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Jangel13 said
Well I will when someone else replies

Someone else character orr? o.O

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Well I already have an idea on what I'll do, kinda like a flash back when I see someone familiar walk by the barracks

Okidoki, go for it ^_^

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Love it all thank you, I'm going to steal one of those and see how everyone reacts to it

No problem ^_^ I just thought I'd give you a little nudge since the more side plots, the more interesting characters become :P And you seemed to be having problems with finding things to do ^_^ And go ahead, I suggested them for you, it'd be interesting how you'll play it out :) Also, you can have more than one side-plot or have more plots stem off of your main one, that's what I'm doing, it'll give you more room to make more characters and that increases your chance of interacting and become a part of the RP's overall story.

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RIGHT, I've got something to say about Hasayo's and Nicias's recent posts.

Gio is not a Lieutenant.

Hasayo you can't give out Lieutenant positions for Shinigami's not in your squad XDD If he wants to become Lieutenant, he'd have to join Squad 13, work for it first, then Hasayo can give him the position in his own squad. However, you can give him a recommendation, but he hasn't even worked for the Squad 13 Captain sooooo why would the Captain give him one? XDD Hasayo, hun, you're a Bleach Captain remember, you know Bleach more than the vast majority of us XD Heck, you called me and Zane out on the 'Communicating with our Zanpakuto's outside of Jinzen' thing XD So Com'on. I know it's been a while but you are still a Captain, you're allowed to say no xP

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Jangel13 said
No, thank you for the suggestion, so your suggesting that I start my own side story. What do you mean relate to gio? What I don't know is what I'm limited to in my side story plot

Okay and well, Gio was an example, I mean your side plot would open up a background for your character, gives them a little more life and something to relate to others with. For instance, my characters Fumio an Souta can relate to Zane's characters Aya and Chie due to similar things happening in all of their pasts which is family issues. But that was just a suggestion, I don't think you should build your character on the basis of someone else's.

From what I see of your character, they're eager to become the Captain of Squad two, maybe only because you like the Squad in general. But, what I'd suggest is that you build upon your characters want, like why does he want to become a Captain so bad? Why Squad two in particular? Does he idolise the Squad two Captain? Or is his family trying to force him into a higher rank due to their high expectations of him? Or does he feel that become a Captain will help him achieve something other than just a high rank? Maybe someone's looking for him? Maybe he made a deal with someone from an outside organisation that ended up in them taking his family hostage or as slaves and he feels that he needs the power of a Squad two Captain to rescue them?

Seriously, the possibilities are endless and having a side plot is fun to play out. Not just for you, but for other people reading or other characters witnessing it play out ^_^

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Jangel13 said
no need now that I know im not the only one in squad two. now I just need to talk to someone about doing something, I bear you no ill will but I still want to be the captain....or at least lieutenant. or if the opportunity arises a visor

If you really wanted to talk to someone, you could of said in the OOC "Is there any Squad two peeps that my character can meet?" Instead if saying there's no one in the Squad. Also, Kaizo is in Squad two, he went on missions with other squads too. You need to make an effort to meet other's, you can't even become a Captain without the recommendation of other Captains, which you won't get if you don't try to communicate with others. Anyway, does your character have a back story? Maybe one that could make the relate to possibly Gio perhaps? Instead of just waiting around, maybe try develop your character some more and create a side plot. Make your character interesting to follow instead of begging for missions from Captains. Just a suggestion if you're bores waiting around. I don't even know I'd Gio has a story either. Do your character's not have past's? I mean, I do follow both characters sometimes and I can't see anything that separates them from NPC's

I'm just giving suggestions, I'm not trying to be mean if you think I am ^_^ I'm just trying to nudge you to develop your character somewhat as it could open opportunities to interact with other people.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Kurisa said
Juki had brought Kaizo back to the Hideout and had him healed up before he called Kaizo into the dining room, Juki motioned for Kaizo to sit down then began speaking "" Kaizo listened to Juki then sighed "I'm sorry Master Juki. I understand I acted harshly to the situation, however it was only because my friends were there...not only that but I have someone special back there but I don't even know if she remembers me anymore." Juki watched Kaizo as he spoke then Juki closed his eyes and began speaking "" Kaizo bowed his head and began thinking about Rio. That was all he wanted to do now was get back to her and just be with her but with every passing moment he couldn't help but feel as if he was loosing her...he may already have lost her. This time however, he would do what his Master said and if what he said was true he would get to see Rio soon...

Ritsuna

"Masterrr~ Here's dinner~" Ritsuna walked into the dining room holding a steaming platter of food between her two oven mitts. Placing it on the middle of the table, she smiled at her Master. "I hope you like i-" Her sentence was cut off by the sight of Kaizo at the other end of the table. Her eyes narrowed at Kaizo dangerously as she crossed her arms. After a minute of just looking, she reached a mitted hand behind her back and grabbed the handle of her frying pan while walking towards Kaizo. Not a minute too soon-TONG! "How dare you disrespect my Master like that!! You Do Not Leave Unless Master Says So!!!" She had hit him over the head with her frying-pan rather hard, no doubt causing a lump...

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Kurisa said
Shiro now the Captain of Squad 11 and feeling like he had finally earned the title Kenpachi wanted to celebrate but he knew asking his Squad to celebrate with him was pointless, they would never agree as a lot of them had seen Shiro drunk and Shiro drunk was NOT good for anyone, especially them. So without a word Shiro left his barracks, his tattered Haori flickering in the wind as he walked down one of the many roads of the Seireitei. After a short walk he arrived at a bar and the second he stepped in everything seemingly stopped which only caused him to grin, he then walked to the counter then spoke "Get me the strongest drink you got! And don't give me any shit!" The barkeeper shook a little as he grabbed the bottle of drink for Shiro, he then went to get a small cup only to have the bottle snatched from his hand and found Shiro chugging it down, he then slammed the bottle down then spoke "Get me another!"

Nishiki Kalemoru

"Heh, it was fun Karohara, you should try it~" "Hmm... Maybe sometime Nishiki, only if you do it with me" "I don't see why not hehe" Nishiki grinned as she sat at the bar of her favourite pub. In front of her was a pint of beer as she had grown accustom to the flavour over the past year. All of a sudden, the door to the pub swung open, producing nothing but silence. Nishiki, however, was too lost in her own world to even noticed and only ordered herself more drinks, feeling the need to loosen up abit since she had been working extremely hard recently. Down at the other end of the bar sat a man with a voice all too familiar to Nishiki, even in her tipsy state. "Captain!" She cheered, the people that sat between her and her Captain had moved after hearing that... Nishiki only looked at them and tutted. "Pussy's~" She giggled before turning to Karohara. "Com'on, lets sit next to Captain~ I've heard that he recently gained the Kenpachi title, he must be celebrating~" Grinning, Nishiki stood and expected Karohara to follow but instead had gotten the opposite response. "Naa, I think I'll go, I've heard that Shiro could be quite... difficult to deal with when drunk" "Nawww, Com'on! It's our Captainnnn~" "Nope. Catch you later Nishiki" The woman Nishiki was with stood and left the pub. "Fine, be that way, I'll just have fun with Captain than!" She stuck her tongue out at Karohara before grabbing her unfinished drink and moving closer to Shiro. "Heeeey, Captain! Mind if I sit here?" She patted the seat next to Shiro, swaying a little due to how much she had drunk already which was quite abit.

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Kurisa said
Shou looked at Rio as she spoke, he then noticed her drift off a little but it seemed for once she was smiling, it was then Shou knew he wanted Rio to be his Mentor. He saw the kind side of her and that was what he wanted in a mentor, As Rio mentioned Squad 2 he just couldn't help but see her mind drift off and when it did he got closer to her then pulled on her uniform and looked up at her "I don't want to be in Squad 2, I want you as my Mentor so I will likely join the Squad you are in..." Shou looked up at her with an innocent face, his hair falling infront of his left eye a little

Rio Okotaru Darishimo

Once Rio looked back, he was tugging on her uniform... Cuteness was certainly one of Rio's weaknesses... Shou must of known because he was certainly getting to her... Rio's face blanked for a moment as she looked down at him, noting the fact that he was shorter than her. "... Well, someone of your level of skill... should be with someone of a higher level... But... If you're completely sure that you'd want me as your mentor.... I guess... I could fill the position until you're ready to take on a person of higher skill as your mentor..." Although Rio didn't feel that she was right for the job... She had made up her mind. If Shou thought so strongly towards this then... She guessed there would be no harm in accepting the proposition. "Keep in mind though Shou, I will not go easy on you. You will not be able to give up no matter what. If you're willing to accept the challenge, I'll become you mentor, for now atleast." She crossed her arms, but gave another small smile to show that she wasn't all stone...

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Zane620 said
Aya nodded as Souta spoke about who that was, and what was going on. A battle to the death pretty much, yet it seemed more like Souta wanted nothing like this to happen, and despite him saying don't get involved, Aya couldn't help but pout and lightly punch Souta's shoulder. "idiot, your face tells more than what you say. " Aya then crouched a little before jumping up really high into the air, enough that she was below Fumio. "Hey Femme! Why can't you just drop it, and talk it out? Fighting can only go so far. Besides this isnt the Femme I know, and I know it's not the Femme, that Chie knows." Aya said before shunpoing in front of the Golem guy. "And you. Can't you find it in your heart to forgive Femme? From what it sounds like, you all had a hard time growing up, maybe Femme had reasons fro what he did in the past. Yet that's just it, the past. Its suppose to be left there for a reason." Aya then looked at both Fumio and the Golem man. "So come on Femme, lighten up a bit, you always tell me to be more considerate of my actions, so i think you should talk with Rocky without violence.....Or you know, i could kick both of your asses." Aya said as she looked at Rocky, and quickly poked his cheek.

Fumio Hari Kouineji, Tatsuki Dou Hari & Souta Fushimaru Hari

Souta felt Aya punch him lightly, then after she spoke, his eyes dropped to the floor. Aya then jumped. "Aya! Don't!... Ugh, not like she'll ever learn to listen to me..." He pursed his lips and continued to watch, knowing that Aya wasn't the type to stand back and let the inevitable happen... But he felt like she'd be able to bring about change...

"HEHEHEhehehe~!" Fumio couldn't help but laugh, it had been a while since he had felt his alive. This feeling was almost unfamiliar to him now... But he still enjoyed it, being able to let go... While moving at a high speed velocity, Fumio held his sealed Zanpakuto horizontally, both hands on the hilt. With three sharp and precise strokes, Fumio had cut the Golem in a zig-zag pattern, chopping from it's hip to stomach, then turning to chop from it's stomach to upper back, then lastly from upper back to across Tatsuki's left wrist.

"Arrrh.... shit..." Blood poured onto the top of the Golem's head as Tatsuki's left hand had been cleaved off, leaving the guy one-handed. "Fuck!!!" Tatsuki yelled, holding the end of his left arm with his right hand. The Golem's left hand shattered also. Tatsuki's movements caused it to mimic the guy in doing the same actions.

"Oh fuck yes~..." Fumio had stopped himself, turning to look down at Tatsuki. Blood had been splattered across Fumio's blade, as well as a little had got onto his face. "Ehehehe~ Need a hand? AHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!" Fumio laughed loudly, his eyes completely clouded in amusement and blood-lust as the light reflected off of them. His face held a wide, creepy grin which showed once he promptly stopped laughing to look at Tatsuki, licking his lips.

"Prick... y-you'll die.... f-for what-t... y-you've DONE!!" Tatsuki yelled before lifting his right hand off of his left arm, swinging it back and forming a fist. This was followed by the Golem doing the action, but then someone stopped him... A girl had decided to speak up.

Once Aya joined the field, she began preaching to Fumio... He wasn't listening at all at first, still bent on fighting Tatsuki, but then she mentioned Chie causing his face to snap back to normal for a moment before he looked at her. "Ch-Chie" He whispered before a large stone fist clashed with his body, sending him flying and crashing into the ground.

Aya then turned to Tatsuki after he hit Fumio, making him look up at the stranger with only his right eye open. "Forgive? Past? Ahaha-argh..... Y-you don't know K-Kazuhiko.... He's a monster.... h-he needs.... t-to die.... Ta-talking... wont help. He's killed too many people... to be forgiven" Tatsuki spat the word out venomously as Fumio managed to stand, a large creator underneath him from where he crash-landed. "Eheh... Eheh... Ahaahahahaha... AHAHAHAHAH!" Fumio began laughing before he shunpo'ed directly into Tatsuki's face. His eyes were wide in utter amusement, in contrast to Tatuski's widened eyes of complete fear. "You think I'm a monster? Aheheheeheheh~ You don't know the meaning of monster... I would show you right now... but you're too pathetic, weak, for me to even bother~" Fumio plunged his sealed Zanpakuto into Tatsuki's stomach, the latter closing in on himself while coughing up blood on Fumio shoulder. Tatsuki's eyes were as wide as dinner plates, the realisation of his death dawning on him.

"KAZUHIKO!" Souta screamed, shaking at the sight in front of him... 'O-Oh no... I-I thought Aya would help him... Huu... Look at how weak I am, relying on Aya.... I.... I know there's nothing else we can do... but... this... this can't go on.... Why didn't Tatsuki just let Furoshi help him!!' Souta clutched his head with both hands, squeezing his eyes closed.

"You, all of you, know what happens when I find you~ Looking for me only makes it easier for me to find you~ Even if you knew better and hid like a good little number, you might of been able to live a little longer~ Oh well, it's your fault you died today~ Time to say goodbye nine." Fumio watched Tatsuki cough up more blood, hearing him choke on it... At the same time, he pushed his blade into Tatsuki a little further. "Kesshō no sōsei ~ Gaishō" "ULGH!!!" Crystals pierced through Tatuski's body, a cluster of thick Crystals shot out of his back. Blood then began to pour out of Tatuski's mouth and onto Fumio's right arm as the guy took his final breath and feel limp onto Fumio's arm. The Golem beneath mimicked each movement before shattering into a pile of rocks the second Tatuski's heart had stopped beating.

Through the whole time, Fumio hadn't blink, not even once, only watched silently. Souta, however, couldn't bear to look... A few tears leaked out of his tightly closed eyes. "T-Tatsuki-san.... N-no....". "..." The Crystals that poked out of Tatsuki's body began to cloud with black. Once the Crystals had turned fully black they retracted into Fumio's Shikai before he pulled it out of Tatsuki's body while the two of them began to fall. Quickly, Fumio shunpo'ed to catch Tatsuki's body before it hit the floor and instead, landed softly. Looking down at the lifeless body in his arms, Fumio pursed his lips and blinked, his face returning to a blank state. "I'm sorry.... But you knew what would happen and you tried to believe that the outcome could of been different this time... but you were wrong Tatsuki-kun...." Fumio turned before he started walking over to Souta, carrying Tatsuki.

"You stop right there Crimson!!" Souta had opened his eyes, glaring furiously at Fumio. The latter immediately stopped, looking back at Souta with a blank stare. "What the Fuck Kazuhiko! I thought you were fucking done with this!" Souta yelled more, causing Fumio to just watch him and register but not react to it. "He could of lived! You could of let him go!!!" At this point, Fumio bent down and placed Tatsuki's body onto the ground. Standing up, he looked back at Souta. "Don't forget who I am Souta. As much as you want to ignore it, hide it or erase it, you can't. It is who I am, I can't help that... Kill or be killed...." Turning around, Fumio jumped onto the top point of a nearby tree. "I'll see you two back at the Seireitei." His back was to Souta and his voice was monotonous.... however the smirk on his face that he hid from both Aya and Souta showed a completely different emotion towards what he just did.... Within a second after speaking, he shunpo'ed.

"DAMMIT!!!" Souta just couldn't hold it in, he needed to yell....