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10 yrs ago
Current Wont be around today, too busy dying from this massive hang over. Sorry guys!
10 yrs ago
This is asking for an RP in which the Southend-on-Sea furniture bots battle for control with the Korean casino bots, in an ultimate struggle that will destroy the world.
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10 yrs ago
Suddenly building some kind of wall doesn't seem like a bad idea. Vote Frengo 2016 for RPG President.
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10 yrs ago
Is it sad that I bought a 10yo Netbook from Ebay with the sole intent of using it just to write my RP posts?
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10 yrs ago
Sea Gorillas are not a "personal" issue, and affect the entirety of mankind. It's morons like you that prevent social and cultural progress.
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@Frengo Understood capn'. Do you mind if I advertise one of my newest, literally still crispy RPs? Just say the word if you agree, but if you say no, I obviously understand.


An invasive way to do it would be to put it in your sig ;)

But yeah cool, you can use my shop window to put up a few posters.
@6slyboy6 If your character arrives at the check point before I get another post in, have it so he arrives just as the Colonel and his men are setting up shop. In my latest post, he's still enroute to his destination.
Colonel Solomon Troy

The journey was slow and treacherous; four diesel chugging metal beasts leading the way through torn and scarred countryside.

From atop the leading Protector's copula, the Colonel chewed on a cigar. A new cigar. All paper and brown mush. The smoke was bitter, and the lining of his mouth burned a little, but it didn't come across to the wily soldier as a particular health risk. The Crawlers or the Bandits would get him first, not cancer. It was just a matter of time, and his luck was going to run short sooner or later.

The towering and dull ruins of Astrakane could be seen on his left, made barely visible by a partially obscured moon. This was a perfect Crawler environment - little light, plenty of cover and a bunch of humans all grouped together.

But they weren't coming, the Colonel knew this. He wouldn't have set out in darkness otherwise. No, the blow he'd dealt them earlier in the day would have sent the survivors skittering for the darkness of Astrakane's underbelly. There they'd regroup and lick their wounds first. He reasoned he'd bought himself a day or so before they threatened the Republic for the millionth time.

A high powered rifle cracked from the darkness; a Republican Guardsman a few feet away from the roaring Protector fell to his knees with both hands warpped around his throat. It took several seconds for the Colonel to fire up the enthusiasm to deal with yet another sniper.

"Fan out, guns up, identify and eliminate," he barked through his cigar's smoke.

He hopped down from the tank, and joined his men as they scrambled to find the sniper. Another rifle shot sounded, and yet another son of the Republic fell down for the last time. The Colonel growled, but stood tall and refused to cower. Better a sniper take him, perhaps, than a Crawler. He could get a clean death, with a bit of luck.

But no.

He was standing because nothing would shake his fighting men more than an officer who shows fear. He offered himself to the sniper, dragging on his cigar to make himself an obvious target. The rifle cracked again, and for a moment some shrubbery a hundred yards off to the east lit up.

"Everything we got," the Colonel yelled, pointing at the sniper's position.

His men began firing in the sniper's general position, and a Protector fired a couple of its 40mm cannons too. It was a short battle.

"Three humans dead, and for what?" he asked, more annoyed than anything. "What were they trying to achieve?"

Something warm and wet dripped down his neck, and it was then that the Colonel realized his left ear had been grazed by the sniper's last shot.

"Yup," he sighed, adding a sarcastic smile. "It's going to be Crawlers. Not today, not tomorrow, but some day they'll get me. What a way to die that'll be."
Might I note something about my character? As a robothe should be able to remember stuff from before the -whatever happened-. But I was thinking about making it his persoanl mission to find lost memory, or clran corrupted data. Whaddaya think?


Entirely up to you, but corrupted data would be easier than the lost memory... because at some point you'd have to actually have an idea of what happened to the world. Which is still up for grabs by the way.

Updated the Player Tracker 3000.

Waiting for the starters to make their introductory posts before I resume the Colonel's story.

EDIT: Almost forgot.

There's some REALLY nice work here so far. Superb job by all. We certainly have varied writing styles, which is fantastic and exactly what I wanted. Hopefully I'll get a chance to learn a thing or two from you all :)
@FrengoHey. Just a clarification, the pagasus form of Nukpana is actually the only good part of her and also a form she rarely uses. The wolf form(Tala which means red wolf) is the monster who occasionally hunts with crawlers but normally she sticks to praying on small groups of armed men with fellow wolves. I noticed that you referenced the Red Pegasus in your introduction post. I just wanted to clarify, and perhaps I misunderstood when we briefly discussed it earlier.

Just thought I should let you know. I don't see the crawlers following a pretty red pegasus around....


He used it as a blasphemous curse, or that was the way it was supposed to come across. You know, rather than saying something like "God's Blood!" or "Jesus Christ!" he said "Red Pegasus"

"Nearly half our men, by the Red Pegasus, a few more victories like this and the war will be over in days... though not in our favor!"


He was basically cursing the fact he'd lost so many men in that opening engagement, which is cool because he obviously feels that the Red Pegasus is kind of mythical or legendary or unique in nature. I thought that'd fit well with things.

EDIT: I guess looking back over that post, it could have been written better. But hey, I've not written anything creative in a long time, so you're going to have to forgive the rust and any confusion that comes from it.

If I write something that no one really understands, just ask me to clarify. I'll do my best to make sure it doesn't happen often ;)
Sorry for the big-ass post, I shortened it as best I could.

@Mivuli Accepted :) Riley is a very well thought out character, well done, it was an enjoyable read.

Astrakane City Center, 19:00.

The Crawlers surged across the centuries-old impact craters; their hollow and deep forms a reminder of the destructive nature that Mankind once possessed.

"Still possesses," muttered Colonel Troy, peering at his amassing enemy with the practiced calm of a tried and tested battlefield commander.

A few of his soldiers coughed nervously, or shivered. Their sounds of quietened or masked despair were a shrieking cry in Colonel Troy's mind, but it was too late to make another of his grand speeches. No words would soothe his boy-soldiers, as they stared down at the writhing blackness of sin that was slithering its way towards their positions.

"Easy now fellahs," he said, refusing to take his eyes away from the looking glass he had set up on a pile of sandbags atop a crumbling Old World tower block. "Don't fire until I give the command, our lives depend on it."

Some of the coughs and shivers stopped, but not enough. He could be speaking an alien tongue for all they cared. Luckily, he could count on most of them to obey his command - he was a War Hero after all, lavished like a prized whore with all kinds of shiny medals, courtesy of the President of course.

The Crawlers were getting close, and they would stop as one every few seconds to peer up at Colonel Troy and his men. It never ceased to amaze him how well coordinated they were, as if a single mind controlled them all.

"And a retarded one at that," the Colonel grunted.

"Sir?" one his Lieutenants asked, bewildered by the remark.

Colonel Troy snapped from his reverie like a mouse trap, and eyed the man with his tired stare. "Retarded, Lieutenant Barker, the Crawlers are retarded."

"Yes sir," Barker replied, his youthful smile an uncertain monument to his faith in the man who have saved the Republic a dozen times.

The Colonel paid him no further heed, and went back to tracking the progress of the Crawlers. There were surely hundreds of them, all with their slimy skin, falling over one and other to get ever closer to their prey. Little did they know however, that the Colonel had sent several teams during the daylight to line the rims of the craters with TNT. Furthermore, he'd had several crude anti-personnel mines deployed at the base of the tower blocks. In a matter of seconds, the Crawlers were going to be surrounded on all sides by huge explosions and flying shrapnel.

"Just a little further," he said quietly.

The first Crawler to reach the base of the tower blocks paused as its webbed hand creaked down on something hard and cool to the touch, and then the world became very vibrant and colorful.

An hour later, Astrakane City Center

"Forty five wounded, seventeen dead," Leiutent Barker said sullenly. His youthful features were caked in grime and soot, and his bandaged left hand was generously drenched in his own blood.

Colonel Troy sighed as he kicked over the smouldering corpse of a Crawler, and spat at it. "Nearly half our men, by the Red Pegasus, a few more victories like this and the war will be over in days... though not in our favor!"

Lieutenant Barker nodded, his skin paling with blood loss. "Yessir, but our early estimates put a the Crawlers at a thousand permanent casualties. We haven't won a battle on this scale in nearly a-"

"Year, yes, yes, I know - I was there," Colonel Troy said, giving Barker a warm smile. His eyes fell to the young man's hand, and his brow furrowed. "Lieutenant, I fear you lied when you told me your wounds were superficial."

"Just a flesh wound sir," Barker replied, trying to straighten himself in an effort to appear more energetic.

"Indeed, I've seen many men die from such 'flesh wounds'," Colonel Troy grunted. "Off to triage with you, I will not be spending this evening writing to young Mrs. Barker about how brave her husband was."

Barker smiled sheepishly, and nodded. "As you wish, Colonel." The young Lieutenant staggered away in the direction of a team of waiting medics.

Left alone among the bodies of the Crawlers and the sounds of his men performing a cleaning sweep of the enemy dead, Colonel Troy pondered up at the stars. A warm breeze came in from the north, and for a moment he allowed himself to hope that this time, he could finally drive the Crawlers out of the city and secure the road for his peoples' future greatness.

But he knew it was probably a lost cause. The Crawlers out numbered his men three to one, and the bandits were a cancer that had threatened the western front time and time again. What he needed was more soldiers, and more guns - but where would he get them? His campaigns were bleeding the Republic dry, literally. President Ambrose would not sanction another draft.

"What I need are some mercenaries," he said to no one in particular. A few passing soldiers looked at him quizzically, but soon returned to their tasks when he swept them with his tired gaze.

1st Republican Army Staging Post Alpha, Eastern Front. 21:00.

With the blessing of the President, Colonel Troy found himself sat at an old table. Upon it, was a radio - a new build, no more than a wooden box with a few coat hangers sticking out of it... though the technician seemed enthused about its potential to reach as far as Lindow.

With a cough to clear his throat, he began.

"This is Colonel Solomon Troy of the Republic of the Flaming Sun, based in the ruins of Astrakane. If you can hear this, we are interested in enlisting the services of individuals with combat experience. Prices are negotiable. There will be a Republican checkpoint north of the city, head there if you are interested, and you will be issued orders and the terms of your contract.

Threaten that checkpoint, and I promise that the full extent of the Republic's military power will be turned on you."

He sat back in his chair, cringing internally. He was not so great at speaking to an invisible audience, but the President insisted that it had to be him to make the broadcast. He looked at the technician, who looked back with quiet respect.

"That'll do, stick it on repeat and broadcast it every thirty minutes," he said to the technician. "Inform the President that I will be taking the 1st Brigade to the north immediately."

Going north was a risky move, as it would cut him off from the Republic, but he dared not allow any potential mercenaries into the homes of his citizens. No, instead, he would create a new army in the north, and once it was ready, he would lead it south and smash the Crawlers from both directions. It was a frail plan, but the Republic could no longer afford a protracted conflict with its eternal enemy.
@AbysmalDemon Your faction looks good to go :) Maybe they need to reach out to the Republic for "assistance" with their "landlords"?





@FrengoEssentially that's what I mean, but it won't be to that extent. It will be quite limited and only if I am waiting for a long time to wrap up interaction with a certain form. If that makes sense... I won't have all three forms going at once, but there is a possibility of two but I'll try to prevent them from overlapping each other because yes, if one form is wounded, it will show and coincide on the others. I will clarify in the CS that they all do share the same life force because she is in fact all three of those characters.

Not sure if that really clarified it, but yeah. Lol


Think I got it, thanks for clearing that up :)
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