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Name: Maxine “Max” James

Species: Turned Vampire

Age: Appears 21

Appearance:


Personality: Max is a very serious but laid back person. She has a strong drive when in pursuit of knowledge but it takes a lot to upset her. She doesn’t have very many close friends (mostly her sister, Hazel). She will take a leadership role if she feels others are inadequate but would prefer to work independently. She is a very quick learner and has an aptitude for math and science. She is quick witted and can become sharp-tongued and sarcastic if she feels she’s losing the upper hand in a conversation. She is generally accepting of any kind of quirks she sees in others as long as they don’t trample on her.

Equipment: cell phone, headphones

Background: Max was born the second daughter of two very loving and involved parents. Although they weren’t wealthy, she never felt as though she wanted for anything. Her older sister, Hazel, is her idol and best friend. Her father is a piano teacher ( whom her love of music originated from) and her mother is a personal assistant for a wealthy business mogul. She attended the local public school before she was accepted on a full ride science scholarship for a state college. The move across the state was hard on her but she keeps in contact with her family on a daily basis. Her sophomore year of college, Max was attacked walking home alone from a sorority party. She woke up in a dark bedroom with a man who stayed in the shadows. Over the next week, he revealed to her that she was experiencing a change - a change into a vampire. She never managed to see the man and still wonders to this day who he was and what really happened to her. She hasn’t told anyone (including her family) what happened to her but being alone in a city of thousands helps her to keep her secret.

Extra: She’s a chain smoker and has only been turned about a year. She’s constantly wondering about the man who helped her through her change and debates whether she should tell anyone. She works at a local bar (where she picks off drunk, sleezy men for food) and has an obsession with all types of music.
@Kidd

@BreakingMe You might want to explain how she's been hiding the fact that she's a vampire for about a year. Where is she getting the blood? Is she drinking from the vein? Also, you can delete anything I gave you in parenthesis such as "(any notable weaknesses, fun facts, and anything else you want us to know about your character)" so it looks cleaner.

Fix that up and you should be good.


Done - I added that she moved across the state for college so she doesn't see her family and she feeds off of pricks from the bar :)
Name: Maxine “Max” James

Species: Turned Vampire

Age: Appears 21

Appearance:


Personality: Max is a very serious but laid back person. She has a strong drive when in pursuit of knowledge but it takes a lot to upset her. She doesn’t have very many close friends (mostly her sister, Hazel). She will take a leadership role if she feels others are inadequate but would prefer to work independently. She is a very quick learner and has an aptitude for math and science. She is quick witted and can become sharp-tongued and sarcastic if she feels she’s losing the upper hand in a conversation. She is generally accepting of any kind of quirks she sees in others as long as they don’t trample on her.

Equipment: cell phone, headphones

Background: Max was born the second daughter of two very loving and involved parents. Although they weren’t wealthy, she never felt as though she wanted for anything. Her older sister, Hazel, is her idol and best friend. Her father is a piano teacher ( whom her love of music originated from) and her mother is a personal assistant for a wealthy business mogul. She attended the local public school before she was accepted on a full ride science scholarship for a state college. The move across the state was hard on her but she keeps in contact with her family on a daily basis. Her sophomore year of college, Max was attacked walking home alone from a sorority party. She woke up in a dark bedroom with a man who stayed in the shadows. Over the next week, he revealed to her that she was experiencing a change - a change into a vampire. She never managed to see the man and still wonders to this day who he was and what really happened to her. She hasn’t told anyone (including her family) what happened to her but being alone in a city of thousands helps her to keep her secret.

Extra: She’s a chain smoker and has only been turned about a year. She’s constantly wondering about the man who helped her through her change and debates whether she should tell anyone. She works at a local bar (where she picks off drunk, sleezy men for food) and has an obsession with all types of music.


Kansas gets up from the table she was sitting at takes her uneaten tray over to the trash can. She pushes the contents into the dark garbage bag and brings the tray back to the dish line where she drops it onto the assembly line. It clangs loudly but no one seems to notice. The entire room is buzzing with impatience. She's impatient herself but knows it won't help to complain. I have to keep us sane. She heads back to the table and glances at the students sitting beside her.

What will get us through this? She notes that everyone sitting with her seems to make up a number of different cliques, as if everyone is bonding because of the lockdown. Wouldn't that be nice? It's a sarcastic though but some small bit of truth rings out in the statement. What if we really all did bond together? What if after this...whatever this is...we're all the best of the friends? The jocks and the nerds, the cheerleaders and the burnouts, the overachievers and the slackers. That'd be amusing. She looks over at some of her peers who are casually picking after their food. No one eats because, well, the food is disgusting. "If you keep playing with it like that, it'll turn into pizza." She winks at the student across from her when they look up from their tray.



Under the "Clothing Style" section of their appearance, can we use pics or do you prefer a written description?
Are turned vampires on the side of purebred vampires? Are all vampires required a "side" (feral vs purebred/hunters?)

Edit: you're actually probably going to answer then when you open the thread and I'm just jumping the gun. Feel free to ignore me :P.
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