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Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

Sorry, I didn't mean to bring up those particular problems but the age range on the sheet for Padawans said 8 through 14 and the signup requirements said 'literally anything but 16' so you can see how I'd be misled. That said if that's the case I'm obviously willing to change it. Just give me a few minutes.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

My WIP for a really young Echani Padawan Captive, if anything might need to work on specifics of Relationships but I'll take feedback on anything. Although if the GMs think it's sufficient I'm fine with that too.

Khan Primarch-WIP

Name: Khan Primarch
Species: Echani
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Padawan
Captive? Captive

Appearance:

Khan Primarch has pale white skin and silver eyes, like most if not all Echani, and bears a striking but natural similarity to other Echani teens of his age. In a more distinguishing feature his white hair has been cropped short and put in a Padawan's braid. Khan has bright and inquisitive eyes that are quick to observe but slow in forgetting. He's a little short for his age with a crooked smile when he does smile, and those skilled at reading body-language like most Echani would ordinarily find a cheerful and eager young man with boundless curiosity, a sharp intellect and a slightly snarky sense of humor. To most outsiders however his emotional reactions seem flat and highly-controlled at all times.

Notable Characteristics of Species:

Echani Appearance-Echani of the same sex all look fairly similar to each other in terms of physical appearance, and most have white skin, white hair and silver eyes. The Echani resemblance is strong enough that most non-Echani have difficulty telling individuals of the same sex apart from one another and the Echani themselves mainly rely on body language and emotional and psychological cues to tell one another apart.

Echani culture-revolves heavily around combat and Echani believe that it is one of the truest forms of communication, thus almost all Echani are trained in martial arts throughout their lives from a very young age, and fighting both ritual and non-ritual suffuses their lives at every level. They also heavily study tactics on levels ranging from personal combat to mass warfare and Echani military officers are even erroneously labeled as being capable of 'predicting' the moves of their opponents.

Echani Body-Reading-due to their similar appearances and cultural focus on empathy through combat all Echani are raised to be capable of reading the intent, emotions and identities of others through their body-language, especially in combat which they believe to be the truest and purest form of communication.

Flaws:

Khan is still young and inexperienced, fairly naive and physically somewhat weak and yet to begin reaching his full physical potential. In short his biggest weaknesses are those that spring from his still being somewhat young and lacking both emotional and physical maturity. Being imprisoned has not exactly helped matters emotionally and mentally, though Khan has not yet been broken. As someone raised in the Echani culture he can also be a little too willing to fight at times and solve situations with violence although he would consider it 'negotiating' of a sort.

Skills:

Fast Reflexes and improved agility-Even without The Force to supplement him Khan has faster than normal reflexes for a boy of fourteen and is above average in terms of physical agility. These facts compliment both his basic lightsaber skills and ability with Echani Martial Arts.

Curious intellect- Khan is curious and keenly observational, picking up many concepts quickly and possessed of a certain level of talent for mimicry as well as analysis. Though his cultural background means he's so far used this to further his interest in various fighting arts, his bright mind is a useful tool for any endeavor. In addition his culturally acquired skill of body-reading combined with his knack for analysis and mimicry means he can pick up physical skills with surprising ease and rapidity.

Echani-supplemented Shii-Cho Training- As a someone who's been Jedi Padawan for about a year, Khan has some basic training in the first Form of lightsaber combat and is thus basically familiar with the motions, strike zones and techniques required to use a lightsaber. He has also supplemented this with Echani sword-techniques to create a rough, unorthodox but technically functional lightsaber style, though as he has little real combat experience with the weapon and his skills are still developing he can't yet be called truly proficient with a lightsaber.

Echani Martial Artist-Khan had been training in the Echani martial arts since the early days of his childhood, and has at least joked in the past that he had been fighting even before he learned to talk. He not only was tutored personally by a high-ranking military officer in the form of his mother, but also experienced hand-to-hand combat on a daily basis as a part of his everyday life. As such the unarmed and blade-based martial arts of the Echani come about as naturally to him as breathing and he's considered quite proficient by Echani standards and perhaps something of a prodigy by the intergalactic standards one would use to judge a fourteen year old boy.

Echani Body-Reading-As an Echani raised in the Echani culture, Khan has been trained to read the emotions, intent and identity of others through their body-language to the point where he considers even the subtlest movements of one's body, especially in combat, to be the purest form of communication.

Tactical Knowledge-As someone raised by a high-ranking military officer in a culture that holds combat as borderline sacred, Khan has been tutored in tactics on levels ranging from personal combat to interplanetary warfare and is quite a skilled tactician for his age, at least on a theoretical level.

Strong mental fortitude- Khan has a very strong personal sense of will, though others might say instead that he's just somewhat hardheaded and stubborn at times.

Force capabilities:

Though gifted with a decent amount of potential Khan has only begun to scratch the surface of the force.

Force Speed
Khan can barely speed himself up to be a few fractions of a second faster than he would be without this ability

Telekinesis / Throw
Khan is not yet capable of throwing living beings, and can only lift and throw small objects.

Force Sight
Khan is only just learning to use this ability and has only minimal control over it.

Force Sense
As someone born in a society where the ability to read others and the environemnt was paramount, Khan is fairly good Force Sense this given his age and level of experience, though he has yet to truly hone his potential for the ability.

Precognition
Khan has a decent instinctual usage of precognition, but is not always capable of recognizing it for what it is and often disregards his 'instincts' in favor of sating his curiosity or fighting when it isn't advisable

Mind trick
Khan is currently incapable of using the Mind Trick.

Force Jump
Khan can only extend his jump by a few feet in height and/or length and barely reduce injuries from his falls.

{Jedi} tutaminis (basic)
Khan can barely block basic force attacks with effort and concentration.

Biography:

Khan's mother was a female Echani military officer of rather high rank within the Echani military under the Echani Command. As such she and the rest of his family raised him as appropriate both within Echani culture and as the child of a warrior. That is, he was raised with combat both practical and ritual filling every aspect of his life, from greeting his family in the morning to more formal training throughout the day, mostly in hand-to-hand forms and light, bladed weaponry favored by the Echani. Even when he wasn't being formally trained in physical combat or 'communicating' through ritualized combat, his mother set him to studying tactics on all levels, and it was expected that he would become a fine duelist or soldier and perhaps even a gifted military officer in his own right if he studied well enough despite the matriarchal nature of Echani society.

All of this changed when Khan was around 13 years old and a traveling Jedi Knight first found him and revealed his Force Sensitivity. Specifically, when Khan heard that one of the famous 'Jedi Warriors' was visiting near his home he decided to attack said warrior to take a measure of them and see if they lived up to their near mythical reputation. The Knight in question recognized that Khan was subtly and instinctively using The Force in his little 'mock battle' and was impressed enough to strongly recommend he be taken away for training.

Khan's mother was both overjoyed and somewhat saddened by the news. On the one hand, her youngest son would be taken from her but on the other he had the potential to go on to be a great intergalactic warrior as a Jedi and learn modes of combat few Echani ever got to experience. Not to mention of course, he would get the chance to wield the most impressive of swords: a lightsaber. After careful consideration she consented and Khan's life as a Jedi-to-be began. Over the next year Khan trained fiercely to become the best Jedi he could, though he mainly was fascinated by all things involving combat. Not that that did him very much good when Coruscant was sacked and he was one of the younger 'Jedi' taken captive. Khan has since taken as uncooperative and belligerent an attitude towards his captors as possible as befits a captured warrior, awaiting rescue while learning all he can about his new enemies to better defeat them in the future.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Though he's young and rather malleable Khan is far from a blank slate. He wants to bring honor and respect to his family as a Jedi in the future and in the present learn all that he can about just about everything, having never traveled outside of the Six Sisters before coming to Coruscant, so even the prison ship is sometimes a new and interesting environment. He's both used to and fascinated by combat in all of its' forms, but the culture that raised him to view fighting as normalized also raised him to consider empathy, restraint in battle, control over his own emotions and honor as primary virtues. Khan wants to do the right thing overall and become a strong and honorable knight capable of protecting others, despite his youth, his naivete and his flaws.

Player’s long term goals:

Really I'm interested in seeing where this young, suggestible character will wind up as he's influenced by events over the course of the RP. At the moment he's been raised to very much value being a Lightsider of a sort but there's also been far more emphasis on fighting, strength in combat and violence in his life than in that of most Star Wars teens or children and his naivete and youth combined with that could easily be used to change him depending on how the story develops. While he's more skilled than average in some ways given his age at the moment I'm also interested in seeing how his skill-set develops into something unique over time depending on who he has for teachers and what he experiences. In short I want to take a younger character and see how he slowly grows up in the story and universe we're making together, if possible.

Relations:

Currently Khan sees his fellow Jedi both captive and non as allies and authority figures that his family has entrusted him to and views the Sith and forces that have captured him as enemies who he should resist in any way possible when he gets the chance. He's been told that the way of the Jedi is combat but with restraint and that the Jedi way is honorable, so naturally he defers to that.

Final Point - Secrets:

War of the Multiverse

Barroom Brawl

"Alright! A chance to get into the action, and a classic one too!"

Despite his words August's next actions were a little less than traditional for a cowboy-western style brawl. He threw himself from his seat and snatched up a pair of circular, metallic serving trays. In his mind he could feel the metal of the trays and he began subtly but near-instantaneously altering it, making it lighter and sharper, linking himself to it in a way until he could physically feel the metal trays like an extension of himself as he shaped them to his will.

After a second of concentration like that, August hurled both of the serving platters at the strange digitized monster like a pair of over sized chakram or shuriken, apparently having no trouble throwing them in a balanced and easy manner without hitting the charging Bloodpouch, despite his improvised weapons' unwieldy sizes. With luck the whirring metal trays, sharpened to razor-keenness and balanced with supernatural perfection with his metalcrafting powers, would cut into or through the digital creature to some extent.

It wasn't the most powerful technique in August Lim's arsenal, but the theories behind it were something he had been hoping to test for some time and he worried that if he charged in otherwise he might get in the way of one very, very angry and confused anti-hero.

Dragon Ball: Leviathan

Violin had taken his time with changing his clothes, making sure his cloaked and hidden face was properly concealed, his weighted training gear was settled onto his body comfortably and most importantly that his medical equipment was all perfectly arranged and stored away in a portable kit. The cloak would have to do for the Namekian combat medic, rather than his usual visor-and-helmet arrangement, at least when it came to hiding the uncanny resemblance he bore towards his violent lunatic of a 'father', Lord Slug. In fact his desire to distance himself from that fact likely meant that only a few senior-most members of the ISF and those initially in charge of handling his case had ever seen Violin's uncovered face. Though his skill as a doctor and a healer meant that many of the ISF's members would potentially be familiar with his presence, and he may have even saved a life or two among the gathered squadrons whether on an operating table or in the field.

Regardless, his shared past with one interplanetary dictator and his desire to preserve lives were what had brought him here today, to this unusual undercover assignment. The likes of the PTO and the tyrannical Arcosians they partnered with had to be stopped, and if he could keep just a few more good cops alive in the process by going along with them then that was what he would do. It was as simple as that. Besides, he knew the sort of crowds they would likely be running into, had commanded similar thugs and terroristic soldiers in the past. He didn't exactly love the idea of going back to that life, but he could probably manage it better than some of his future-squadmates.

So the Namekian joined the others and the Commander, waiting. Things would begin soon enough, and before they did Violin wanted to savor this short moment of peace.

Dragon Ball: Leviathan

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Name: Violin

Age: Adult

Species: Namekian

Attribute

Healing and Ki Manipulation-while his healing abilities make him one of the team’s primary field medics, Violin trains himself in ki manipulation and martial arts constantly in order to better protect himself and his allies.

Personality & Appearance

The most noticeable thing about Violin's appearance-at least to anyone who might be able to recognize it-is his striking similarity to his creator and father, the planetary conqueror known as Lord Slug. While the resemblance is not absolute, Violin is similar enough to easily pass for a younger version of Lord Slug unless under extremely close scrutiny.

While he’ll change clothes to suit the situation, Violin often wears a dark green hooded and face-concealing cloak mainly to hide his resemblance to the often hated and feared Lord Slug although he also wears it because he likes the look of it though he would never admit it. Apart from the hooded cloak he wears the brown pointed shoes common to most Namekians and a weighted belt or waistwrap worn mainly for training purposes.

Personality-wise Violin considers himself a healer and guardian of the innocent first and a warrior second despite his skill at fighting. In fact as a deserter from Lord Slug’s forces, he detests having to take up violence and much prefers his role as a doctor to his fellow ISF members though, he still trains to retain his skills. Since he lost his only other 'family' when he abandoned the psychotic Slug, Violin considers the ISF to be a substitute family of sorts and primarily volunteered to try to ensure that the so-called suicide mission had a slightly higher survival rate than it otherwise would. His other motivations have more to do with preventing the sort of large-scale destruction that the PTO and Freeza’s organization are capable of wreaking, having served under a tyrannical planet conqueror himself and learned firsthand of the atrocities such men are capable of committing.

Weaponry & Equipment

Violin does not have much in the way of equipment, though as part of his training his cloak and a belt wrapped around his waist are both extremely heavy so that even his everyday activities are a part of strengthening himself. Other than that, he’s familiar enough with various kinds of medical equipment and medical/surgical treatments requiring them throughout the galaxy though he usually carries a more portable field surgery and treatment kit instead.

Abilities & Techniques

Healing powers-Violin can heal living beings of even things that would otherwise be fatal wounds though the more severe the wounds the more time and energy it takes for him to heal the being in question. He needs to be able to touch the being he wants to effect in order to heal them and due to the concentration required for healing he is often vulnerable to attack during this time.

Namekian Physiology-As a Namekian, Violin’s body has a number of unusual physical properties. Noticeably he is capable of regenerating his body so long as his head is intact and he has enough energy and focus to do so. His limbs are also capable of stretching to extreme lengths and with enough focus he can even grow to giant size. His hearing is also incredibly sensitive to an almost supernatural degree, and he can sense the nature of the hearts or intentions of others if he focuses on them.

Scalpel Overdrive-A technique Violin often uses if a scalpel isn't at hand involving solidifying a small blade out of ki. However in combat he is capable of extending it much farther out into a sort of energy sword enveloping his arm and extending further outward. The flaw is of course that the technique is primarily one for close combat.

Energy Shield-A shield of ki capable of blocking smaller energy attacks, though if Violin pours more ki into it it can hold up against larger and larger techniques and/or increase in size to protect people nearby him. Because of his generally nonviolent nature this is one of the techniques he's trained with most heavily since leaving Lord Slug's service.

'ssault Cannon-Violin's Ultimate technique when he was in service to Lord Slug, he presses both palms together until they almost touch and then charges energy between them, condensing it more and more before firing it out in a single beam of white energy. The longer he's able to charge and condense the energy the stronger the resulting beam will be.

Backstory

Violin was once a top soldier in the service of Lord Slug, the Namekian planetary conqueror. In fact he was specifically created by Lord Slug to help lead and maintain the well-being of his troops. Though Violin was a competent warrior, the cruelty his service to the Super Namekian required of him began to sicken him as the years passed. It seemed that there was no end to his master’s desire for conquest, that they would turn world after world into Planet Cruisers more out of a blind lust for destruction than for any truly useful purpose. As he slowly came to the realization that Lord Slug was more than likely just insane and his brothers-in-arms were too blind to see it, he began planning his eventual escape.

It wasn’t easy for Violin to find opportunities to break free, as his combination of personal strength and healing powers meant that he was doubly valuable for the planet-conquering soldiers of Lord Slug’s crew and was rarely kept far from the frontline fighting at any time. However, fate or luck eventually intervened and during one attempt at planetary conquest Slug’s forces were successfully violently repulsed. As a result Violin was able to stay behind during Lord Slug’s second attempt at a Planet Cruiser-making foray under the guise of healing the wounds his fellow soldiers had sustained during their last failed attack. Seizing on the moment, he stole a smaller ship and deserted from Lord Slug’s army, and at first just to keep from being killed, pleaded with the ISF for asylum in exchange for his full cooperation and all of the information he had on Lord Slug’s operations.

Gradually Violin became trusted enough to begin using his healing abilities to aid the ISF. He found that though he no longer had the desire to fight, he still enjoyed healing others and made it his mission to serve as a medic for the ISF to make up for some of the evil he had caused in his past. Over time he came to terms with his past and moved back into the field on occasion, though he remained primarily a member of the Green Sector of the ISF.
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Dragon Ball: Leviathan

Apologies for my absence, but here's my character.

Violin, Squad healer and doctor

Name: Violin

Age: Adult

Species: Namekian

Attribute

Healing and Ki Manipulation-while his healing abilities make him one of the team’s primary field medics, Violin trains himself in ki manipulation and martial arts constantly in order to better protect himself and his allies.

Personality & Appearance

The most noticeable thing about Violin's appearance-at least to anyone who might be able to recognize it-is his striking similarity to his creator and father, the planetary conqueror known as Lord Slug. While the resemblance is not absolute, Violin is similar enough to easily pass for a younger version of Lord Slug unless under extremely close scrutiny.

While he’ll change clothes to suit the situation, Violin often wears a dark green hooded and face-concealing cloak mainly to hide his resemblance to the often hated and feared Lord Slug although he also wears it because he likes the look of it though he would never admit it. Apart from the hooded cloak he wears the brown pointed shoes common to most Namekians and a weighted belt or waistwrap worn mainly for training purposes.

Personality-wise Violin considers himself a healer and guardian of the innocent first and a warrior second despite his skill at fighting. In fact as a deserter from Lord Slug’s forces, he detests having to take up violence and much prefers his role as a doctor to his fellow ISF members though, he still trains to retain his skills. Since he lost his only other 'family' when he abandoned the psychotic Slug, Violin considers the ISF to be a substitute family of sorts and primarily volunteered to try to ensure that the so-called suicide mission had a slightly higher survival rate than it otherwise would. His other motivations have more to do with preventing the sort of large-scale destruction that the PTO and Freeza’s organization are capable of wreaking, having served under a tyrannical planet conqueror himself and learned firsthand of the atrocities such men are capable of committing.

Weaponry & Equipment

Violin does not have much in the way of equipment, though as part of his training his cloak and a belt wrapped around his waist are both extremely heavy so that even his everyday activities are a part of strengthening himself. Other than that, he’s familiar enough with various kinds of medical equipment and medical/surgical treatments requiring them throughout the galaxy though he usually carries a more portable field surgery and treatment kit instead.

Abilities & Techniques

Healing powers-Violin can heal living beings of even things that would otherwise be fatal wounds though the more severe the wounds the more time and energy it takes for him to heal the being in question. He needs to be able to touch the being he wants to effect in order to heal them and due to the concentration required for healing he is often vulnerable to attack during this time.

Namekian Physiology-As a Namekian, Violin’s body has a number of unusual physical properties. Noticeably he is capable of regenerating his body so long as his head is intact and he has enough energy and focus to do so. His limbs are also capable of stretching to extreme lengths and with enough focus he can even grow to giant size. His hearing is also incredibly sensitive to an almost supernatural degree, and he can sense the nature of the hearts or intentions of others if he focuses on them.

Scalpel Overdrive-A technique Violin often uses if a scalpel isn't at hand involving solidifying a small blade out of ki. However in combat he is capable of extending it much farther out into a sort of energy sword enveloping his arm and extending further outward. The flaw is of course that the technique is primarily one for close combat.

Energy Shield-A shield of ki capable of blocking smaller energy attacks, though if Violin pours more ki into it it can hold up against larger and larger techniques and/or increase in size to protect people nearby him. Because of his generally nonviolent nature this is one of the techniques he's trained with most heavily since leaving Lord Slug's service.

'ssault Cannon-Violin's Ultimate technique when he was in service to Lord Slug, he presses both palms together until they almost touch and then charges energy between them, condensing it more and more before firing it out in a single beam of white energy. The longer he's able to charge and condense the energy the stronger the resulting beam will be.

Backstory

Violin was once a top soldier in the service of Lord Slug, the Namekian planetary conqueror. In fact he was specifically created by Lord Slug to help lead and maintain the well-being of his troops. Though Violin was a competent warrior, the cruelty his service to the Super Namekian required of him began to sicken him as the years passed. It seemed that there was no end to his master’s desire for conquest, that they would turn world after world into Planet Cruisers more out of a blind lust for destruction than for any truly useful purpose. As he slowly came to the realization that Lord Slug was more than likely just insane and his brothers-in-arms were too blind to see it, he began planning his eventual escape.

It wasn’t easy for Violin to find opportunities to break free, as his combination of personal strength and healing powers meant that he was doubly valuable for the planet-conquering soldiers of Lord Slug’s crew and was rarely kept far from the frontline fighting at any time. However, fate or luck eventually intervened and during one attempt at planetary conquest Slug’s forces were successfully violently repulsed. As a result Violin was able to stay behind during Lord Slug’s second attempt at a Planet Cruiser-making foray under the guise of healing the wounds his fellow soldiers had sustained during their last failed attack. Seizing on the moment, he stole a smaller ship and deserted from Lord Slug’s army, and at first just to keep from being killed, pleaded with the ISF for asylum in exchange for his full cooperation and all of the information he had on Lord Slug’s operations.

Gradually Violin became trusted enough to begin using his healing abilities to aid the ISF. He found that though he no longer had the desire to fight, he still enjoyed healing others and made it his mission to serve as a medic for the ISF to make up for some of the evil he had caused in his past. Over time he came to terms with his past and moved back into the field on occasion, though he remained primarily a member of the Green Sector of the ISF.

One Piece: Treasure is Precious IC

I'm here, but I've been sick and/or busy these last few days.

One Piece: Treasure is Precious IC

Birdy was about to show that weird loudmouthed water-punching guy what happened to people who got between him and food, but before he could some guy with a nodachi started saying something about a sparring match and his uncle. Despite all the chaos going on around them Birdy was pretty sure what this was: A challenge! Well, if he was ever going to be a strong enough swordsman for guys like this to stop challenging him in the first place there was no way he could turn down something like that!

"RIGHT! GET READY, 'CAUSE I'M COMIN' AT Y-!"

Before the short swordsman could start his charge or finish his sentence his grumbling stomach interrupted and he slumped to one knee for a moment, before hastily trying to pretend it never happened. Instead he rushed at the rather polite opponent before him and the lid of the Hi-Speed Delivery box popped open to launch two unsheathed dao into the air. Birdy leaped up and grabbed both swords in mid-air and slashed at the nodachi-wielder with the dual blades as he descended.

"TAKE THIS!!!~ MY INFINITE SWORD-SWAP STYLE! FORM 3: DUAL DAO!"

The fact that his strikes were much slower and weaker than normal tickled the back of his mind, but hopefully it wouldn't matter now.

One Piece: Treasure is Precious IC

I'll post soon hopefully, I've been involved in some family business for a while but it's finished now.

One Piece: Treasure is Precious IC

See, my preferred thing for post-by-post fighting involves less of that and is more 'I try and do this' but without all the speculation of 'but if he does this I do that' afterward so it's much more reactionary than laying out a bunch of contingency plans.