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    1. Apokalipse 12 yrs ago

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8 yrs ago
Mom is out of the hospital so I might actually have time to rp but we'll see
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8 yrs ago
'yo sis we need a thot slayer there's too many thots want to join the thot police we're recruiting'
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8 yrs ago
should I return?
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8 yrs ago
If that ain’t a college mood
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8 yrs ago
“Hullabaloo, and howdy doo! Musty prawns, and Timbucktu! Yeltsy-by, and hibbety-hoo! Kick ’em in the dishpan! Hoo hoo hoo!!”
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Maries and Garies are everywhere. You can't get away from them they will hunt you down.


We must arm ourselves
I'm so excited! I hope this lasts because I can never find a good superhero one. They're always filled with mary-sues and stuff. I once was in this one that lasted for a long time and I made friends with all of them and then it died and I haven't talked to them since. ): Sorry, I'm rambling.



@Apokalipse Both characters are fiiiine, but I think you could expand their power sections a bit. Both of their sections are underdetailed, and one sentence. I'd like at least a paragraph.


Okay, I made it so each is 3 to more sentences.

EDIT: Also, you should make a chatzy so we can all chat (: It helps bond people together and get to know the personality of the people behind the characters. But this is only if you want to...>.<
For some reason the hiders and the urls aren't working for Sawyer.

EDIT: Nevermind. Got them to work.
Here are the edited bio of Piper and the new one of her twin sister, Sawyer. The only thing added to Piper's was the registration number and weakness and the example post. ^_^




That power is more Super-System than Cerebral. Also, she could use an actual weakness rather than the psychological effects... Not that the power is powerful or anything, but one or two weaknesses will do.


Okay ^_^ Any suggestions for weaknesses?
I haven't written the example post yet and its a little rough around the edges, but here is Piper:


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Well, if you're gonna write it that way, then I reconsidered. I'd like to see your sheets.


I'm almost done with Piper's, which is the one who is going to be using pain inducement, so I'll get that up as quick as I can.
@Apokalipse Neat.

The animal powers are fine, buuuuuut not very sure about the Pain Inducement. It's not overpowered per-se... my problem comes from the fact that they're always useless. If you make a guy that causes pain? Well good luck, because it's redundant because of every offensive ability. Taking away pain? Healers make that worthless.

Hope it doesn't seem like I'm ranting, but I'm not really a fan of pain powers. They're always one-trick ponies. And I'd rather have a character with a different power.


Well, it moreso has to do with her character development as my character is someone who creates a lot of pain without noticing it and when she develops her powers and physically hurts someone, she slowly begins to realize that she is causing pain and needs to stop. However, I'll try to find an ability that has the same effect as that.
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