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@Alan Hawke It's generally thin and simple, but I can't see anything really wrong with it. The height and weight need to be filled in, the fields are simple and up to you, just take your best guess. You put N/A under employment and affiliation, but I'd rather see the phrase unemployed or none. The other thing that stands out is your use of Central City, but Keystone City is the Golden Age counterpart. My critiques are minor, but if you deliver in the IC is important.


Updated it and fixed the little things you mentioned. I will also try my very hardest to deliver the highest quality posts in the IC. ^_^
@Nightrunner Here's my character sheet as promised! Let me know if anything doesn't meet standards or anything else. :)

Is this RP still accepting applicants? If so, I gotta know! ^-^
Yay! I'll work on a CS and put it up tomorrow. :)
Leader: King Anthony
Political Belief(s): Nationalist
Economic Model: Mixed Market Economy
Starting Land: England, Ireland
Capital: London
Government Type: Constitutional Monarchy
National language(s): English


Nearly a quarter of a century has passed since Queen Cassandra, former queen of England and mother of Anthony, unified both Ireland and England to form the Great Kingdom of Solitude. While Solitude is a fairly new nation, it is not to be underestimated as it has an "offer one hand but arm the other" way of dealing with other nations. Solitude has an all volunteer military, meaning that all of it's soldiers are willing to lay down their lives for their nation and it's people; it is also the home to many entrepreneurs and intellectuals that work to create the most innovative technology the world has ever seen, such as hard light holograms, multi-directional cloaking, and even very early prototypes of hover-bikes. Solitude could prove quite useful as a military and trading ally; however, if Solitude is challenged by another nation, it will not back down. Since Solitude is an island, it has been isolated from the world for generations; In a few days, as his first major change as King, the freshly crowned King Anthony, will open Solitude's borders for the first time to the entire world. He hopes that Solitude can become the world's citadel, a place where other nation's leaders and diplomats can mingle and their people can trade resources with one another. But be warned, if King Anthony feels that another leader is a little too tall on his or her high horse, he will not hesitate to kick them back down to size.

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