Guilty Spark

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

The Keep is a little cramped against the Inner Wall, but this is what I've got. Note, this was made in two minutes from a broken library computer.



Edit: Observing the Amaryth Q&A, you'll note I indicated the inner city, while on a higher elevation, was level because the elevation was artificial.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

@All Bark, solid point. I like that post.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Well done, and I forgot to mention nothing is built up against the walls for obvious reasons, like clear line of sight for the defenders, so there is a broad lane (mentioned in the same post I referred Willy too) which goes around the inner city wall.

Word Syndrome [fantasy, mystery, modern, detective(?)]

Is there any more information you can provide about the political scene in Oblak City? Not just names, but agendas, local methodology, etc.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

WilsonTurner said
So the Royal Arena is in the Outer City? When was that? I know that the Vocators dot-Junior were over there, but Vocators are everywhere.And when did anyone say the Royal Arena was in the outer city, because I don't remember reading that.

Literally, the first post about the Royal Otharion Theatre. Go back and reread it.

Edit: "Eventually the main street led to the city's inner wall,"

"Either way she followed the rest of the crowd around the walls, she had expected this arena to be inside but apparently it was in the northern reaches of the city nearer to the harbor. "

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Colllege essay is a little extreme, maybe a high school essay.

Word Syndrome [fantasy, mystery, modern, detective(?)]

Alright, I've finished reading the information in and out of the website and I'm definitely interested. I've begun preliminary work on shaping my character, and I hope I can live up to my own expectations.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Wilson have you read the IC? We've sealed off the Outer City and are considering it a military loss. You and the other evokers aren't behind our lines, you're behind the Kalesian Empires lines.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

WilsonTurner said
I dunno what else I can do. I'm not going to assume that you'll just follow and I'll make an entire post of me running through the city with a trusty sidekick or something. Besides, wouldn't Itani's regiment be closing in on the arena by now? Logic might state that the Evokers are more than a match for the non-Evoker Knights, and require Evoker assistance to bring in.

How about there is an invasion and arresting you is nowhere near the priority any longer.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

This RP was an exercise in restraint for me, a simple RP design with no standards, and it was advertised as being such.