Sorry, life was thrown into an upheaval and I need to sort things out. Imma drop out of this, sorry. I'm going to Europe in two weeks anyway. Thanks tho TomeBinder, I was starting to lose hope on GMs here for a bit. Have a fun trip zombpocalypsing, guys.
@Fillet I'm writing her as more Irish than American. She just moved there, got citizenship in a few years but still holds the accent and mannerisms.
Republic or Northern?
Edit: Just realised how that sounded. Quite abrupt. Was curious how you envisioned your char. :)
Edit 2: also you said you're from singapore, it's vastly different from writing an Irish char esp with the slang and all you add in. So whats your inspiration if you don't mind me asking?
And in all the chaos, Angie's Irish luck still prevails.
She's Irish American, so, not really Irish?
Yeah, I don't get your characterisation of her, since her bio said Irish American, which I took to mean her parents/grandparents/etc came from Ireland, but she's culturally American than not, but the slang she uses is full on all over the place of Irish/Scottish/English. 0.o
I have the picture that most of the group are up a ramp, past the SUV, maybe a level or so above it. There's Amy in the stairwell, Malik's gone to rescue her, along with a couple of the Japanese boys. They're all on the same level.
I will post tomorrow.
Also suddenly hit with an image of a Japanese boyband saving the day, lololol.
Recently I went through a few months of making characters that had terrible backstories (parents died or wife/son died or somebody they loved died) that didn't correlate with how they saw the world ie they weren't super depressed but functioning soon after the tragedy. I realised that and immediately switched my focus. It was bad characterisation.
Now my characters are really average, run of the mill, neighbour Joe types with a cracked flaw/problem that is going to be developed/have personal growth. I find them more interesting, to be honest, like one of them's a coward whose only skill is running away, in a zombiepocalypse, who wouldn't even try and save anybody (while everybody else, mostly awesome soldiers, would near sacrifice themselves to protect the group).
All of my characters, now and then, have amplified traits of myself, but are also different enough from myself that I'd need a second to think and feel like they do, so they're relatable to me but I can comfortably say I'm not writing my life story out in the open.
2432 CE: Genetic manipulation has reached its peak. IQs can now be specially engineered to 200. Hair color, eyes, and other features are for parents to control. Personality manipulation is the stuff of science fiction and can never be achieved. 2563 CE: Atomic manipulation is available. Atoms can be created and destroyed at will. 2585 CE: "The Dark" occurs. All metal in the world goes dark for 10 seconds, then humanity blacks out for 10 years while specially engineered drones and probes go around the world and insert an electric virus emitter. The virus is controlled by a man named Giov Morodimi. Humanity is aware only of the 10 seconds during which all electricity stopped and all metal went mysteriously black. Many speculators believe aliens, but this was disproved by NASA. 2654 CE: Giov Morodimi enters a cyrochamber where he will achieve sub-sentient immortality. His mind still controls the virus emitters and the viruses themselves. 2733 CE: Giov releases virus. His cousin, Derigm Morodimi, institutes "The Hack". All alter-egos are put in cryostasis and their personalities are carried by the infected cells to the virus emitters, who in turn "Upload" them to a mysterious supercomputer known as the "L-Net", standing for "Life-Network". It is now 0 LNR (Life Network Rotations). 0.5 LNR: Derigm voluntarily joins the L-Net to assimilate humanity for "The Return", when they will all be enslaved to the Morodimis. Derigm and Giov cannot figure out how to directly control personalities, but they know how to code it into their minds. 50 LNR: The Morodimis lose control. Nobody knows why. Legend says that Derigm's key to the Return is still hidden in the L-Net. 250 LNR: Civilization is reestablished. Various cyber-governments spring up.
You have the ability to cast 'spells' in the format of a computer command. Only a small nobility has access to these. Format: ///:{[CommandNameOneWordAbbreviationsAreLikelyALLCAPS]:<Target/Message/PointA/PointB/AnyThatMayApply:<Whatever>>}(security code clearance-command channel)
Examples: ///:{[IMSG]:<Message:<Hello>><Target:<UltikanaRe>>}(0-ulti'schannel) Sends the message "Hello" to UltikanaRe through the "ulti'schannel" ///:{[DEATH]:<Target:UltikanaRe>>}(7-End) Kills UltikanaRe through the "End" command channel
Security Code Clearances 0-7, easy to hard to learn the inner code. 7 is unknown to most people.
Levels of code 0-7, 0 being visible when you enter the command line, 7 being accessible only by hacking into the inner core of the L-Net. Depending on the clearance of the command, you must know that layer of inner code.
File extensions An User (Command-wielder) may create files of varying power depending on the commands used in that file. Here are some common file extensions and their clearance: .doc: Document, 0 .img: Image, 0 .dsp: Display, 0 .adsp: Animated Display, 1 .wor: Superficial world (looks and feels like just a game), 1 .wedit: World Edit (Minor), 2 .lnk: Persona Display Link, 2 .ccon: Optionial Control Link, 3 .ssc: Self Structure Change, 3 .wrd: File ward, 4 .endoc: Encrypted document (Minor), 4 .nedit: Net/World Edit (Medium), 5 .enfl: Encrypted File (Major), 5 .core: Net Edit (Major), 6 .aurhak: Hack into persona without permission, 6 .moro: Contact to the 'mythical' world of Earth, 7 .rel: File pertaining to "The Return", 7
Netaliases All personas within the L-Net have a Netalias, which is essentially a name. Users have an Useralias and a Netalias. For most commands (specifically minor ones), a Netalias is required. For the most advanced commands, they may require an Useralias.
Netcodes All personas have a Netcode, which is essentially a password. Users have Netcodes and Usercodes. Again, these are required for commands and accessing files well as the L-Net itself.
All humans are users, the other 5/6 of the populace are net personas. They are engineered to be the Mrodimi's military ideal citizens. They're looks and features are based off of a random User.
You will play a user, and feel free to make your own commands. If I see something OP I will tell you, but virtually anything is possible with the right clearance.
The posting requirement is 8-14 paras a week, distributed however you wish. When you are making your character, think about the world (file) you are in. Nothing is perfect in the L-Net, so feel free to come up with a few mega-dystopias. You may also decide you want your native world to resemble a high fantasy MMOORG. That is totally fine. I want that diversity. You are required to also fill out the world sheet unless you have the express consent of the world builder. Anything used without permission will not be accepted, be I do not accept world builders who decide they no longer want to work with the other person at a deeper level.
Netalias/Useralias Netcode/Usercode (Image if you would like) Race/Species Occupation Appearance (2 para) •Race/Species •Race appearance details •Attire Backstory (Not really the place for a lot of character development, more of a timeline with plot hooks. Try to approach it objectively. 2-3 para) Personality (2-3 para. Please reference backstory for why she is that way. Alliances/Organisations/Employers/Nations (A few lines each, no more than a para per...whatchamacallit)
Name of Cyberworld List of prominent nations and cities. (Please distribute about 24 lines between them for descriptions.) Geography (This may have been somewhat covered in earlier sections. You may skip if you feel you adequately described it. Be sure you also included climate, topography, wildlife, terrain types, and bodies of water. Please make sure you have about 3 para in earlier sections if you skip it. Also, it would be nice if you went by nation/province/region) History (This an overview of the world. You do to need every war that happened between some nations, but you do need large societal trends and massive conflicts. For example; for our world I would probably list the Enlightenment and WW2, but the American Civil War would most likely be left out as it did not affect too many other nations. 3-4 para)
You may switch up the order of anything in those sheets.
Please do not go too far over those maximums. I do not really want novella-epic-per-post or even in CSs (although I did intentionally add a lot to the CSs and Worldbuiling Sheet). I feel this belongs in advanced because I do want 2 or more paragraphs a post, I just want less than 10 (per post).
Head pounding, heart thumping and heavy breaths in his own ear, Evan ran. In glimpses behind him, gunfire and mounted lights from the four-man squad lit up a dark wave of ravenous zombies in flashes. A few shamblers fell but more replaced them - ever more surrounded the survivors’ vicinity from every direction he could see like an enclosing trap. He kept near the forefront of the group headed towards the carpark and positioned himself within a protective buffer of soldiers that took down zombies who got too close. A girl screamed to his diagonal right - he spared a turnaround glance - the young girl screamed as she was dragged to the ground from the side like a stray fawn.
I can’t save her, he told himself. I can’t save anybody. Run. Keep running.
Evan jumped and easily pulled himself up the concrete wall; landed and without waiting to help anyone else, he ran and vaulted over the SUV to follow their saviour. The black man led them up a level, presumably to the top floor for air evacuation by the Japanese military; he didn’t care why a foreign nation would send in help at this junction, as long as he could be let in. Evan took the precious distance they had secured from the zombies to unsling and fumble in his bag for a headlamp.
The band was tight and pressed painfully into his wound but the steady white light shone on his path meant he could see where he was going without depending on someone else’s frantic beams. He looked around the concrete environment. There were plenty of cars still parked in rows, which could be useful to escape in a maze-like tactic. The upper levels stayed quiet while hollow noises from the swamp of shamblers at the bottom travelled up the spiral ramp. It wouldn’t be long before the dead forced their retreat to be stuck on the roof. “Is a helicopter coming? Did you radio them? Are they close?” he asked a barrage of questions, out of fear, at the soldiers.
He couldn’t trust help would arrive in the nick of time and it was too risky to be caught on the roof with no way out. They needed plan B to get away from a sudden onslaught of zombies they might meet or to buy themselves time to reach another rooftop for a definite clear landing, so he asked the stranger about the exit signs on the ceilings. “Where does this carpark lead to? An office? A mall?”
Oh, sorry. I didn't mean it like that. I wasn't being sarcastic. I was actually praising him. I'm sorry. I know the rules. I'm just saying that if Tomebinder wants to keep going without me, he could've. I didn't mean to offend anyone. Sooooorrrryyy XD, I really am pretty bad at explaining what I want to say without someone misunderstanding it as a bad thing. I really am sorry if it seems like I was going on a sarcastic tantrum. Life's quite great actually, though hectic, I have an amazing life compared to most and I usually go on this site not to pick on people but to relax. It's just that life's gotten even more hectic. I'm really sorry. I didn't mean it that way. Wow, that was the longest in a forum site I have ever been without someone being pissed off at me XD. I knew it would happen soon. Again, I'm sorry. Didn't mean anything bad about it. And I do know the RP rules, and that is why I love this RP. It keeps going and growing. And again, I didn't mean to be a jerk for him not knowing me at a personal level and understanding my life. Sorry bout that XD. I'm usually polite on the Internet.
You knew the direction of your life - competitions and assignments don't spring out of nowhere without ample time needed for preparation - and you knew about the rules of this RP. So don't throw a tantrum at the GM who warned you and then enforced his rules as if he was at fault for not understanding your life. Your rudeness in your first post was unnecessary. You stormed in and threw a jerk fit and continued to do so. You should and could have easily said that sorry, you couldn't post anymore and dropped your character. TomeBinder might be slightly annoyed but it's an unfortunate staple part of RP life players leave for any reason and from what I've seen of him it wouldn't have caused any trouble at all if you had done that in the first place.