FallenTrinity

The music within us

He had played for quite some time since he first started and he had taken noticed to the crowd as it increased slowly in numbers. Many songs ranging from heartbreak to courage on the battlefield and just nonsensical songs. He also had taken a few glances at the figures in the crowd that held instruments. He had heard about recruitment a week ago starting up so he was wondering if they were.

Is that a band that wants to play or are they the new recruits that I heard about? Never mind I'll worry about that after this.

His second to last song ended as an applause was heard. His smile rose to his face again as he bowed. He raised his hand as the crowd settled.

"LADIES AND GENTLEMEN! I THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME IN THE MIND OF ZAHIR! I HAVE ONE LAST SONG FOR YOU ALL. THIS IS A STORY OF A LOVE LONG LOST!"

He the smile on his face slowly fell. THe crowd quieting down.

"And....but not forgotten." He his eyes moved around the crowd as he tuned his guitar to what was needed. He strummed a few notes and was satisfied with what he heard. Zahir took a deep breath and began.

(OST - Killswitch Engage - My Curse)

The figures that once where seen through his songs slowly began to fade away as a single figure stood there. A woman with flowing bright golden hair and beautiful green eyes, she looked at Zahir as he looked back, a single tear falling from his face.

The only time I can ever see you now is when I play, and then your still not here. Only an image of you that I control...It's not the same. It never will be.

The drums and bass blasting as he hammered on each note as he played. A painful look began to pass over him as his mouth trembled as he tried to hold back the overwhelming sadness tugging at his heartstrings. So he figured he would let it all out with his last song. The tempo began to pick up as the bass ceased and only a kick from the drums was heard as he took a long breath and, with controlled harsh vocals the beginning of the song.

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RIIIIIGHT!
I watched you walk awaaaaaay~
LOVELESS with NOTHING TO SAYYYYY YEAH~
I strained my eyyyyes~
Hoping to see you aGAIIIIINNN~
THIS IS MY CURSE ( The longing~)
THIS IS MY CURSE ( Time~)
THIS IS MY CURSE ( The Yearning~)
THIS..IS..MY...CUUUUUUURSE~

The figure turned to the crowd as she saw Zahir in the same smokey form move his way from the crowd. She walked up to him as he did the same and took her into his arms and be to dance with her in a ballroom style of dance. The song represented his time with Samantha, his one and only love. The song began to hurt as flashes of his past were brought forth in front of the crowd: When they had first met at the music shop, the times they would stay in the garden and play for the other citizens. The times where they would be at the festivals, dancing together, blocking out the world and enjoying one another. It was a love story unfolding before the crowd. A "crowd" could no longer be the term used for the amount of people that stopped what they were doing to listen. It became an audience, a concert in the morning, something that these people could enjoy. The song was halfway through so he decided to make the ending interesting. The amp once again started to glow but this time brighter and brighter until it was as bright as the sun and then the light dispersed rapidly covering over the audience. The entire crowd and shielded their eyes from it. When the light died down, the scenery had changed into a flowing meadow throughout the entire audience, beautiful flowers scattered all around as the to ghostly forms danced and ran through it. This happened for a moment or to until the tempo slowed and Zahir's smoky form disappeared.

And still I want
And still I ache
but still I wait
to see you agaaaaaiiiin~

Zahir who was still on the amp stepped down and made his way over to her a hand raised with a flower. She took the flower and sniffed it with a smile as he laid his hand on the side of her face. He looked her up and down, trying to remember every detail about her. The two leaned into each other as if to kiss but instead she walked through him, into the meadow. She began to fade as the song came to its close. A sad look crossed over him once more as she disappeared. A loud cheer came from his audience as his back was turned away from them, his head down, silently he cried. He gained his composure as he heard the cheering begin to settle. Once again Zahir put on his smile and turned to them.

"THANK YOU LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, BOYS AND GIRLS! WHAT YOU HAVE WITNESSED WAS THE INNER SANCTUM OF ZAHIR'S MIND! I HOPE YOU ALL HAVE ENJOYED THE SHOW! THANK YOU!"

He stood atop his amp once again and bowed, a second round of cheers where heard. Soon enough everyone began to go about their day once more as he began to pack up.

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Fallen's Vault of Stuff....And Things

Gin Kakiyama

“I bet 50 Ryo that I can guess your bust size...OW!!"

Gin stands around 6'0" and at 162lbs. He has a lean but muscular build showing that he had intense training. His Hair is long and white and kept in a ponytail. His eyes are separate colors. His left eye is white while his right is ice blue. His face is kept hidden behind a black mask outlined by what appears to be bone along the top, bottom and down the center which is accompanied by wrapping around his neck. He wears ninja mesh under a black and grey camo tactical vest. His lower torso he wears black and grey camofluage pants with black sandals. On his days off the mask is not present and he is usually seen in his black sandals, dark grey shorts that reach down slightly below his knees and a white button up shirt.

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Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Gin Mizumu Kakiyama

【Alias】
Gin, Ghost

【Age】
21

【Sex】
Male

【Sexuality】
Hetero

【Birthplace】
Kirigakure

【Bloodline】
Kakiyama

【Rank】
Chūnin

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Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】
Gin is a bit of an introvert unless you can get close to him in which case he can be a handful. He has a perverted side which he really doesn't mind showing which is the reason why women can't stand him and he comes home in bruises. He tends to overthink sometimes and can be arrogant in his judgment but this is a quirk of his that he tries to manage. He likes keep a hand on his blade's handle as a safety habit. He like to have fun when he can but usually his form of fun is training. He will feel uncomfortable if people stare at him but other wise will try to smile. When things go wrong he tends to calm down and try to analyze the situation before continuing but if it becomes to much he will overthink it.

【History】
Gin was a good kid when he was 5. Respectful to adults and friendly to his peers. His father was an ANBU in the Mist while his mother worked at the hospital as a medical ninja. There were days when both his parents weren't home to help him train for the academy but rather at work. In these cases he would go to a friend-of-the-family's house to train. Most of the time it was another ANBU or Jounin house but it was training nonetheless, it was something that he enjoyed. He also loved women, something his father loved too. His father never cheated on his wife but would make comments about other women that would get him in trouble. Sadly though, Gin had picked up on this.

Around the age of 9 he had entered the academy years in the academy were relatively easy as far as combat training but he lacked the academic ability. He would ask for help from fellow peers and teachers on certain things. It would take him time but he would eventually understand what was being asked. His life took a turn for the worst one night around the age of 13. He was home when his parents were arguing about a mission that his father was going on the next day. He asked what was going on and his mother could only cry. His dad walked over to him and handed him his headband telling him that "I am proud of you Gin, you're becoming a remarkable ninja, almost as good as your old man. Someday you'll surpass me and I'll be there to see it."

Graduation day came and everyone's parents were there except for him. His mother had taken time off for his graduation but his father was out on a mission. It was towards the end of the graduation when an ANBU member approached Gin's mother and whispered something to her in which she fell from her chair sobbing. He didn't realize it at the moment but he had lost his father that day during the mission. The once open and friendly boy became more quiet and introverted. He would still talk to his friends but not as much. His training however never stopped but in fact increased significantly. When he made chuunin his mother pulled him aside before and handed him his father's blade as a gift. "Your father would want you to have this." With this his training increased even further as it was a reminder of what his father said. By age 19 he was known through his peers as an amazing ninja who could surpass his father if he kept at it.

【Family ties】
His family life was enjoyable and had caring parents, there were times that they would argue but it was over important things like missions affecting the future or finances. His father was a bit of a perv which he picked up on so it was no surprise that he was caught peeking into the women's bathhouse. When his father died he was a bit of a wreck, nothing that couldn't be overcome but still did its damage.

Sakura Mizumu | Mother | 42, Mist, Medical Ninja and Living in Mist
Gin Kakiyama Sr. | Father | 45, Mist, ANBU and Killed in Action

【Dreams and fears】
He fears an early death but accepts that if it happens, it happens. He wants to be like his father, a great swordsman in his own right.

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Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
He has a unique balance of Taijutsu with Kenjutsu but he has mastered an art form that encompasses both his swords and his taijutsu skills he calls the Dancing Blade Technique. He had also learned a second style from his father before he died called the Crimson Mist Dance. He doesn't use this often but is efficient when he does. His ability to utilize his ninjutsu skills is great. He is well balanced in his actions on the battlefield.

【N/A】
Bloodline limit name:
N/A
Description:
N/A
Strengths:
N/A
Weaknesses:
N/A

【Ninja techniques】

A rank techniques:
N/A

B rank techniques:
Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Chidorigatana
Sairento Kiringu
Kirigakure no Jutsu

C rank techniques:
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
Raiton: Raijū Tsuiga

D-E rank techniques:
Henge no Jutsu

【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name:
Kakushi Kiri no Jutsu: Kurimuzonmisutodansu (Hidden Mist Art: Crimson Mist Dance)
Rank:
A
Range:
Short to Medium
Description:
This jutsu is meant to work in conjunction with the hidden mist jutsu. Once the user inflicts damage on an opponent, mostly laceration like wounds, the mist begins to absorb the blood and chakra of its victim, turning the mist red, hence the name. By the enemy’s chakra being absorbed into the mist, it increases its cloaking efficiency rendering sensor types or those with visual kekkei genkai almost useless as it acts like a jammer. As long as the enemy bleeds, the red mist will stay intact. However if the bleeding stops within a span of a minute, the red mist returns to its original mist state, reducing camouflage capabilities.

【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name:
Water Style: Mist Senbon Barrage
Rank:
B
Range:
Short to Medium
Description:
Small parts of the mist technique condense together to create water senbon needles and are sent towards the enemy. It' only as strong as water but just at a high speed. It's more powerful when used with Shock Grid since it spreads water around the mist. Easily overcome.

【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name:
Lightning Style: Shock Grid
Rank:
C
Range:
Short to Long
Description:
Sends an electrical current through wire to target. Mostly used in conjunction with ninja wire and/or water clones. By extending wire along a wet or moist battleground, Gin is able to send a strong electrical current through the wire across the “grid”. In order for it to properly work, there must be some water or moist area around the targeted area of effect. It is possible to use this technique without the use of water however the effectiveness of it is not as adequate.

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Sukaikatta (Sky Cutter)
Weapon, tool or object type:
Chokuto
Description:
Sukaikatta is a chakra blade meant to channel lightning and water chakra. Its blade must remain wet or in its sheath. As it is drawn, the friction from the blade against the inner parts of the sheath begin a spark that helps increase its cutting strength. By keeping the blade wet, it gives its damage capabilities an increase even for simple cuts. However in order for it to be used the way it was made the blade must be wet and/or drawn a certain way by pressing the blade up on the sheath throughout the drawn.

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Ninja Grid Wire
Description:
It is silver and copper in color and is used for his Shock Grid jutsu. It is not typical ninja wire because of what it is made from. It is more conductive than normal wire however its weakness are the same as ninja wire

Uji Hōdan Akimichi

I may be a nice guy but I'll ruin your day in a heartbeat.

Personnel files.

Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Uji Hōdan Akimichi

【Alias】
Hōdan, Uji-sama, Onee-san(big brother)

【Age】
19

【Gender】
Male

【Birthplace】
Konohagakure?

【Bloodline】
Akimichi

【Rank】
Chūnin

Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Explain.

【Ninja techniques】

Canon Jutsus.

D-E rank techniques:
* The basic jutsu

【Custom made techniques】

Jutsu name:
Katon: Remain as we are
Rank:
B
Range:
5 meter
Description:
Explain.

Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】


【History】
>.<

【Family ties】
???

【Dreams and fears】
What?

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Okay will do and sorry for the inconvenience I may have put you, Masaka and Partisan through.

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Pic changed... Wish I knew how to photo shop so I could remove the glasses

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Ok ill see if I can find something more fitting.

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@Savato

If you can go back to my character. I had made the changes and was wondering if this was better than the "other" gin haha

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im making the changes now

The music within us

Pulling my recent post back for now. If everyone is coming to where I am I'll hold off on the post so thatwe can meet there.

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I did change the age to 19 because I'll make it so he was held back a year... Or better yet he held himself back because he didn't think he was ready to graduate yet. Hes going to be antisocial but not to the extent that I had him. I'll probably make him have an arrogant side.

I'm glad you like that he's balanced because that's what I was going for in terms of fighting style. The sword was a bit difficult to figure out because I didn't want to be to "sasuke cliche" with the whole chidori blade thing.

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Not harsh at all. Ppl need constructive criticism in order to get better. Like I said it's been awhile. I'll fix him up in a bit. Maybe not as twisted but can be at times. I won't make him overly antisocial but I'll make him more shy then anything. Yeah the idea of a MWAHAHAHA IM EVIL character is a bit redundant so I'll change it around