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Suppose so, Still, Sorry ^^; I feel like I should change my char now.. but that'd mess up the background... hmm... *Taps my chin in thought*
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Don't change it- if someone attacks, they storm into the castle, and find a library full of lounging, half-asleep vampires reading books and giving about zero craps.
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Lol. Hmm... Sounds like a principle comming into a highschool library to me :P Sorry, Had to try and make a joke :P
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Angel Elizabeth Valgon MinamotoFemale19 Angel is a quiet child, Shes easy to convince most anything and would much rather read a book than go for a run. Angel is caring and kind, She has trust issues and her trust is difficult to earn, however once you do she will believe most anything you tell her. Angel is protective of the ones she loves, If someone harms her loved ones she can go from quiet and kind to a cold blooded mercyless killer. Books, Storys, Music, Exploring, Writing, Talking (To People Shes Comfortable Around), The ColdLoud Noises, Crowded Places, Not Having Anything To Do, Sleeping (Continuous Nightmares), Strangers, The Heat, Idiotic Ignorant People, People With No MannersAngels birth parents where murdered when she was only 3 months old. Angel was adopted by a Man who's wife had passed while pregnant with they're 19 week old unborn child due to a drunk driver. The Man took good care of Angel and home schooled her when she had been made fun of for hating the outdoors and loving books, having earned herself the title of 'nerd'. Angel was with her father going to a trip to Florida when they're plane crashed and there were few survivors. This was when Angel was 15, The crash reminded her father of the sight of his Wife and unborn child in the car crash all those years ago and once he had recovered, It drove him to insanity. The man tried to murder Angel while she was asleep. The man had tripped over one of Angels books and impaled himself in the eye with the knife he was going to use to murder Angel, Angel awoke and ran off for help but was too late. The man had died nearly instantly. Angel blamed herself for the incident and fled the area. Angel later found out that she was adopted while talking to a woman, who turned out to be the one working at the orphanage when Angel was there, and only made Angel feel alone in the world. Angel had not been told of her parents deaths due to the woman not knowing, so she set off to find her birth parents. Angel was crossing through a small cozy town when her vision blurred and she fell unconscious. She then awoke in a gothic castle with no recollection of how she got there or anything else about herself. She knew her name and she definitely knew one thing, she did not like this situation at all.


Need more flaws in personality and the backstory needs less tragedy, not to offend but most of that is not plausible. The personality is a basic Mary-sue one: protective, nice, caring, but can turn into a cold killer? Unless she has multiple personality disorder, which doesn't work that way, it won't work. I'm sorry, but pick protective nice and caring or protective cold and maybe caring deep, deep, deep inside. If he had gone insane, in this day and age, the signs would be caught before he did anything drastic. The fact that not only were her parents murdered, her surrogate father traumatized by his wife's and unborn child's death, but she also got into a plane crash, which only happens at least every three years, is not plausible at all in this generation. I'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh, I hate it when I do, but I can't accept it.

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Christof, Evelyn, Mithias, Will, Anrya... who is the GM playing?


I will be making the oldest vampire who is most closest related to Dracula and the leader of the current coven. (:<
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I will be making the oldest vampire who is most closest related to Dracula and the leader of the current coven. (:<


Dun dun dun
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Don't change it- if someone attacks, they storm into the castle, and find a library full of lounging, half-asleep vampires reading books and giving about zero craps.


Hey, Evelyn has passion... just has to be a dramatic situation to show it!
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Valerie? Valentine?
There was this vampire-based book I read once... Department 19 or something.

Had like three brothers that were the first turned by Dracula. One didn't really want to kill everyone, the other didn't give a crap, and the other was resurrecting Dracula to try and enslave humanity.
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Hm, I'll have to decide on Mithias' lineage.

Also, can Israphel join if she changes her story? I'd like her to join us, cuz she is my friend.
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Valerie? Valentine?There was this vampire-based book I read once... Department 19 or something.Had like three brothers that were the first turned by Dracula. One didn't really want to kill everyone, the other didn't give a crap, and the other was resurrecting Dracula to try and enslave humanity.


Sounds hot.
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Angel Elizabeth Valgon Minamoto

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Angel Elizabeth Valgon Minamoto

Personality
Angel is a quiet child, Shes easy to convince most anything and would much rather read a book than go for a run. Angel is caring and kind, She has trust issues and her trust is difficult to earn, however once you do she will believe most anything you tell her. Angel is protective of the ones she loves and tends to like having them in her sight as much as she can, worried someone will harm them.

Likes
Books, Storys, Music, Exploring, Writing, Talking (To People Shes Comfortable Around), The Cold

Dislikes
Loud Noises, Crowded Places, Not Having Anything To Do, Sleeping (Continuous Nightmares), Strangers, The Heat, Idiotic Ignorant People, People With No Manners

History

Angel was adopted as a baby by a single father. She didn't learn that she was adopted until her adult life, and since has been trying to track down her biological parents.
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Cool.
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Angel Elizabeth Valgon MinamotoFemale19 Angel is a quiet child, Shes easy to convince most anything and would much rather read a book than go for a run. Angel is caring and kind, She has trust issues and her trust is difficult to earn, however once you do she will believe most anything you tell her. Angel is protective of the ones she loves and tends to like having them in her sight as much as she can, worried someone will harm them. Books, Storys, Music, Exploring, Writing, Talking (To People Shes Comfortable Around), The ColdLoud Noises, Crowded Places, Not Having Anything To Do, Sleeping (Continuous Nightmares), Strangers, The Heat, Idiotic Ignorant People, People With No MannersAngel was adopted as a baby by a single father. She didn't learn that she was adopted until her adult life, and since has been trying to track down her biological parents.


Accepted(:
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So will we start soon?
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So will we start soon?


Yes, after I make my CS. So sometime this week depending on how busy I am.
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Alright, so everyones dead... Or sleeping... Wake up! Did you all forget to set your alarm clocks or something?
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till here
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Israphel said
Alright, so everyones dead... Or sleeping... Wake up! Did you all forget to set your alarm clocks or something?


Psh, sleep is my best friend. I just don't see it very much. Not to mention it's 8pm here.
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Won't have my CS up until tomorrow because of homework and stuff.
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Thats good. Im exited for this to start. :3 I feel like its starting to die tho... Threads cannot have one day without posts, the days will get longer and longer until theres one per month >> Ive seen it happen. Its boring.
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I know, but I recently was out of school for four days and so I have a lot of makeup work and stuff.
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