[OOC] Academy 218 - Superhuman School (Always open)

[Luminous Beings]

If she has anything over an 8 the weaknesses are going to be very severe.

[Shin Ghost Note]

I assign the ratings

[Obscene Symphony]

Oh, okay. Thanks!

[Leonerdo]

Ooooh, her and Abraham would get along great by the sounds of it. Or terribly. Regardless, it would be fun.

[SerpentGear]

Posted.

For reference, does anyone want me to post photos of the weird creatures I used as inspiration for my character's powers/looks? Sometimes it helps people visualize the appearance better.

[Shin Ghost Note]

I'm trying to keep mostly everyone in the below-8 range.

For good reason.

[Obscene Symphony]

Leonerdo said
Ooooh, her and Abraham would get along great by the sounds of it. Or terribly. Regardless, it would be fun.

Oooh, link to his profile please?

[Shin Ghost Note]

I don't think he made him yet. lol

[Leonerdo]

Bruh, he's gonna be a surprise. Come the next act, all will be made clear!

[Shin Ghost Note]

And Jake's life will take a sudden turn for the worse.

[Leonerdo]

And Valjean will turn into a lovable puppy dog.

[Obscene Symphony]

Character's posted! I'm probably going to edit her a bit as it's really late here and I don't know how it will look to me in the morning, but there she is.

[Shin Ghost Note]

The sheet checks out, but I have a problem when people use absolute words like "impenetrable". The shield should break under heavy trauma. Unless there's other variables like she can keep it up for a few seconds and/or can't do ANYTHING else while the shield is up.

Also, did she kill those two people you mentioned in your backstory or...?

[Obscene Symphony]

The shield will break if she stops concentrating on it/does something else. If enough damage is done, the energy it takes to keep it up will be too great and she will have to abandon it.
Yeah, she killed them. However, it hasn't been traced back to her. If that's a problem then I can change it.
EDIT The shields also don't protect against temperature or any kind of attack to the mind, only physical matter. She's vulnerable to attacks on the mind, which I can't believe I forgot to mention.

[Shin Ghost Note]

Obscene Symphony said Yeah, she killed them. However, it hasn't been traced back to her. If that's a problem then I can change it.

Killing someone (even in self-defense) has a great psychological impact on someone, which I don't really see in her sheet. Take my character Nikki for example, she accidentally killed a man that was trying to kidnap her at a young age and it largely contributed to the fact that she's such a loner, and still effects her to this day.

Obscene Symphony said EDIT The shields also don't protect against temperature or any kind of attack to the mind, only physical matter. She's vulnerable to attacks on the mind, which I can't believe I forgot to mention.

Well, if they only protect against physical matter then they shouldn't be able to stop energy (Such as Gabe's lasers or Sylvia's screams).

EDIT: I also believe that she should have her weight limit lowered a bit.

[Obscene Symphony]

Well, if by affected you mean plagued by nightmares and triggered into a panic by a ythi g that reminds her too strongly of the attack, then yes. She's also sort of come to terms with it by convincing herself that she did the right thing, as well as knowing that she didn't have control over the shockwave when it happened. I'll add those things to the sheet.
Sure, I can tweak her weigh limit a bit.
Sorry for the inconvenience, I guess this is what happens when you write after midnight (yes, I am totally softcore)

[Shin Ghost Note]

Very well, edit your sheet and we'll see where we go from there.

[Obscene Symphony]

Alright, edited.

[Ciphra]

So...I was gonna type something here and what not but I kinda spaced since I just woke up and at this point I'm just typing to type...So what's up?

[Jazzy]

Obscene Symphony said
Sorry for the inconvenience, I guess this is what happens when you write after midnight (yes, I am totally softcore)

WEINY.