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Bleach: A New Dawn

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Bleach: A New Dawn

~ Fight Time-skip ~

Rio's body crashed onto the hard dirt, creating a creator beneath her. Streams of blood dripped down her forehead while more blood splattered onto the floor as she coughed violently. Fumio had lowered to the floor promptly after, blood pouring down his face from a slice across his left cheek while more blood dripped down his left hand. Both of them looked in bad shape, however Rio was much much worse. She heard steps moving closer to her from behind, however she didn't have enough energy to escape... Fumio's hand grabbed Rio by her hair and dragged her out of the creator. Grunts and small whimpers of pain left the girl's mouth as she lifted her hands up to try and pry his hands off of her hair.

Fumio suddenly stopped and let her go, causing her body to fall limp onto the ground. She turned her head, eyes as wide as they could possibly go as she struggled to get away. Her breathing becoming erratic. 'N-No! This Can't Be The End!-" "OW!" Fumio stomped on her left leg, forcing Rio to stop and glare dangerously at him. "Get The Fuck Off Of Me" "SHUT UP!" Fumio responded huskily, leaning down to grab Rio by her throat with his right hand, lifting her up a little. Rio's hands moved to his wrists as she struggled to pull him off. "... Look at yourself... Pathetic" Fumio watched her struggle, already having stuck his Shikai into the ground. Currently, he held a crystal in his left hand. "You should know the drill Huerona... As a member of the clan... I-I'm..." Fumio suddenly felt himself hesitate, shaking his head to force his anger back and halt his thinking. He then held the crystal above Rio's right eye. She looked at it and then at him... frightened. She was completely terrified of what he was planning to do next... "Wh-wha... N-no.. pl-" "How many times do I have to say SHUT UP-!" "AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Rio screamed as the crystal was plunged into her eye, blood splattering all over Fumio's face.

He had plunged it in halfway before ever so slowly pushing it in deeper, making the pain even more excruciating. He watched without blinking, unable to tear his eyes off of this sight. Tears soon poured down Rio's face from her left eye, bloody tears poured down her right... She was even more desperate to get him off of her right now, feeling the crystal inch closer and closer to her brain. Her screams made her throat red-raw as she continued to pull his hand off of her neck. Frantically moving her right hand onto the ground, she quickly felt around for Hana or Kan. 'YES!' She found Kan and grabbed just below the main blade before thrusting it into Fumio's right side within a millisecond. This, of course, forced Fumio to let go and retract back, his hands covering the wound as blood flowed out continuously. Rio took this chance to escape, grabbing her other Zanpakuto before shunpo'ing.
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She ran as fast as she could, a splitting headache slicing through the right side of her head as she limped. However, now wasn't the time to think about the pain as she could feel Fumio slowly but surely catching up. 'G-g-got... to get.. a-away' Rio thought shakily, unable to breath with only her left eye to rely on for vision. It was extremely difficult, but she managed.
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Fumio watched her leave, holding his right side. Rio had cut him rather deeply, but that didn't stop him from pulling his blade out of the dirt and following her. His speed had decreased dramatically due to his wounds but so did Rio's. His right hand cradled the right side of his body as his firer gaze pinpointed Rio's location. She had been shunpo'ing, but only a few times as her energy was running low. He would of shunpo'ed but decided now was not the right time, atleast not until he had spotted her run into the Seireitei. Fumio didn't actually take them extremely far from the Seireitei after all, he only took them to an open space within a forest. 'Shit... I can't let her escape. I must kill her....'
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Rio darted through the pathways as fast as she could, avoiding everyone. She didn't want to get stopped as she could still feel Fumio following her. The second she had caught sight of Squad 6, she shunpo'ed inside, right outside her room. Bursting through the door, she fell onto the floor but quickly sat up while grabbing her hair and trying to conceal her screams of agony. Her head hurt so bloody much...

"Found You!" Fumio had shunpo'ed to her door, his blade raised. "Finally! There's no escape! I'LL END YOU RIGHT NOW!" He didn't care for where they were, all he cared about was killing Rio.

Rio's life flashed before her eye... Well, the part that she could remember... Fumio's blade seemed to be reflected in her eye as she was staring right at her death. "Th-this... really is it..." She looked down, accepting the truth finally before her eye drifted closed. "... So be it..." Lifting her face up, she surrendered her body, ready for what was coming. An unnoticeable small smile rested on her lips... Despite all of this, she'd finally be set free of everything... She wouldn't have to worry about her memories coming to bite her in the butt anymore... Besides, she always wanted to die with a smile more than a frown... she didn't know why, but she just did.

Fumio just stood there and watched her... surrender... 'STOP HESITATING! JUST DO IT!' He screamed inside his mind, trying to move his blade forward as his eyes widened with anger... But it just wouldn't. He couldn't... Just couldn't do it... To see her surrender like this broke him instantly. He knew her well and also knew that she'd rather die than surrender... That must of meant she accepted death but... "Kazuhiko... stop..." Souta grabbed his left arm, lowering it along with his blade. "So-Souta" "Had enough yet Prince?" Another voice spoke, causing Fumio to turn his face to his right. Shock again overtook his body. "R-Ronda?" The woman stood there with a slight frown and walked passed Fumio, looking at Rio. Bending down in front of her, Ronda spoke again, her voice softer. "You can relax now... Open your eye" Rio heard the familiar voice as her eye fluttered open. "...You again..." She spoke in an unimpressed tone, a frown adding to her bloody features. Ronda stood and turned around, looking at Fumio. "What made you hesitate? I would of thought that you'd kill her at any chance you'd get." Fumio grit his teeth at this as his expression became enraged again. "I-...I can't.... Do this anymore... She doesn't deserve to die" His expression soon turned to sadness as tears poured out of his eyes again uncontrollably. "I've had enough of killing people close to me... I've killed the majority of Marked... But I'm done with this... I'm not like that woman... I can't kill Huerona... Sh-she even surrendered... Just like Souta.... B-but... N-no more!" He shook his head violently before running out of the room, trying to control his tears but doing a poor job of it.

Souta looked at Ronda then at Rio before back at Ronda. Both him and Ronda nodded before he ran out of the room after Fumio. "KAZUHIKO! WAIT!"

Rio just sat on the floor, utterly confused. Her head continued to ache harshly which caused her to let out another whimper of pain before abruptly grabbing her head again. Ronda looked down at her, walking over before tapping the point of the crystal, causing the outside of it to shatter but still leaving Rio with a crystal for an eye, a crystal eye... Bloody tears continued to leak out of her right eye but the pain began fading slowly. Atleast now she was able to close both eyes. She had both squeezed shut for a while as she waited for the pain to pass, but as soon as she opened them again, Ronda was gone and her door was closed. Rio looked around, still only able to see out of her left eye to find that she was all alone as usual.... '... What in the world... Just happened?....' Dumbfound Rio was... utterly dumbfounded...

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Kaien is accepted, with History as WIP oxo

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DeathstrokeSW said
Ok then. I don't want to cause trouble. I like you guys xD So I'll rewrite his history. 2 things are certain though. Hand tremors due to rage and Squad 11. Though Abi, some help might be appreciated; (singsong tone) and you'd have a member of squad 11 to help you

Dokay, I'll have another look oxo

Bleach: A New Dawn

Rio Okotaru Darishimo & Fumio Hari Kouineji

Fumio and Rio reappeared in the middle of a forest. Immediately, Fumio threw Rio in front of him, watching as her body skid across the hard dirt, kicking up quite a bit of dust, enough to make Rio cough. Her eyes opened slowly, narrowing at Fumio as she slowly got to her feet. The latter, however, had a gaze or pure hatred pinned onto Rio, his teeth grit and bearing as a growl rolled out of his mouth, almost like an angered dog.

"Your time has come Huerona.... 14..." Rio's eyes widened at the number while Fumio unsheathed his Zanpakuto, pointing the tip of his blade towards her left ankle. "H-How did yo-" "Know?... I know who you are... very well... I can't believe you've forgotten ME!" At that second, Fumio launched off of his back foot towards Rio, his Zanpakuto hilt gripped with both hands as he swung it to his right. He looked thirsty for blood... More specifically Rio's blood. The girl had no idea what was happening, however knew she had to defend herself quickly. Drawing both of her Zanpakuto's, she crossed them in front of her face, just in time to block Fumio's attack.

During the close proximity, Rio noticed the look of utter anger on the guy's face but then a tear left his eye, making her eyebrows shoot up in confusion... "Wh-who are you?... Wh-" "Arrrrg... Shut Up!" Fumio's voice had became harsh as he lifted his Zanpakuto back, behind his head before slamming it down again onto Rio's blades twice. "STOP! TALKING!" The force caused Rio to drop onto her knees but she still managed to hold the block. Fumio's head then tilted forward, his hair covering his eyes before he stepped backwards slowly, sliding his blade off of hers. Ridgedly, he continued to step backwards before stopping, giving himself some space while putting a little distance between the two of them. Rio watched, wide-eyed and a little scared... Clearly this guy knew something about her but she knew nothing about him... Also, he was trying to kill her, what could possibly of happened?! Standing up herself, she took a breath to calm herself as her eyes settled into a stern look, piercing through Fumio. She was not going to take this situation lightly and would defend herself as much as she possibly could.

Suddenly, a burst of crystal silver energy erupted out of the guy, streaks of red wrapped around it, the colour of blood... A ring of wind followed promptly, blowing Rio's hair and clothes back violently while tearing through the trees. Rio still maintained her stare during... 'He's really not playing around...' She noticed the guy's brilliant-red hair wave about within the energy, revealing the guy's own enraged, deadly serious glare whilst more silent tears flew out of his eyes. Slowly, he lifted his black and red Zanpakuto straight out in front of him, pointing it at Rio again. "Kesshō no sōsei... Gaishō" Fumio whispered. Light enveloped his blade, causing Rio to cover her eyes for a split second before watching as it grew, encasing the entire blade as well as the guy's right hand in pure black and silver crystal. "Well then..." Rio spoke, tilting her head down also. "Show your truth in the darkness of light, HanaKan" She uttered, her own blades surrounding in light before revealing their Shikai state. Rio then looked up, noticing Fumio take four steps closer to her. This made Rio abruptly jump into the air, her palms open and close together as her thumbs held onto the handles of her Shikai. "Hadō Number 31 Shakkahō!" She released a medium sized red orb before firing it straight at Fumio. The latter, however, responded by looking up, raising his Shikai blade up and over his head before bringing it down forcefully, releasing an arc of crystal that travelled towards Rio's Kido blast. It absorbed the Kido while continuing to travel towards the Rio. She narrowly dodged the crystal arc by turning her body to the left, the arc travelling passed her before exploding in the air. "What?" She quietly questioned before abruptly diverting her attention back onto Fumio who had launched into the air, his blade ready to pierce her stomach. Rio blocked the attack with the black bars of her Shikai. Fumio's eyes seemed to just grow with more rage while releasing more conflicting tears by the second. Lifting his blade back, he began swinging with force at Rio, the latter blocking each swing however the power was pushing her back each time. "You won't survive Huerona." Fumio growled, continuing to push Rio back while adding more strength to his swings. Rio only kept focused on not giving him an opening to attack, ignoring what he was saying.

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No, no adopting with a previous Captain, talk to Kurisa about it but I highly doubt he'd let you do it considering the fact that that would make him higher than Shiro...

Bleach: A New Dawn

Rio Okotaru Darishimo

Rio continued to run closer and closer towards the Seireitei, her thoughts occupied with how she could get stronger without her Zanpakuto's considering the fact that they refused to help her. 'Limit? That's impossible... This much power is not my limit no matter what they say.... It can't be true,...I WILL NOT LET IT BE TRUE! I NEED POWER TO FIND KAIZO!' Her eyes became ferice with determination, her mind settling on paying a visit to her Captain. 'He'll be able to help me'.

She entered the Seireitei, booming through the pathways towards Squad six when she was stopped by bumping into a random shinigami in the way. "S-sorry ma'am!" Spoke the member, scrambling to pick up papers that he had dropped onto the floor. Rio had fell on her ass and glared at the member as a reflex but soon her eyes softened a touch and she stood, gathering up the rest of the papers to hand to him. "Don't worry about it, just make sure you're aware of your surrounding at all times..." She didn't smile, still in a bit of a rush. The member bowed, revealing two other members behind him, a little bit further down the pathway. Rio paid no attention to these, until she noticed one of them staring at her in complete shock. 'What is his problem?' Her face held onto it's neutral state as she looked away, turning and about to take off before a hand in her hair forced her to stop.

Fumio Hari Kouineji & Souta Fushimaru

Fumio continued to stare in shock. Her bluey-black her, plum eyes, porcelain skin and her trademark expression... "Th-that's..." He whispered, Souta feeling uneasy about this entire situation knowing what would happen next. He chose to keep quiet however and let what was going to happen, happen... Fumio continued to watch the girl until it came to the point that the member she had bumped into had ran off, leaving only her. Her gaze directed at him, causing his heart to stop for a moment. After all of this time, she was right under his nose all along... Within the Gotei 13. He wasn't expecting the reaction he received... which was none. This caused his eyes to widen further and a small gasp to leave his lips. "Yeah... I've seen her before... She looked right at me too... I don't think she know's who we are anymore..." Souta voiced quietly, a hint of sadness in his tone. But then, he looked to his left... Fumio was no where to be found.

All three

"UN!" Rio let out a noise in pain as her hair had been pulled to stop her from moving. "Do you know who I am Huerona?..." Fumio seethed through grit teeth. "Wha-!" "KAZUHIKO!" He had shunpo'ed with Rio in his grip, leaving Souta behind. The latter stepped forward and stretched out his hand to stop Fumio but was too late... They were already gone. "DAMMIT!" Souta yelled, clenching his fists in rage. "...Now now.. Just calm down Souta" The smell of applewood filled the area, causing Souta to look behind him... His eyes widening by the second. "You..."

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DeathstrokeSW said
Well what about Kaien?

What about Kaien? I wrote up there about his history ^

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DeathstrokeSW said
Let me explain. My plan for my Arrancar was to introduce him as having Juuuuuuuuuussssst become an Arrancar with no memories of being a hollow. He wanders Hueco Mundo, searching for who he is and his purpose. Then, he comes to Rukongai somehow and discovers who he is and what his purpose is. Eventually he betrays the Arrancar and hopefully joins Soul Society

Dude, Kurisa won't allow it because he isn't bringing them in yet sooooooooooooo yeah

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DeathstrokeSW said
History: A soul who has lived in the Rukongai for most of his life, Kaien comes from low class beginnings, suffering beatings from those around him for no reason other than survival of the fittest. Growing up, he was an angry kid; living in the hellish time near the end of the previous Soul Society. The beatings soon stopped, but the life of violence grew worse; hollows took over a quadrant of the Rukongai, backed by the enemy the soul reapers of days past could not defeat. Soon, the regular Soul Reapers pulled back and Captains and Lieutenants, sometimes 3rd seats patrolled the quadrant.

One by one they all fell, not to the hollows, but to the Enemy no normal soul dared look upon, for fear of death. While he was still a boy, hiding from the Enemy, he came upon a man who would come to be his idol: The (now deceased) Captain of Squad 11. Their meeting was by chance, and it followed like this: Kaien was hiding from the Enemy in a house, hidden in a closet, raging at himself and his predicament when he felt an unusual, massive amount of spiritual pressure. Crawling on the floor, he peeked over the window. There stood the Captain of squad 11, decimating his opponent in a matter of minutes. When the bloodshed was over, the captain noticed Kaien, and walked over, introducing himself. He immediately noticed the kid's rage and decided to take him in, formally adopting Kaien in an effort to harness the rage Kaien felt into a constructive weapon instead of a destructive path. The dead captain loved Kaien as if he was Kaien's biological father, even leaving the Haori to Kaien in his will. Kaien was brought to the Seireitei, living in the Captain's quarters as he grew.

Unfortunately, this peace was not to last; Kaien's adoptive father fell to the Enemy, right before Kaien's eyes. This resulted in the permanent tremor in Kaien's right hand and the resurgence of his rage. In an effort to protect Kaien, he was sent to the Academy, where he spent a longer amount of time than any other graduate; the only time he left the grounds was for his adoptive father's funeral. Kaien was given the Haori and per his wishes, it still hangs in Squad 11's barracks, both a reminder of their fallen leader and a promise. However, a piece of the bottom was stripped off and fashioned into Kaien's glove.

I have an issue with this History:

- For one, the Captain's and seated members couldn't handle a few enemies in the Rukongai? I highly doubts that.
- The Squad 11 Captain wouldn't be so friendly nor would care about anything or anyone other than his own Squad members and killing the enemies, more so killing the enemy. He wouldn't act that way towards a hiding child, if anything, he'd tell the child to be brave and quit hiding like a weakling before he'd walk off to defeat the rest of the enemies.
- If the Captain took him in and he lived in the Squad 11 quarters then why is he waiting to join the Squad? Doesn't make sense.

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