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Penelope really isn't either cx

I also kinda see them getting married like right after the shitstorm is over lol I imagine Penelope just being like 'quick before something else happens' xD
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Honestly yeah xD I think Crow would be thinking the same thing

Also, I have a few major plot ideas I've been toying with for a little while, so I'll share some to see what you think cx

1. After the shenanigans with the Younisian princess and everything gets settled down, Brerra and Younis come to some sort of agreement (probably a trade deal/alliance sort of thing; I could see the terms being something Crow, Penelope, and Gavin come up with, and the Younisian princess supports) to end the war. However, when they do, that's when the northern kingdom, Eyaris, strikes both of them. Since Eyaris wants to conquer the two kingdoms, they wouldn't want to give them time to recover from their feuding, so that's why they'd swoop in so fast. This would lead to Younis and Brerra teaming up to fend off Eyaris and Gorm (Gorm is a landlocked kingdom with no access to sea ports, so Eyaris could win their alliance by offering them a portion of land that connects to the ocean in exchange for soldiers). I haven't come up with a way this would all play out, but I think it makes sense for the direction we've been sending the story in so far.

2. I also want to bring in some of the plot points we sort of dropped after the time skip (the staff being a big one). One way I could think of doing this would be that Eyaris breaks down Younis's morale by revealing that they have their staff, and the war begins to turn in the enemy's favor. To save Brerra and Younis from being overwhelmed, Crow and Penelope (and probably a few others like Olivia and/or Hartley), go on another mission to Eyaris to try and steal the staff back for Younis's sake (Crow would probably go behind his father's back, which could also cause some tension). If we do that, we could also bring back some epic mercenary fights and other action. I think it could be good timing, since it would be following the cool down when they're all at the castle.

That's all I can remember right now lol
Let me know what you think or if you've got any other ideas cx
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Ooooo I really like both of those actually cx

I think the timing will work out pretty well too! That'll give a small peaceful(ish cx) time before shit really hits the fan lol Plus we can use that to focus a little more on side characters and small stuff before it gets crazy again with Eyaris striking and them having to go steal the staff.

Also, since another war would be starting up, I'm thinking Penelope would probably leave to join Mia at this new battlefront since, even though marrying the viceroy would technically boost her status, she'd have her title as lieutenant. I'm not sure how far into the new war you're thinking that they reveal they have the staff, but if it's not right at the beginning and Crow and Penelope are separated, it could be interesting to sorta write it out with letters to each other. cx

Though if you had other plans, maybe something can prevent Penelope from returning or things just happen so quick that she doesn't even get the chance to before they have to leave on the new mission
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Awesome cx I'm excited to bring the action back after the part at the castle.

That's true. We've got a lot of side characters now xD

I honestly don't have any plans for when Eyaris would reveal that they have the staff. I usually come up with big picture ideas and let the rest of the story play out before I think about smaller details. So I'm good with anything at this point ^^ I could also see Crow being super worried about Penelope's safety if she goes back to the warfront, since he would remember the mercenary attacks back in Younis a few years ago and how ruthless the Eyarisian people were. We can see where the story goes when we get to the next war, haha.

Another more minor idea I was thinking would make sense for Crow would be that after he spends so much time at the castle and away from fighting in general, his aversion to blood would come back stronger, which makes it harder for him to fight when they go on the mission to Eyaris. I haven't fully decided what that's going to look like, but it seems logical to me, since the only reason he's been able to handle it thus far is because he pretty much immersed himself in battles in the current war and had to fight through it to survive. Once he takes time away, I could see him start having some PTSD related nightmares (he'd probably have made these worse by pushing himself so hard in the war) and be more intolerant to the sight of blood again.
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Honestly we do xD

And oooh sounds good! Poor Crow lol
I'm also lowkey thinking Layth is one of the ones that goes with them xD If Penelope's at the warfront, I could see her sneaking away to go on this mission and him catching her and deciding to go too (likely not trusting her abilities to get the job done cx) I think it'd also be a good opportunity to develop his relation with Crow since so much would have changed. Not only would Crow be the viceroy now but he'd also be married to his sister and supported by Edward lol it's Layth's own personal hell xD
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I'm also going to be adding CSs for the Younisian king and princess soon xD

Yeah, it's gonna be a surprise when he realizes his aversion is back ^^;
I really like that idea! I could imagine them not getting along for a lot of the trip cx
Also, I feel like Layth would try to fight back against Crow's authority a lot, even though he would outrank him lol It's gonna be a ride
I'm already excited
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Penelope's being reeaaallly cautious of Rikki rn lol

Oh yeah xD Dang even more lol

Cool! And yeah he definitely won't just roll over lol Layth will give him as much of a hard time as he can without getting in real trouble xD
Me too cx
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In case it wasn't clear, Hazel was talking about dyslexia
Also, I've been holding onto that secret since I designed Simon's character, haha. Glad I got a chance to fit it into the story xD

I'm excited to see how they interact, haha. I feel like it'll be like William but worse
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I figured cx
Nice! lol glad it worked out then

Yeah me too lol It'll definitely be worse xD
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Crow and Rikki are finally going to be able to deal with their conflict cx
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Finally xD
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It was probably a good thing that Penelope and Rikki talked before, otherwise that conversation could have gone so much worse xD

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EDIT: I just realized I never added an 18+ tag for this RP lol
I just put that on, since we've got a lot of mature themes (violence, sex, drinking, etc...)
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Honestly xD it could have been messy lol

Oh dang cx Makes sense haha
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Crow started messing with Hartley right away xD
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Poor Hartley xD

Penelope's really glad everything went even better than planned lol
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I think it would be interesting if Hartley was one of the people who join the mission to Eyaris later too. Mostly because it makes sense for there to be Younisians interested in their cause, but also because he's kind of glory-seeking, so it makes sense for his character.

Crow's starting to feel the weight of his decision more
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Yeah I like that! I've also been thinking about introducing a new Younisian character when the time comes. He'll be a knight that Penelope befriends during the time she returns to the battlefield when the two kingdoms are working together. Idk if he'll go with them yet. I think he might travel through Younis with them but not all the way into Eyaris

Poor Crow xD Penelope only has a small idea of how that must feel lol
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Yay for new characters cx
It'll be interesting to add a Younisian knight, since it would give us characters from every rank in that kingdom (Felicia and Hartley represent the other classes)

Crow got distracted by messing with Hazel xD
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Yeah! c:
I'm excited lol

Also, I can't reply on sc right now because my phone charger broke and now my phone is dead xD
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Okay no worries xD
I've got class until 2, but I'll be free after that! My husband and I were gonna do a date day, but we moved it to Friday because his friends want to hang out today and I have two projects I want to get done by today or tomorrow
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