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@starfall The hilarious part is it wasn't meant to be funny.

Tryhard, Yoda senses, hmm.
@StarfallPray tell, why do your eyes deceive you? A princess without the ability to see what's in front of her is hardly a princess. :)
@DLLThis character is entirely overdeveloped for this RP. That character is easily powered character ground, simply based on her massive amount of abilities, weapons, and passive abilities. That doesn't begin to get into how powerful she is, and what those abilities actually do.

I saw the ability that 'limits' her, but it never states what it limits, and you don't seem to point that out in any way either.
@Starfall I shall never bow to an imitator to the throne!

so, do you plan to join the event?
@EverettEverything looks fine except for the part about gaining speed with no increase in g-forces and momentum. It should be known that this tourney will function under looser laws of physics, but they cannot outright be broken. Primarily because that causes many issues in combat settings. A lot of those speed conditions could be met if she simply ran/flew in a vacuum.

One other thing is reasonable and unreasonable open endedness. Its fine to be vague, but there needs to be clearly defined limits, or at least examples of limits. Leaving some of your abilities so open ended opens the door for what I call 'hat tricks.'

@Enki Everything looks good except for the move that auto-statuses everything. First, what statuses are they? Second, what status is this 'doom' feeling, if any? Lastly, and I'll put this in the rules, that all attacks must cover distance. I.E. No teleporting attacks two inches from someones face, and similar things. I'm assuming that you'll need to actually hit your opponent to give them those status effects.

@VordakGo ahead, bud.

@EnkiThis looks much better. I'm pretty sure I'm approving it, but I need to study it just a bit more.

@Starfall Violence is what we do best.

@Everett
The exact reasoning was that characters should not be able to surpass sound speed on their own. ki's is a specific, speed based ability, like the "Haste" spell from D&D.

And there's more than enough room for more participants!

To do the drop-down, there is a 'toggle format cheat sheet at the bottom of the page. Go down to where it says 'hider' and it will show you how to do it.
@EnkiAlright fair enough. Thanks for the effort, anyway.
@BlunderbussApproved!
@EnkiThis character is still a bit over the MP limit here. The sheer amount of stuff he has, as well as the practically dozens of passive buffs makes him super tanky, super versatile, super agile, and essentially super everything, and thats just on the sheer amount of abilities listed. Also, outright immunity to elements without an incredibly good reason is frowned upon, and you have two outright immunities based on just what I've seen so far, and I see no reason why he would be immune other than the fact that he's good at those elements. At best, you could get resistance to those elements.

Again, the numbers are cool and all, but they're not an overly reliable system in a place where stats and numbers aren't used, but I'll let it slide and allow your opponents to decode how they wish to interpret it.

Finally, sheets aren't required to be all-inclusive, so you are free to redact filler like maybe how a specific ability works(since I'm more function over form), or where it comes from, but some of your abilities actually don't explain what they do at all it seems. And that won't really work.

We are looking for powerful characters, but we need balance as well. So you've gotta balance the power with tact.

Edit: I am familiar with FF7, so I get the stuff about soldier and mako and whatnot, but not everyone knows what material are, and from what it seems they are hella, hella powerful. There's nothing wrong with having some aces, but the material gives him many.
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