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Time to strike!

The groups come in action?!

Konohagakure
Taking away the Nine.


It became quiet for a moment. Until the sounds of people struggling went through the halls of the hospital.

It happened so fast. The struggle was rough and blood fell on the ground, pouring from wounds as the people struggled. But the fight was short. The group that charged, soon started their next action. Five of the seven people started to form handseals and placed their hands at what seemed an invisble wall. Chakra started to make a menacing sound as it started to clash with a barrier. Then the sound of glass shattering was produced as the barrier was taken down and the group barged into the room of Miharu Hon's room. But Miharu wouldn't be able to do anything, as he was still in a coma. All the while there were seven people now staring at him for a second. One of the people pointed to the door. A scream was already heard as some nurse had seen a dead body. Trying to run away, she would fall to the ground. Blood pouring out of a wound, out of her back. The one who had thrown the kunai looked over his shoulder, back into the room.

The five others were opening some scrolls as they formed a formation in the room. The sixth one carried the boy in the coma state out of his bed, placing him in the formation. After the five weaved several handseals, black lines crawled over the floor. Then they all vanished. The one that remained looked at the little bit of dust that was the only thing that remained of the group. ''THERE!''

Before the man could turn around, something sharp pierced through his chest from the back. Gasping for air was the last thing he did as the steel was pulled out and then plunged into his neck. ''Shit...Warn the Hokage! The Kyuubi's host has been kidnapped!
Kumogakure
Disguising the Sanbi host..


The woman gasped. Her eyes widened as they looked at the short sword. Slowly, a dark tainted spot was seen where the blade had pierced her skirt. Her hands trembled, moving towards the steel weapon. Before a finger could lay a touch upon it, it was pulled out of her body and then swing again. Falling backwards, the big wound at her throat marked the place where the steel had slashed deeply in the skin. ''That went easy.''

''Indeed. But we need to hurry. Befo-'' Another man said, kneeling near a man that had been stabbed three times before he had succumbed to his wounds, The few guards around were also taken down. With the rest of the small group entering the home of Otho, the host of the Sanbi, the boy had been taken out by some drug. The whole operation so far was going well. ''Lets smuggle him out and quickly prepare the next step.'' The man said, who had stabbed the mother of Otho. Some started to clean up the mess while the others would disguise Otho, while they would try to smuggle him out of the Cloud.
Amegakure
Incurring the wrath of the Four Tails!.


''RUN! QUICKLY! OH SHI-''


The man who had shouted the ordered was silenced in a rather brutal manner. His legs were reduced to ash as he was slowly being devoured in lava. The others of the group kept trying to lure the Four Tails into the trap. After they had managed to find the gigantic beast, the group had lost already more than half of their group. Now they were running for their life, trying to close the distance with Amegakure. The rain that poured never ending on the land did little to stop the lava, that was created by the Four Tailed Beast. Roaring, the beast looked with a glare at the shinobi who tried to evade his attacks. Slamming his right hand at place, he couldn't hear the satisayfing sound of bones being crushed or the ones that he had managed to crush screaming for life. No, he would see their broken bodies laying among rubble.

''Quickly! Keep advancing. We're nearly there!'' One of the people said, with a femine voice. The woman briefly glanced at the gigantic beast as they kept luring it towards Amegakure. Soon, their plan to draw it closer to the Rain would set what they wanted into action.
Kirigakure
Bringing two Beasts together is asking for trouble..and death..


''I-I...''

The sound of trees being pulled out of the ground by a crash, violently being thrown into the air, rang through the sound. Two gigantic beasts started to take their positions. Out of the group, there were only now four people alive. Three men and one woman. The woman glared in the direction of the beasts. They had escaped their hosts body when the group was altering the seal that was placed upon them. But they hadn't expected that the beasts would both, at the same time react in such a manner. They had literally broken through the seal and fully came back in their true form. The small island was big enough that both could move, but by the rising killing intent and looks of it, the two would clash.

The Five tailed Beasts lowered her head as she let out a roar, charging towards the Six tails. The latter seemed to ready itself against the charge. ''Shall we retreat?'' One of the man asked. The woman shook her head. ''Send the message to our contact in Kirigakure... Make sure that they will notice this.'' The woman said with a stern voice. ''There is a fault in this operation. I hope the others have more success.''
Accepted by me, Templar.
I think the character is good. As GM, you receive my seal of approval.

I think that today people should finish their CS's, as tomorrow the IC is going to start. And though I will be at work, I am going to try to write something already to introduce my character. :P


This Sunday, I am going to post for ??? again. Best be prepared (thus in your village). Hue hue hue hue!
@Alternathan

There are some flaws in the CS.

1. * high chakra reserve
* average chakra control

Nope. If you want high chakra reserves, you will have bad control. If you want average chakra control, you can't start higher than a bit above average. Average is the middle way, meaning nothing high. In order to balance it out.

I am iffy about the amount of snow he can summon from the sky. If he can rofl summon a huge load of snow, it will would be a bit... I am not sure how to word it, but its not a technique I would see a genin do. In large amounts for a group of people.

That and I was chuckling (Blame Roro cause I just had a hilarious game session with him) when I read this :

''It does no damage and will online temporarily slow down or distracts his opponent, this also an easy to counter technique''

And

''--- I got TONS of other jutsu… will be revealed during RP (needs to learn them first)---''

Why that last line? Its clear that he as a genin will learn new techniques. However, going to say you will learn a ton, is a bit risky. We had some people in the past who did that. And they received little to nothing. Cause of it shows you're either wanting too much or like to hoard( not sure if is the right word).

And please fix the links in your summoning. I am not sure, but I won't allow a summoning that also serves as a sword (did I read that correct?) to castcamouflage jutsu. Game balance, sorry, I know it can be a huge pain, but is required to watch that.
Zakito Hon,
Konoha's Jounin commander and the leader of Hon's.

A slight disturbance,


Zakito opened slowly his right eye. With his hands at the back of his head, he woke up from his tree nap. There was something odd. Sitting up straight, he looked around. Dressed as he would have, when he was a jounin, the flak jacket was unzipped. ''Strange. I swear I could...'' He looked worried as he couldn't place that strange feeling. Deciding it wasn't something to fret over, not now at least, he let himself slowly fall off the branch.

Landing unharmed on his two feet, the white haired man looked up to the direction he would head towards. He had some things to discuss with Hisoka. Nothing too serious, but it was his job to discuss it with Hisoka before he would make it happen. Walking towards the Hokage Office, Zakito briefly pondered again why he was bothered with that strange feeling. It gave him the itch to reach to the katana that was sheathed in the scabbard on his back. Maybe he was just itching to train or teach with genins again? Chuckling at the thought, he started to whistle an old war tune on his way.

But on his way, Zakito noticed two ladies. Though not one for eavesdropping, he heard something strange. ''Didn't ya hear it? I swear ya!'' One of the ladies said. As Zakito passed them, he acted like he wasn't interested in the their talk. But one sentence made him almost chuckle out loud.

''It was like there was disturbance in the chakra...force... I don't know. Maybe it was just a bad dream.''
@Enzayne

Accepted.

@The Psychic Refugee

Would you mind to change :

''Seventh son of the prior scion of the House Perar, born near the Wall ''

There is no Wall. Other than that, once you have changed that, I accept him. He is good. I am a fan of metal too.

I did my GM job, yeah.
Finished the requested character for you. Now I need to go to work.

I pledge loyalty and honor to the High Ruler of the Empire.
My cs, as promised. :P

I pledge loyalty and honor to the High Ruler of the Empire.
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