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WilsonTurner said
And while these are all valid questions, they are a bit much, aren't they? This is just a casual roleplay, after all.


There are different levels of casual, Ellri's running at a bit higher a level than this RP was designed for but not more than I can handle...considering.
Ellri said
Ahh... That sounds fairly plausible too. And it certainly makes defense of the inner city fairly easy to plan. A) How many gates to the inner city? B) How tall walls? C) Any overhanging battlements, moat or anything like that?

D) By the way, roughly how large is the population of the city? E) How large portion in Fortress/inner city/outer city?
F) Are there any secret tunnels leading from the fortress or inner city outside (either all the way outside or to the outer city)?

G) We presume the inner city walls are well-maintained? H) Might at least some part of the fortress hail back to the days of the old kingdom? Its not unusual for fortresses to be built in the same places many times, especially if there are (for example) strong foundations remaining.

I) What sort of terrain does the city lie in? is it all flat, or are there hills or even cliffs?



Some of these answers will be arbitrary.

A) Four, facing the cardinal directions.

B) 50 Ft

C) There a eight towers at regularly spaced intervals on the inner wall, perhaps mounted with ballista. No moat.

D) Uhhh, 20,000+?

E) The Inner City accounts for roughly 1/4th of the total city (So Willy, your map is disproportionate.) The Palace/Keep is 1/3rd of that.

F)

G) Yes.

H) Yes, the foundation stones. The rest was rebuilt during a century long occupation by the (now disbanded) Oragossi Dominion.

I) The Outer city is mostly flat, with the elevation decreasing as you go outwards. The Inner City was built over higher ground, the elevation was partially artificially created by the Oragossi who expanded the Inner City. They have a wealth of knowledge regarding earth moving and geography stuff.
Marastus Kane & Typhus
The Outer City


Marastus Kane could hear the shouting in the distance, followed by the clashing of steal and screams of the dying. That fool Jardin, Inquisitors like him almost convinced Marastus that the Order valued zealotry over intelligence and tact. He had been responsible for orchestrating religious upheaval across the south, and yet in one day all his plans for Othea seemed to be coming to ruin. First this boy-king was less amenable than he had been led to believe, and now the Inquisitions true presence had been exposed by that simple-minded fool. They would likely face legal sanctions and be expelled from Othea, if that boy-king didn't try to have them executed. The Senior Inquisitor rounded the next corner, expecting to find a dead evoker and perhaps a handful of innocents caught in the crossfire, but he stopped short in time to see the last light from Jardin's eyes faded and he fell from the twisted fiend's devilish blade.

A few seconds of silence passed as Marastus evaluated the scene. All of those dead were from the overzealous rabble that Jardin had recruited amongst the local peasantry, the type of men that were attracted to the violent power of passing judgment on others and not the virtue and faith of the Order. They were no loss to his efforts. Behind Marastus, a half-dozen true inquisitors in full battle regalia arrayed themselves behind their commander in formation, they held aloft glass flasks of a noxious mixture meant to incapacitate their foes. Ready to throw on command. Marastus did not give that command yet, he was not even sure this man was an Evoker. The man was clearly a heathen and likely a vile and honorless marauder as well, but his concern was with evokers alone. He raised his hand to halt his men, and approached to survey the scene in front of the guardhouse.

Unfortunately, the street had cleared and no witnesses remained to testify against the monstrously armored man. Without making any threatening moves towards him, Marastus stepped around the carnage and glanced into the guardhouse. Ah, the guards were looking through the door with shock plain on their faces. Pointing at one, he asked a simple question. "Did you notice anything unusual about this man?" he asked, tipping his head in the direction of the heathen once again. The guard seemed to open and close his several times, unable to vocalize his response. "Speak up now, I don't have all day."

"H-h-he...fights like...like a monster," the guard stuttered. Great, useless information.

"Literally, or metaphorically?" he asked, expecting he knew the answer already.

"W-What?" As he had envisioned, useless.

He turned back to the carnage, examining it further. He could see the battle unfolding before his seasoned eyes, and from the looks of it all the wounds had been conventional. Thank the Father, Marastus would have hated being obligated to do battle with that...thing. Well now it was a simple matter of erasing the evidence of their involvement, he tore the insignia from the priest's robes and gestured for the other inquisitors to do the same with Jardin's thugs. "Take Jardin's body as well, the Prelate would appreciate it being returned to Idris," he gave another look at the heavily armed and armored titan. "We have no interest in non-evokers, I'll leave your crimes with the city guard-" he was cut off as he saw the growing wall of darkness spreading outwards from what looked to be the district surrounding the Theatre, he glanced at the heathen but it was too distant to be his doing. What unholy judgment was about to be passed on this city?
My plan was for the 'lakeside town' to be the edge of the Outer City. The inner city is more for the wealthy, the military, and the nobility. So being parallel to the fishers, tanners, and other plebeians isn't ideal. I wanted the inner city to actually be in the center of the city as a whole, surrounded by 360 degrees of outer city.
My interest is piqued, I will read the rest of the interest check and start on the website later today.
Frettzo said
Hello! :) This seems like an awesome group of peeps and characters- I might have something for you, GM, in a few days. Not a character, of course, but an offer in terms of lore and depth. Farewell, we shall speak later!


Mysterious, I like it.

@Sep/Ellri, I intended for Amaryth to have started as a fortress with a moderate distance from the lake, and a small lakeside village. The city grew around the fortress, and the lakeside village expanded to meet the growing city until eventually they became one. Criticism is welcome.

I'm in the public library, again, and I'm trying to register for college so I might not respond to this until later.
idlehands said
All This and More - Mad Sin Now make a game of it, use only song titles as replies & there you go. Instant spam thread.


"I Like It" - Enrique Iglesias
Yeah, IRL is busier than I expected as well. I'm going to head to college today to finish getting registered, I really should start going to the gym again today as well, and tomorrow I have an early morning college orientation.
I stopped trying after a few minutes, none of my posts were going through.
Am I the only one who had abysmal problems dealing with RPG yesterday?
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