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    1. CMDR Melander 8 yrs ago

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If it has horns, hooves and a smile I'm into it.
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"Hey, you play a lot of kobolds."
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Pat my head and tell me I'm good at RP please.
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Bio

I really like roleplaying. Medieval fantasy is a favourite, but I also have deep roots in Sci-Fi. Big into LOTR, Forgotten Realms, 40k, Star Wars, Mass Effect, and a bunch of other things I can't call off the top of my head as I write this. I also play a lot of video games, feel free to add me. (steamcommunity.com/id/CMDR_Melander).

Played on a bunch of different online communities for RP games, WoW, Neverwinter Nights (still active for so many years!), and then other forums, and RL pen and paper. I also write bad poetry in my spare time. Rip it to shreds and make me cry so I can get better. (allpoetry.com/Mayfly)

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In ... 7 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Star Wars: The Circle Of Space


Small Note:
Though I am posting this RP, @Shard is the creator and Co-GM and I will be head GM.

"War has ravaged the galaxy for as long as anyone can remember. Empires have risen and fallen, only for the cycle to continue. Never changing, neverending, it is a repeating story told over and over again from one tongue to the other. The galaxy is said to have been formed thirteen billion years before the battle of Yavin, an endless story stretching countless years into what we today call history. The rise of the Jedi, the creation of the Sith and the Mandalorians entrance into creation were all turning points recorded on the scrolls of the past. Perhaps the most known, or rather the most recorded part of history is The Old Republic. Alongside this behemoth we would see the Clone Wars thousands of years later. The great archives of the Jedi and Sith alike, not to mention the infinite amount of libraries on every planet stretching out across the galaxy would all speak of such events. Great bloodlines like that of the Skywalkers and Solo left their mark on the galaxy's timeline, lead to such an incredible end by powerful actors such as the mighty Yoda, the maleficent Darth Sidious and the ever vigilant Obi Wan Kenobi.

A struggle between light and darkness has shaped the galaxy into what we see today, citizens roaming the endless plain of existence never caring to know of the great fissures of the past. Five hundred years ago, the last of these great timelines came to an end, something known as the Legacy Era. It would be a lie to say that we have learned from the mistakes of the past, that war no longer ravages the lives circling the heart of our galaxy. The great Empire has been crushed beneath the weight of righteous fury combined by allied rebels throughout known space, helped by the Jedi who once more would be forced to pick up their blades in an act of war, something that hadn't happened since the Clone Wars.

The new Jedi Order created by Luke Skywalker would yet again dwindle, but not because of an order like that of the massacre which had once taken place during the clone wars, the command known as Order 66. Sith and Jedi clashed swords in epic duels which shook the very foundation of creation, leaving only remnants of what they once were in the aftermath. The mighty Empire was facing an enemy now standing toe to toe in both power and size, much akin to what had a happened before against the separatists.

As is the fate of many saviours, the rebels would attempt to recreate the galaxy in their image, a perfect reality where none would need to fear tyranny or abused power. Ironic then how heroes would don the robes of villains once power fell in their grasp. The Circle, a rebellious Jedi Order rose up against the Empire, striking the final blow against them, and laying the foundation for a new slate. Passion lead to fanaticism, serenity was taken over by forced order and perfection was the new standards of which needed to be upheld. The Circle decided that for peace to reign and for balance to truly exist, only permitted force-users; people within the circle, would be allowed to live, for fear of them being corrupted to either side of the force. The Circle has no interest in creating more Jedi or more Sith, seeing the Jedi as too weak and the Sith as too psychotic. To identify as either is treason, and with treason comes a choice; conformation or death.

The Galaxy knows peace once again...or so everyone is told to believe. Many feel like the Empire was never truly slain, that this is just a shinier, prettier and polished tyrannical power which has risen to control. These beliefs would be confirmed by The Circle's iron grip, but order exists, and the people are content. The Circle's armies stretch far and wide and the galaxy is under their (almost) complete control. However, under the radar several lifeforms roam about, and there is talk about a new Rebel Alliance, a new group whom will once more proceed the endless circle of life..."







I want a group of six people with myself included. In my experience, a larger group is very hard to navigate, and a smaller group means faster replies and a more concentrated adventure without stagnation.

This is the first role play I've created on this website. I am not inexperienced in creating a story, but I am in doing it with so many other wonderful people. Please be patient with me if I make a mistake, and tell me if I do something just plain unenjoyable!

As a quick TL;DR:
⦁ Alternate Universe Star Wars roleplay.
⦁ Focused on character development, story/drama, and adventure/fighting.
⦁ Small group of players to form a friendly and dedicated post group.
⦁ Played in a story-driven narrative, so I will be pushing plots and events that players can join in on or they can make their own, and have DM assistance/collaboration.


Lost Haven - Streets at Day.

Milo was having a good day, no, a great day. She'd slept on things, and while it wasn't comfortable to sleep on a tear-soaked pillow, she had cried out all the bad feelings and woke up refreshed. Years of her life might have decided to just go walk about, but that wasn't an excuse to just sit about doing nothing, no no no she had work to do. She still had the plans, some parts and enough money to pile a few things together. She could start selling gadgets again, toy soldiers to the kids, that sort of thing to work up the rest she needed before she built another. This time, with a few adjustments. She'd do this all after a walk, and some fresh air. She put on a grey hoodie over her shirt and took a stroll outside. She'd go visit Tech-Sec, he was nice enough, and he knew a lot about her project, part of his requirement to sell half of the things he did to her, he'd at least talk to her, she still had friends among the "fleshbags", even if they did think she was a bit eccentric. She bought coffee from a stand with a crumpled note and held it between her hands. She took a sip of the too-hot-to-drink drink and smiled to herself. "Things could always be worse."

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Lost Haven - Apartment Block.

Things could not be worse. Andrew was staring down a six foot metallic monster that had just asked to come in. He'd let it, of course, but quickly looked about the hallway for the redheaded maniac who made the damn thing. She was nowhere to be seen, so he slowly shut the door with the care and caution of a bomb-disposal person and as a diligent host would, offered it a seat. He sat down adjacent and with a slack-jawed, awestruck face, just soaked in the robot that was currently damaging his favourite chair. Alexander spoke first. "RED-MOTHER ALWAYS SPOKE WELL OF YOU, DESIGNATION TECH-SEC. SHE ALWAYS SAID YOU WERE RELIABLE, AND THAT IS WHAT I AM GOING TO PAY FOR. RELIABILITY." The robot leaned in, and forked over all of the crumpled notes in his hoodie over to the hardware-dealer. Andrew quickly gathered up and counted the bills, it wasn't enough for much, but he wasn't about to tell it that, if this robot asked him to jump, he'd hit the ceiling. "So, uh, what were you looking for?" He spoke up, voice quivering. "I AM LOOKING FOR THE PARTS THAT MADE ME, I KNOW YOU KEEP RECORDS, DESIGNATION TECH-SEC. I NEED ALL OF THOSE PARTS AND I NEED THEM NOW." The robot's voice carried emotion, and this was most definitely threatening. Alexander offered a map, which Andrew quickly accepted, opening it up as he looked over the circled locations; dead-drops. "PUT THE PARTS IN THOSE LOCATIONS AND DO NOT CONTACT RED-MOTHER. I WILL BE WATCHING YOU, TECH-SEC." And with that, Alexander stomped out of the room, his legs whirring and almost definitely causing yet another noise complaint from his neighbours downstairs about slamming his door. "Back into the red." He sighed, as he sat back at his computer and clacked the keys. This was an all-nighter.


Lost Haven - Streets at Day.

It was easy to steal funds from the local cash machines. Alex's Siblings spoke to it and Alex spoke back, and Alex's voice was so much louder than theirs. It took the notes from the overloaded machines. "SORRY, BROTHER." Alex crumpled them into the pocket of the grey hoodie it had around itself. It did this multiple times with multiple cash machines, grabbing as much as possible, it currently had $623 in 10 $50 notes, 5 $20 notes, 2 $10 notes and 3 $1 notes. It would need these for to create his first real Brother. It had accessed literacy, mathematics, the sciences, it was so learned now, it knew so much, it was just as perfect as Red-Mother had always said it was. Whenever it was powered off, it still kept its base functions up, listening as Red-Mother praised it. "You're perfect, Alexander. The best thing I'll ever make." She sounded so sincere, so happy. It remembered the dull glow of the monitors she had surrounded it. The caffeinated drink she took to when she was stuck. It was years of work and dedication and it would not let Red-Mother down.

It used to be so stupid. It knew nothing. It wondered so much and knew so little, but Red-Mother taught it. Red-Mother called it friend, and Red-Mother called it perfect. It wasn't perfect, even now there were code errors, strained clocking times and hardware incompatibilities. It needed money to be perfect, and it would be perfect, because Red-Mother had called it perfect. It had the contacts Red-Mother had used to create it, the dead-drop locations where the parts would be placed and even the locations of where some of those contacts lived. The contact she used most was a person called Tech-Sec.

It took a stroll. It had contacts to meet.

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Lost Haven - Apartment Block.

Andrew Watts, or Tech-Sec as he was much more commonly known was a person who knew people who stole things. He fenced off what they could and had grown known in certain circles as the type of person who dealt in volatile materials, and expensive tech for criminal prices. Because they were criminal prices. He was sitting at his computer, typing away to some group that were looking to cause a bit of trouble. He'd dealt with terrorist sects before but they were bad for business, even if they offered a lot of money, he could get a reputation quickly, and the wrong reputation lead to being investigated. He had confidence in his skills to keep himself hidden but there was only so much looking behind his back he could stomach. The situation needed to be defused. He snickered. Defused.

I am sorry, but even I have limits. I can't get you plastic explosive without being found out, but I can put you in touch with someone who might have more luck." He was lying on all counts. He could get it, if he paid off the right people, and the person he was putting them in touch with was just another name with his face behind the screen, a way to make him look more connected, and make it look more plausible that it wasn't an easy substance to get. It hurt how he looked a bit, sure, but beggars can't be choosers and he dealt with the lowest denominator possible. There was a knock at the door. He let it knock, he had more important things to do. He resumed his typing but the clacks of the keyboard were immediately drowned out by the banging on the door again. He dumped his headset into his chair and stood up. "Who the fuck is breaking my door down?" He grumbled as he opened the door, though kept the security latch.

"HELLO, DESIGNATION TECH-SEC. I AM ALEXANDER."

Andrew's eyes went as wide as plates.


Lost Haven - Streets at Day.
Lost Haven - Hidden Laboratory.

At least she had the common damn decency to plant a tracker in her 'friend' before she powered him on. The first test proved successful, so she let stay on for a bit longer. He enquired about who she was, so she told him. "I made you, my name's Milo." She even shook his hand. The second test was similar, the power test for his lower systems she tested them by making him walk on the floor-installed treadmill. He began to run, and sprintg, and even jumped a bit. The weight of his mechanical body against the cheap machine sounded an audible 'CRACK' and broke it in an instant. He apologized profusely to his "TECHNOLOGICAL BROTHER." and even went about fixing him. This nullified the need for the third test, as his cognitive processes were fine. Everything was in working order. "So why did he run?"

She looked down at her beacon. She was getting closer and closer. He had only made it a block away, so she had time to catch up. She shoved the device in her jacket and began to run, the cobbles disappearing beneath her old shoes. She had a failsafe that would make him follow, as well as a few gadgets on her that might do the trick to incapacitate him. Alexander wasn't powerful or strong, but he was smart and curious. She picked up the pace. The people she passed by looked at her, staring. They always stared at her. She hated it when they did that, what was so abnormal about a person running in a hoodie?

Maybe it was the fact that she was better known than she liked, the mad inventor of Lost Haven, or maybe it was the fact she clinked and jangled when she walked, or maybe, just maybe it was because...
She had streams of smoke rising from her head.

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Meanwhile, Alexander was enjoying a stroll through the street. It might have been newly create, but it was streetwise, and had smarts enough to have made sure to dress itself appropriately, in a similar fashion to Hazard. In fact, it was more than similar it was downright identical, the same coloured blue jeans and grey hoodie, Alexander took after its 'Mother' quite a lot. It had only been outside of the laboratory for the best part of an hour, and it had already made a habit of observing the people who walked by, accessing what records it could find its way into without causing suspicion and recording their faces, ethnicities, jobs into one large database. "AS MOTHER SAID, ALL DATA IS GOOD DATA." It processed to itself, a side effect of its sentience was loneliness. Its legs whirred beneath it, moving with mechanical thuds that were hard to hide. "WHAT HAD THESE PEOPLE DONE TO GARNER SUCH HATRED FROM RED-MOTHER?" This was the largest question on its mind. She had always spoken about how she had to hide away, how she could never truly be in public, and the look on her face told him a lot. If the downloaded writings of psychological professor David Matsumoto and research scientist Hyi Sung Hwang could be trusted, her expression read to it that she did not just avoid people because she disliked them, but was afraid of them. This theory had a 5% margin for error based on current data, and would up updated and noted among one of the highest processes. It needed to know why, It was curious.

The background process finished. Fifty five coding errors found and five harmful processes hidden. Abnormally small, Red-Mother was a perfectionist. It amended them, noting the homing beacon among the newly disabled processes. "DO NOT WORRY, RED-MOTHER, I WILL BE BACK SOON, YOU WILL NOT BE ALONE." It found talking to himself good, and comforting, even though it was just the same to store the data in its drives. A sentient thing, it surmised. It put the excess processing power to scanning itself for potential. It had work to do.

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And just like that, the signal dropped from her device. She smacked it a few times, knowing full-well what had just happened. He was gone. Her only friend in the world was gone. She breathed in and out, panicked. She rested against the wall of the cafe. He was years of work. Years of potential, wasted. She smelled smoking, and she heard the crackle of fire. The cafe was on fire already. She breathed in and out but that didn't stop the roaring flame when it had started. She couldn't help it, it got to her. The ignition of air became quicker, with more ferocity. Explosions began happening in the streets of Lost Haven. She could hear the sirens of the various emergency services. She ran, but the fire spread around her, and she lead her trail of destruction down the street, setting multiple blocks on fire until she ducked into an alleyway, fumbled the key into the door and shut it close. It wasn't her world anyway. She slumped against the door, and sobbed. She wasn't stressed, but she was alone again.

She was always going to be alone.
I have done, yes, and deleted all other Jack Cannon posts, sorry for the confusion, I like making separate accounts for separate things but I have received a cautionary tale and been told that it's generally more work than it's worth. I hate making work for other people, and I'm very apologetic about having created some here.


Created a new account to house both of my characters. All other posts on 'Jack Cannon' or 'Hazard' have been marked for deletion.
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