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The young woman chewed on her ration bar idly as she watched the batarian in front of her begin to wake up. It'd taken a long while to track this particular bastard down, far too long if she were being honest. It was just her luck that he thought he'd be safe in Illium...Illum of all places. She gave a soft laugh at the thought, then bit into the ration bar.

Mm, peanut butter was always my favorite. Don't know how to feel about the nut blend in it though. Probably would have been better with some sort of berry flavor. Her face screwed up in thought as the Batarian's eyes began to open...well...one of them anyway. The other two were in no condition to even blink. "Which do you think goes better with tree nut substitute, Barvarn? Raspberry or blackberry substitute? Personally, I'd go with blackberry. It's a little more tart, you know?"

The batarian's good eye was finally focused on her, and she was sure that the glowing visor was off putting in the near dark. The alien had tried to struggle to his feet, to throw something...to escape. But the human just watched from behind her visor, chewing steadily. "I suggest that you take this time to pray to your gods, Batarian. You and I have a lot to talk about once I finish this bar." She took a bite then pointed it at the incapacitated alien as she walked towards him. Idly, she wondered if aliens could sweat. The sheer amount of terror in his eyes certainly suggested that this one would be if he could.

"You could stand, you know. You're not tied down--" She gave a smirk of amusement from behind her helmet as the batarian's struggles returned. He only slipped from the chair he had been propped up in. "My, impatient aren't you? " She walked over to him and gripped him by the collar of his shirt. She forcefully yanked him up and roughly pushed him back into the seat with one hand. "I said that you could stand. Didn't mean that you would. Your legs are broken after all. You took a nasty tumble." She swallowed her bite rhen tossed the bar over her shoulder. The Batarian watched the bar as it disappeared into the darkness, then gulped when her felt an armored hand grip his jaw, "So...where are those humans that you kidnapped? Cooperate, and I will bring you in for the bounty, alive." She pulled the cloth gag down but didn't relinquish her grip. "You've got one shot to have some honor, Slaver."

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Alex looked down at her omni-tool as she sat on some of the crates near the rust bucket she'd be calling "home" for a while.

Package received, full payment has been sent, plus the agreed bonus. Good work. Additional payment will be sent if bonus parameters are met.

Alex snorted at the message but made sure to check her account. When everything was verified and cleared, a turian gave the news that their captain was dead and the rustbucket now belonged to all of them. Alex had forgone her helmet, visor, and armor, and seemed comfy in her pants, boots and hoodie. When they were told they would have to vacate the bay, Alex hurried to follow her new crewmates.

When her eyes caught sight of a batarian, she saw little else. She waited, of course, any decent bounty hunter knew that making enemies was just like making friends. She would wait, watch and study. If he was worth the associated risks, then she would go for the end game. Any moves beforehand would render the powder keg inert...or it would explode before she was prepared for it.

She turned away for the time being and began to walk around. She had noticed a few humans and turians, a quarter, a vorcha, two asari, and a vorcha while she surveyed the ship and it's defensive capabilities as a battleground. Oh, and the sick looking drell.

Her ration bag was slung over her shoulder while her armor and weapon case was clutched in her free hand. After a few minutes, she found the medical bay and began to settle in. She was no doctor, but she was pretty good at patching herself up after a battle--in her humble opinion. She figured it would be best to have someone with some measure of medical experience rather than no one at all.

Once she began to familiarize herself with the equipment, she began to move the various crates to proper places. Once everything was relatively clear, sterilized, and put away, she headed towards the kitchen. While she wouldn't be able to practice her biotics on the ship--hah, the hunk of junk looked like it would get torn apart by Baby's First Biotic Charge!--her metabolism kept chugging along. A small snack was in order...even with the sound of an explosion from somewhere on the ship that wasn't near her.

She was going to strangle Captain Hills for roping her into this...
@AeronFarron That all looks fine and dandy and works with the class.


Awesome, thanks. I'm going to post now. Alex will be in the medic bay.

Edit: She is headed to the kitchen!
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Now I'm curious. >.>


I was just going to switch a few powers out since I was unsure if Assault Mastery had to be explicitly stated or not. I

This would be the updated Power list:

Assault Mastery
Lash
Slam
Biotic Charge
Nova
Smash

Never mind.
@The Grey Warden Ah! Sorry! I meant to round yours up in that block of revisions but something distracted me and I clicked off page.

Everything looks a lot better! You fleshed him out quite a bit and he feels like his own person now. I do find it kind of amusing how Tanya, Alex, and Carlo apparently all fought in Mindoir in separate divisions. Might make sense for one of you guys just to make it the same division because 3 divisions is a crazy high number. But yeah! Accepted and all of that.


Which division would you like Alex to switch to?
Added Alex to the roster. I'm so excited :)

Thanks for checking over Alex! I'll make a few adjustments, maybe keep a brother or two alive (it's just Alex and her dad).
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Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions!

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How to make Tanya embarassed and uncomfortable in 5 seconds: give her fanfare for the most traumatic event of her life. :D


:D fanfare for surviving, of course.
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I won't be doing formal reviews until Saturday, so take the time you need to edit and do changes, but holy shit that was a record in making a quality sheet! I will say forst read through was very good and our characters have a lot of interesting parallels; they even fought in the same battle at Mindoir. I imagine that would be a common ground for the two of them. :)


Thank you! Yeah, I noticed that after I saw the Character tab. But yeah, I think that would be a good point of reference. Especially since your character got a commendation for it, so there may or may not be a bit of initial hero worship/fan girl moment. XD
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