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2 yrs ago
Current Kinda wanna RP BG3....
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3 yrs ago
Thirsting over Pedro Pascal.
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7 yrs ago
Finally saw Endgame and don't know what to do anyone.
7 yrs ago
In a mood for some GoT RP. Anyone else?
7 yrs ago
It's been a while hasn't it?

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Badass couple is badass. XD You can get me a post tomorrow, though I will be out part of the afternoon. ^^;
Nah he'd be such a bore in bed. Omg, Gendry do u even kno wat ur doing down there??? Cersei and Petyr will be mom and pop and The Hound is the cool uncle who drinks. What am I saying? They all drink. They'll get drunk and the kids will say eff this and go off on their own but it's dark so maybe later. XD
Oh you know I don't care about Gendry! But Joffrey and Arya and Sansa are gonna have some crazy adventure and sadly The Hound, Petyr and Cersei have to play babysitters. LOLZ
Okay so we've all gathered and had generally the same concerns. I will be giving feedback in this post. If I overlooked you, let me know. If you edit something, let us know and tell us WHAT you edited so we're not trying to figure it out. Pouring over sheets gets a bit tiring you know. Only when I've given you a fat APPROVED, may you post in the CS and then talk with the others to make your two connections. I think rather than have the GMs give you one, the RPers will feel free to pick two on their own. So have at it once you're approved. (after all, why make a connection with someone who is dropping out or has to make edits???) Also guys, present tense is really annoying to read. And some have used first person which is fine in a sample. But please post in third person, past tense for all IC posts! Also proofread, some people are missing a letter here or there. Just things to tidy a post up. Also also also-some of you need appearance, just find something please, even just a head shot~ **_FEEDBACK:_** Hebigami Shiho: Your character will be useful for helping with work on the sidelines and during downtime. Obviously she is not a fighter but we would like to know is why you added her inability to fight (with the sword, bow). Is it needed? Could you just say she isn't combat oriented and therefore does not fight if possible? But then you also mention she is "quite skilled" with fire and water but in reality she isn't. She just knows basics to aid with cooking and making potions correct? Also her stutter (for me, a character stuttering shows weakness or a bit of stupidity that she can't think/converse) or shyness can be a weakness, which is fine to have but if she's stuttering every word, I have to question her resolve to be with a group, tromping around the world. If she's really as popular as she claims, then wouldn't she have gained some confidence with being social? Just some thoughts. SillyGoy: We believe him lacking any "drawbacks" or weakness to his massive list of attacks is an issue. We'd like you to scale back his skill set some. We feel like the giant boulder needs to go, and at least one other move because they are pretty advanced and although there is reason behind it, we'd still liked some moderation. And as far as teaching goes, that is alright...but I would then wager it is basic and not in a real classroom setting since he is very young. I mean a 24 year old even in an academic situation will probably only have 3-4 enchantments that they know well, be them something basic and something more advanced or tricky. So if you could up the age some, that would be lovely but the skills is what need tweaking the most. The_written_John: We're in agreement that the attack that can give someone sudden death/a heart attack, is not something we're comfortable with. Also the history of him is quite...colorful and it should have a purpose because that would take a mental tax on someone, drive them mad almost. It may also be helpful if you gave us some sort of Code or Creed he as a monk lives by. And you should also be aware that the world isn't that bloody or eccentric. I mean generally everyone gets along...no crazy massacres or war torn landscapes. So if you can adjust his magical skills, jot down what he has learned/gained as a monk and how it guides him now, as well as make a note to be careful with his history and stability, that would be good. Dioxide: We're going to want to see a bit more in regards to his physical skills (if any) he has, or general fitness perhaps. We should note though, a rune wouldn't give poisonous toxins so he would need to carry some in a vial on his person, should he wish to say, coat a weapon in poison. And I think just having one or two weapons (and to me, katar is pretty much a dagger that's just more specified) rather than three since he is young and should focus on one thing rather than two or three, as far as skills and weaponry go. Dead Cruiser: We are a bit wary that he knows pretty much everything in some regard. We understand his age and his travels can add up the skills he has under his belt but we would still like to ensure he isn't on the border of a perfect character or one without flaws. His age is a flaw of course but since it grants him so much skill in everything you listed, it's more of a pro than a con, at least in the way it was presented since it just listed off everything he could do and nothing he struggled with. Or just doesn't like to do. Just because you have time on your hands doesn't mean you'll master fishing, it's not for everyone (an example). And then you go on to add all the spells and herbal things he knows to stay fit and healthy, again we would want exact details. And perhaps what sort of rules he abides by as a knight or former one.
Don't you start with me, mister 2.5 months! *shoves you toward Lin and Tenzin* You're just gonna keep her waiting for her man even longer. </3
I hope she doesn't get insecure after sex tho ^^; Gale wants to rock her world after all lol
Yes! I'm writing the feedback! It's in another tab, I swear but a good roll call can't hurt too!
They will. ^^ I just wish I could RP it instead of write it all by my lonesome. </3
Oh Prim, you gotta stop over thinking things. ^^;
Name: Mela Appearance: Age: 34 Origin: Drupali Class: Hunter and Merchant Skills: Stealth - She is able to move quickly through woods, she is flexible enough to leap, climb and hang upside down. Though due to her low levels of endurance and stamina, her stealth skills cost her a good deal of energy and effort. She is able to keep quiet and observe scenes from afar though her eyes will get tired and end up giving her headaches if she doesn't rest up during long adventures and foraging. Magic - spells/description coming Bargaining - Due to her travels across Drupali, she has collected information on the many merchants and other hard working citizens. In doing so, she has been able to use her information to get better deals with locals wherever she goes. Of course not everyone has a weakness for certain goods but Mela and her family are still known to have good quality items and as such, bargaining methods. Keeper of Lore - description coming Physical - Being a small framed woman, Mela is not in the best physical shape. She is flexible and small which can help her but in terms of muscle mass and defense and endurance, she is not very formidable. Still, she is quick on her feet and able to use bursts of speed to her advantage. Connections: Dante Fernshaw: Mela met Dante through her parents who were helping his own grow accustom to life at The Waterfalls. Mela and Dante spent their free time splashing around the ankle deep pools of water and climbing trees which gave them spectacular views of the enclosed forest around them. Over the next four years or so, they became good friends who took time to talk but also to be on their own to develop their own skills and hone their chosen specialty. Dante and his family soon moved away and this prompted Mela's parents to start traveling more frequently around Drupali to show their teenage daughter how to harvest, hunt, gather information and trade. Over the years she and Dante would cross paths for any number of reasons, still able to maintain their friendship through exchanging letters or having a beer somewhere lively. Sample: Stretched out before her was the large Twilight Expansion. It was a long wide but low area of grassy hills and valleys. It started off as yellow grass and then melted into orange and then red and then blue and purple and green. The gradient's transition was always flawless and breathtaking for any wanderer to stumble upon. Of course it also served as marker between Nah and Rubith, two large cities. Nah lay by the southeast side of Drupali while Bubith was more northern. In order to get to Dacara though, one could follow the Twilight Expansion westward and soon reach the center of Drupali that way, cutting through the surrounding woods to get to the largest lake and the country's capitol. Mela was on her way back from a small town in the Twilight Expansion. The town had only a handful of residents but it didn't generate much commerce which is where Mela came into the picture. After having been rescued by one of the town's monks, she felt indebted to them which was why she made the long three to five day trek (depending on the route and obstacles) to the town every month to help restock their supplies. As she continued to admire the sunset of colored wheat, she heard someone marching up behind her, the long strands rustling against leather and suede. "Hey Mela." Someone called out. It happened to be someone she had met along her numerous travels around Drupali. "I'm not surprised to find you here again." "Again?" Mela turned toward her, now looking at her old hunting companion, Urkwia. "You've been tracking me?" She smiled slowly, placing a hand to her hips, her frilly dress was something she wore, even when hunting and scavenging. It was a look that suited her dainty personality well. "On and off. We have to stick together after all." Urkwia commented. "How is your family? Still in The Waterfalls?" She asked. Urkwia was about five or six years younger than Mela but the two had a pretty good relationship despite the small gap in experience, they still aided one another and passed along any information they had gathered. What Mela liked most about the blue haired woman was that Urkwia could give her insight to the other countries. Mela had traveled them when she first left the next but she had been spending most of her recent years back in her home country of Drupali. She grew up in The Waterfalls, which were a series of large and small waterfalls located in the southern part of Drupali. They were private and remote but exported plenty of remedies and precious goods. "Yes." Mela replied and looked back out at the view. "I was heading back to the capitol though, I've gotten a summons from the King and Queen." She patted the leather messenger bag that was tucked against her left hip. Her younger friend let out a small sound of amazement. "I wonder if he's looking to purchase a large boar, they are in season." "I doubt that." Urkwia laughed softly and began to move down the small hill. "Good luck with that though!" She waved and continued the way she was going while Mela took a right and went the way she was going. As she walked, she thought about the recent events. Nothing urgent was coming to mind but she was certain if it were bad news, she would have gotten more than a vague letter asking her to come to Dacara's castle by the end of summer. And time was surely winding down. The silver haired woman kept trucking along, keeping an eye out for any herbs, berries or other natural goods or animals she could harvest or kill. In the back of her mind, she also went over any bounties she had heard about. None came to mind. So for the time being, Mela weaved her way through the growing forest, not needing a map as she knew the country like her own heart. It was dangerous like anywhere else in the world yes, but Mela had gathered plenty of skills, insight and connections to make her way safely and soundly.
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