[OOC] The Travellers

[Lady Athena]

Am I able to join? If so please see application in the tab below

Character App

Appearance:

Name: Silvia
Age: 16
Occupation before the tragedy: School girl
Personality: She doesn't talk much, but she seems to lurk in the shadows. No one knows much about her but she seems to be around to prevent any problems from arising
Weapons:
•Sword

•Blood Scythe (Summons when her blood is spilled on her sword)
(See Appearance for image of scythe)

[Aphelion]

@Lady Athena

I'm not the GM, but I'm not quite sure if your weapons really mesh with the rest of what everyone is packing. I don't mind if it's some crazy bio-tech that manages to make it transform like that (after all, we have a guy in a crazy suit), but I think that if it requires your blood to transform, you should probably expect some side-effects. Blood loss, especially in areas with mutated animals, is pretty dangerous by logical deduction (you'd be giving them a calling-card to find you and whoever you're with). Then the fact that you may experience some anemia and fatigue by frequent blood-letting. But those are just my thoughts and not the rules. Only @Erklings25 decides what is and is not allowed.

My two cents.

[Billsomething]

@Aphelion also i find the blood thing to seem more magical in nature

[Erklings25]

@Lady Athena GM here!
Yeah, you haven't done the complete CS, so sorry!

[hagroden]

@Aphelion
Hey, you never posted in response to ved.

[yukisaa]

@Aphelion
Hey, you never posted in response to ved.

@hagroden

@hagroden or me XP

[Billsomething]

@yukisaa actually she has i think?

[Lady Athena]

@Aphelion
I understand your point here, I was thinking more on the bio-tech side any way. Like the blood activates a piston which causes a mechanism to activate to change the shape of the sword. I can see what you are saying about side effects and that is what I wanted any way. It means I can only change the sword into a scythe in dire moments because I cant hold it for long. But it would also make a good point for character development since as you lose blood and recover your body wont need as much blood to function the next time.

@Erklings25
The only two things I didn't do was the optional small bio and the others, Which I had nothing for since others is so open. So may you tell me which one of these two things I need to do. Also I am sorry for wasting your time

[Aphelion]

@hagroden@yukisaa@Billsomething

To Ved, that is true, and I apologize for the wait. And though Yukisaa didn't post something I necessarily have to interact with (since she's technically closer to Ved at this point) but having me hindering Ved's process means he can't smoothly interact with her, and she can't move on smoothly either. So I apologize to Yukisaa as well. And I'm also making @Rick Sanchez wait at this point as well, so that's another bad on my part. :/

My other post on the last page of the OOC sort of details the issue I'm having with writing at the moment, but I'm going to get off my ass and do it regardless. Was hoping for some feedback on it, and would still like some should anyone wish to supply their input.

...I don't wanna railroad people into anything, even though I have some ideas that might be fun to encounter. It feels like I'd be stepping too far into the GM territory doing what I have in mind.

@Aphelion

And to clarify, I was thinking of putting us in 1 of 2 possible situations.

First one is bandits.
Second is animulz. _{horrible spelling intentional for comedic relief}

I was also hoping for them to be more natural and a surprise, but again, that's more GM territory. It makes me feel uncomfortable to do that without anyone else's input.

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@Lady Athena Ah, understandable then. :D My bad if it seemed like I was riding your ass or anything about it (since I re-read it and I sound like a real bastard, to myself atleast). It sounds fair to me as long as it has some negatives as well as positives.

And though those other categories are optional, it might be nice to get some additional character flair (not background if you'd prefer to keep all of that hidden for IC development) but maybe more of like... What her mannerisms might be, how her voice sounds, does she prefer one type of food over another. Just anything to make her seem more alive than a mysterious shadow lurky character. Even a character themesong would give us more of a vibe for her. :]

[Lady Athena]

@Aphelion
Dont worry about it, I didnt read it as if you were being a bastard.
Also thank you for giving me some details about what would improve my application

[Rick Sanchez]

I'm also making @Rick Sanchez wait at this point as well, so that's another bad on my part. :/

@Aphelion

Don't worry about it, everybody's a little busy lately. c:

Was hoping for some feedback on it, and would still like some should anyone wish to supply their input.

@Aphelion

My opinion? The plot's thickening and no one's actively complaining (and this group has proven that when someone has a problem with something, they'll voice it). It seems like everyone's silence means that they're fine with what's going on, and unless GM has a problem with it, I wouldn't worry too much--I like where this is going, anyways.

[Lady Athena]

Is this a better application?

Am I able to join? If so please see application in the tab below

Character App

Appearance:

Her eyes are blue instead of brown
Name: Silvia
Age: 16
Occupation before the tragedy: School girl
Personality: She doesn't talk much, but she seems to lurk in the shadows. No one knows much about her but she seems to be around to prevent any problems from arising.
Weapons:
•Sword

•Blood Scythe (Summons when her blood is spilled on her sword) (Her scythe is a bio-weapon and she does suffer side effects of blood loss)
(See Appearance for image of scythe)
Short bio:
Silvia was the typical schoolgirl, didn’t want to be there and such. But in her spare time she trained the way of the sword as a hobby since they interested her. But when the apocalypse of beasties (I am just going to call the mutated animals this) began she was seen met with the problem of range and almost fell prey to one of these creatures. Luckily for her a young man saved her and they escaped. This boy showed her around his base of operations which was just a small weapon store.
Life went on till the store was attacked. He handed her a weapon case and told her to run. She listened soon finding herself all alone… She looked at the case after reaching a roof top of a building. She opened it to find a sword like weapon with a note telling her all about it.
Other: 'your nuclear weapons don't scare me!'

[Erklings25]

@Lady Athena Oh don't worry you can just add them in! (Bio is optional though.)

(After reading post) Yeah you keep on missing a certain part listed in the rules. Please check them again.

[Lady Athena]

@Erklings25
I have edited the post rather than re-posting it

[Erklings25]

@Lady Athena Great accepted!

[Lady Athena]

@Erklings25
Thank you

[yukisaa]

And though those other categories are optional, it might be nice to get some additional character flair (not background if you'd prefer to keep all of that hidden for IC development) but maybe more of like... What her mannerisms might be, how her voice sounds, does she prefer one type of food over another. Just anything to make her seem more alive than a mysterious shadow lurky character. Even a character themesong would give us more of a vibe for her. :]

@Aphelion

are you preferring to your character or to ours? and i think your ideas are good.

[Aphelion]

@yukisaa I was specifically referring to Lady Athena's character in that portion of my post. (pretty much everything under the horizontal bar was for her, sorry about that)

As soon as I can sit down to write, I'll be posting for this RP first before any of my others.

[Aphelion]

Sorry if my post seems long and railroady with little chance for interaction, but feel free to find things and do things on your own if you want.

I'm super sorry that this reply took so horribly long. :/

@Lady Athena

Also, my character assumes Silvia is with us since my character has probably seen Silvia at the camp lurking on the outskirts.

EDIT/UPDATE:

I'm just setting the stage since I took us in this direction. Again, feel free to fight these spiders how you want, you don't have to wait for me to reply with the spider's actions. They're NPCs so take control of them. I'm not the GM, so if @Erklings25 wants to edit or add anything please do.

[Erklings25]

This is still going?