—πš•πš’ πšπš’πšπšπšŽπšŽπš— πšŠπš—πš πš‘πšŠπš πš–πš˜πš›πšŽ πš’πš–πš™πš˜πš›πšπšŠπš—πš, πšπš›πš’πšŸπš˜πš•πš˜πšžπšœ πšπš‘πš’πš—πšπšœ 𝚝𝚘 𝚍𝚘 πš‹πšŽπšπš˜πš›πšŽ πš‹πšŽπš’πš—πš 𝚊 πšπšžπš•πš•-πšπš’πš–πšŽ 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚒-𝚊𝚝-πš‘πš˜πš–πšŽ πš–πš˜πšπš‘πšŽπš›.

πšƒπš‘πšŽπš’ πš πšŽπš›πšŽ πšœπšπšŠπš—πšπš’πš—πš πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πš•πš’πšŸπš’πš—πš πš›πš˜πš˜πš–, πš—πš˜πš 𝚒𝚎𝚝 πš‘πšŠπšŸπš’πš—πš πš–πšŠπšπšŽ πš’πš πš’πš—πšπš˜ πšπš‘πšŽ πšžπš™πšœπšπšŠπš’πš›β€™πšœ πš‹πšŠπšπš‘πš›πš˜πš˜πš–, πš πš‘πšŽπš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš›πš‹πšŽπš•πš• πš›πšŠπš—πš. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πšœπšŽπšŸπšŽπš— πš’πšŽπšŠπš›-πš˜πš•πš 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πš–πš’πšπšπš•πšŽ 𝚘𝚏 πš‘πš˜πš•πšπš’πš—πš πš‘πš’πšœ πš˜πš πš—. π™°πšœ πš’πš πš˜πš— 𝚚𝚞𝚎, π™·πšŽ πšœπšπš˜πš™πš™πšŽπš πšπšŠπš•πš”πš’πš—πš πšŠπš—πš πšŠπšœπš”πšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšœπš’πš–πš™πš•πšŽ, πš‹πšŽπšπšπšŽπš πššπšžπšŽπšœπšπš’πš˜πš—, β€œπš†πš‘πš˜β€™πšœ πšπš‘πšŠπš?”

β€œπ™Έβ€™πš– πš—πš˜πš πšœπšžπš›πšŽ,” πšœπš‘πšŽ πš›πšŽπš™πš•πš’πšŽπš. π™·πšŽπš› πš‘πšŽπšŠπš πšπšžπš›πš—πšŽπš πšπš˜πš πšŠπš›πšπšœ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš› πšŒπšžπš›πš’πš˜πšžπšœπš•πš’. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‘πšŠπš—πš πš›πšŽπšœπšπš’πš—πš πš˜πš— πš‘πšŽπš› πšœπš”πš’πš›πš πšŒπšžπš›πš•πšŽπš.

πšƒπš‘πšŽ πšπš‘πš›πšŽπšŽ πš’πšŽπšŠπš›-πš˜πš•πš πš‹πšŽπšπšŠπš— πš“πšžπš–πš™πš’πš—πš πšžπš™-πšŠπš—πš-πšπš˜πš πš—. π™·πšŽπš› πš•πš’πšπšπš•πšŽ 𝚏𝚎𝚎𝚝 πšŒπš˜πšžπš•πšπš—β€™πš πš‹πšŽ πšœπšπš’πš•πš•. πš‚πš‘πšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πšŽπš‘πšŒπš’πšπšŽπš πš‹πš’ πšπš‘πšŽ πš™πš›πš˜πšœπš™πšŽπšŒπš πšπš‘πšŠπš πšœπš˜πš–πšŽπš˜πš—πšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚊𝚝 πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš›. β€œπ™Έπšβ€™πšœ π™Όπš˜πš–πš–πš’ πšŠπš—πš π™³πšŠπšπšπš’!” π™·πšŽπš› πšœπš–πšŠπš•πš• πšπš’πš—πšπšŽπš› 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš™πš˜πš’πš—πšπš’πš—πš πšπš˜πš πšŠπš›πšπšœ πšπš‘πšŽ πš‹πš›πš˜πš πš—, πš™πšŠπš—πšŽπš•πšŽπš πšπš›πš˜πš—πš πšπš˜πš˜πš› 𝚊𝚜 πšœπš‘πšŽ πš πšŽπš—πš πš›πšžπš—πš—πš’πš—πš πšπš˜πš πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πš‘πšŠπš•πš•πš πšŠπš’ 𝚝𝚘 πšπš›πšŽπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš’πšπšžπš›πšŽ πšœπšπšŠπš—πšπš’πš—πš πš˜πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πš˜πšπš‘πšŽπš› πšœπš’πšπšŽ 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽ πšπšŽπšŒπš˜πš›πšŠπšπš’πšŸπšŽ πšπš•πšŠπšœπšœ.

β€œπ™½πš˜, πšœπš‘πš‘πš‘!” πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‹πšŠπš‹πš’πšœπš’πšπšπšŽπš› πššπšžπš’πš™πš™πšŽπš. πš€πšžπš’πšŒπš”πš•πš’, πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš‘πšŠπšœπšŽπš πšŠπšπšπšŽπš› πšπš‘πšŽ πšŽπšŠπšπšŽπš› πšπš‘πš›πšŽπšŽ πš’πšŽπšŠπš›-πš˜πš•πš πšŠπš—πš πšπš›πšŠπš‹πš‹πšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš‘πš’πš•πš πš‹πšŽπšπš˜πš›πšŽ πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŠπšπšπšŽπš–πš™πšπšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 πšžπš—πš•πš˜πšŒπš” πšŠπš—πš πš˜πš™πšŽπš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš›.

π™Ύπš—πšŽ 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽ πš›πšžπš•πšŽπšœ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚝𝚘 πš—πš˜πš πš˜πš™πšŽπš— πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš› 𝚝𝚘 πšœπšπš›πšŠπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœ. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‚πš–πš’πšπš‘ πšπšŠπš–πš’πš•πš’ πš πšŠπšœπš—β€™πš πšŽπš‘πš™πšŽπšŒπšπš’πš—πš πšŠπš—πš’ πšŸπš’πšœπš’πšπš˜πš›πšœ, πš‹πšžπš πš πš‘πšŽπš— πšœπš‘πšŽ πš•πš˜πš˜πš”πšŽπš πšπš‘πš›πš˜πšžπšπš‘ πšπš‘πšŽ πš•πšŽπšŠπšπšŽπš πšŒπš›πš’πšœπšπšŠπš•, πšœπš‘πšŽ 𝚜𝚊𝚠 𝚊 πšœπš‘πš’πšŸπšŽπš›πš’πš—πš πšœπš—πš˜πš  πšŒπš˜πšŸπšŽπš›πšŽπš π™°πšœπš’πšŠπš— πš˜πš› π™·πš’πšœπš™πšŠπš—πš’πšŒ πš–πšŠπš—. π™±πšŽπšœπš’πšπšŽπšœ 𝚊 πšπšŠπš›πš” πš“πšŠπšŒπš”πšŽπš, πš‘πšŽ πš‘πšŠπš 𝚊 πš—πšžπš‹πš‹πš’ πšœπš—πš˜πš  πšŒπšŠπš™ πšŠπš—πš πšŠπš›πš˜πšžπš—πš πš‘πš’πšœ πš—πšŽπšŒπš”, 𝚊 π™±πš•πšŠπšŒπš” πš†πšŠπšπšŒπš‘ πšπšŠπš›πšπšŠπš— πšœπšŒπšŠπš›πš. π™±πšžπš, πš’πš πšπš’πšπš—β€™πš πšœπšŽπšŽπš– πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšŠπš•πš• πšπš‘πš’πšœ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πšŽπš—πš˜πšžπšπš‘ 𝚝𝚘 πš‘πšŽπš•πš™ πš‘πš’πš– πšŽπš—πšπšžπš›πšŽ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš›πšŽπšŽπš£πš’πš—πš πšŒπš˜πš•πš.

πš‚πš‘πšŽ πš”πš—πšŽπš  πš‘πšŽ 𝚜𝚊𝚠 πšπš‘πšŽπš– πšπš‘πš›πš˜πšžπšπš‘ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš•πšŠπšœπšœ πš‹πšŽπšŒπšŠπšžπšœπšŽ πš‘πš’πšœ πš•πš˜πš , πšœπš‘πš’πšŸπšŽπš›πš’πš—πš πšŸπš˜πš’πšŒπšŽ πšŒπšŠπš•πš•πšŽπš 𝚘𝚞𝚝 πšŠπš—πš πš™πš•πšŽπšŠπšπšŽπš, β€œπ™Όπš’-πš–πš’ πšŒπšŠπš› πšœπšπšŠπš•πš•πšŽπš. 𝙸-𝙸 πš—πšŽπšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 𝚞𝚜𝚎 𝚊 πš™πš‘πš˜πš—πšŽ 𝚝𝚘 πšŒπšŠπš•πš• πš–πš’ πš πš’πšπšŽ. π™²πšŠπš— 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πš™πš•πšŽπšŠπšœπšŽ πš‘πšŽπš•πš™ πš–πšŽ?”
π™·πšŽ πšœπš˜πšžπš—πšπšŽπš πšŠπš—πš πš•πš˜πš˜πš”πšŽπš πš™πš˜πš•πš’πšπšŽ, πš πš’πšπš‘ πš‘πš’πšœ 𝚏𝚊𝚌𝚎 πšπšžπšŒπš”πšŽπš πš’πš—πšπš˜ πšπš‘πšŽ πš‹πš•πšŠπšŒπš” πšŠπš—πš πš—πšŠπšŸπš’ πšπšŠπš›πšπšŠπš— πšœπšŒπšŠπš›πš, πš‹πšžπš πš‘πšŽ πšŠπš•πšœπš˜ πšŠπš™πš™πšŽπšŠπš›πšŽπš πšœπšŒπšŠπš›πšŽπš.

πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‹πšŠπš‹πš’πšœπš’πšπšπšŽπš› πšπšžπš›πš—πšŽπš πšŠπš—πš πšœπš’πšπš‘πšŽπš. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš‘πš˜πšžπšœπšŽ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πš πšŠπš›πš– πšŠπš—πš 𝚜𝚊𝚏𝚎. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πšœπš–πš’πš•πš’πš—πš πš™πš˜πš›πšπš›πšŠπš’πšπšœ 𝚘𝚏 πšπšŠπš–πš’πš•πš’ πš•πš’πš—πšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πš‘πšŠπš•πš•πš πšŠπš’ πšŽπš—πšπš›πšŠπš—πšŒπšŽ. πšƒπš‘πšŽ πš•πš’πšŸπš’πš—πš πš›πš˜πš˜πš– 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚌𝚘𝚣𝚒 πš πš’πšπš‘ πšŠπš— πš’πš—πšŸπš’πšπš’πš—πš 𝚜𝚎𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚍 πšŠπš›πšŽπšŠ. π™½πšŽπš‘πš 𝚝𝚘 πšπš‘πšŠπš, πšπš‘πšŽ πš”πš’πšπšŒπš‘πšŽπš—β€™πšœ πšπšŽπš›πš›πšŠπšŒπš˜πšπšπšŠ πš πšŠπš•πš• πš‘πšŠπš 𝚊 πš™πš‘πš˜πš—πšŽ πš–πš˜πšžπš—πšπšŽπš πš˜πš— πš’πš.

π™½πš˜ πš˜πš—πšŽ πšœπš‘πš˜πšžπš•πš πš‘πšŠπšŸπšŽ 𝚝𝚘 πš πšŠπš’πš πš˜πšžπšπšœπš’πšπšŽ πš’πš— πšπš‘πš’πšœ πš πšŽπšŠπšπš‘πšŽπš›.

π™·πšŽπš› πš‘πšŠπš—πš πš›πšŽπšŠπšŒπš‘πšŽπš πšπš˜πš› πšπš‘πšŽ πšπšŽπšŠπšπš‹πš˜πš•πš.

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π™Ήπš˜πš‘πš—πš—πš’β€™πšœ 𝚎𝚒𝚎𝚜 πš‹πšžπš›πš—πšŽπš, πšŠπš—πš πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš› πšπšŽπš—πšπš•πš’ 𝚠𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚍 πšŠπš—πš πšπš’πšœπšπš˜πš›πšπšŽπš. π™΄πšŸπšŽπš›πš’ πš•πšŽπš—πšœ 𝚠𝚊𝚜 πšπšŽπš•πš•πš’πš—πš πš‘πš’πš– πšœπš˜πš–πšŽπšπš‘πš’πš—πš πšπš’πšπšπšŽπš›πšŽπš—πš 𝚊𝚜 πšπš‘πšŽ πš—πšžπš–πš‹πšŽπš›πšœ πš‘πš’πš πš£πšŽπš›πš˜.

πšƒπš‘πšŽπš•πš˜πšŒπš” πšŒπš•πš’πšŒπš”πšŽπš.

π™·πš’πšœ πš‘πšŠπš—πš πšŽπš‘πšπšŽπš—πšπšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš›πš”πš—πš˜πš‹ πš’πš–πš–πšŽπšπš’πšŠπšπšŽπš•πš’ πšŠπš—πš πšœπš‘πš˜πšŸπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš˜πš˜πš› πš πš’πšπšŽ-πš˜πš™πšŽπš—. πš‚πšπšŽπšŽπš•-𝚝𝚘𝚎, πš“πšžπšœπš πš’πš— 𝚌𝚊𝚜𝚎.
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