@Jensoman feel free to return if you ever change your mind. And yeah, if I'm being 100% honest, free roleplay would probably suit you better. Best of luck friend, and if you ever need advice (on anything roleplay related) you can contact any of us I think.
@Jensoman I concur. I don't think it's nitpicky. I have to say that when you compare quality between other characters, and yours, there's a clear disparity. I don't mean to offend, but for instance when you look at images used, I find it hard to believe that you've watched Naruto.
I would like to add: we're not saying no to you joining us indefinitely. This is not us saying 'we don't want you' because we're not that mean (I think). However, we also have to keep in mind the quality of characters. I think that if you were to take a look at other characters and 'copy' them a bit (for instance, images that you use, or so) to make sure it's the same level of quality, we'd be a step further.
I'm afraid that currently I can't really accept it, keeping in mind other people need to work with this character too for interaction and it'd lead to a big disparity between you and them if that were to take place.
Ah, it's fine. I didn't mean to offend anyone either.
I'm not leaving simply because my sheet isn't good, I was unsure of Casual was actually my cup of tea anyways
Perhaps I'll give the Free section a shot. No hard feelings, I hope this RP will be great none the less.
Might see you guys around in other RP's, who knows!
There are many problems that I have with this sheet. There are numerous grammatical errors and the coding of the sheet is subpar, making it visually unappealing to look at. Likewise there are several things that need to be fixed. I do not approve of it as it stands right now. Fix the coding and make the required changes before I look at it again. I can guarantee Partisan or Savato will agree with my requested changes, so they will likely postpone reviewing until the changes are made.
That's...pretty nitpicky-
Oh well, fair enough. Hope this RP turns out great none the less, it has a good plot and there's a lot of great roleplayers in this.
【Full Name】 Jenso Honoryuken 【Alias】 Jenso 【Affiliation】 Undecided 【Age】 22 【Sex】 Male 【Sexuality】 Heterosexual 【Birthplace】 Sunagakure 【Bloodline】 His father was a well -trained Taijutsu warrior who had trained him in the art of Flame Taijutsu.
Psych. report. Medical secrecy applies.
【Personality】 He's a kind, cheerful,confident person who doesn't back away from a fight. He tries to avoid fights if possible, prefering to use his words rather than his fists. This naivety often puts him in danger though, making him a ripe target for aggressive ninja to strike down without immediate resistance. Luckily his reflexes, both physically and socially, are like lightning. The moment a sitation goes grey, he’ll snap into a state of determination that can easily overshadow any sense of mercy or reasoning he had prior. Jenso will try to protect those he cares about no matter what, often putting himself at risk and sometimes in severe danger for the good over others. Jenso is kind to most, as long as their ideologues don’t conflict with his sense of justice. As understanding as he is, Jenso is adamant about his beliefs, and will often disregard courtesy to defend what he believes in. This resonates strongly when The Hamajō Confederation becomes an immediate topic, and he can become rather heated when speaking of their global conquest. The same sense of justice arises when people audibly refute the Red mages and their agenda, though he is smart enough to keep his opinions concealed... For the most part.
Jenso values training above much else, putting an intense amount of effort into sustaining his father’s Nin/Taijutsu style with all the heart he can muster. One might consider him a lovabale, but dense protagonist and honestly, that’s not too far from the truth. But if he wasn’t there to fight for what’s right, or at least, what’s kick ass, then who would be?
【History】 Jenso grew up in Sunagakure with very little wealth to his family’s name. Despite this, his father managed to support him after his mother died giving birth, taking on more missions despite his old age to pay for food, housing, and other expenses. Even though he worked day-in and day-out as a powerful shinobi, Hideno had more than enough spirit to spare when spending time with his son, whether it was training in the hot sun for hours at a time, or sharing a familiar meal by the fireplace.
At the very young age of 7, Jenso displayed unusual affinity with fire natured chakra, and was able to perfectly mold flames to his liking despite how hopeless he was with most other jutsu, including but not limited to shadow clones and the popular body replacement technique. Even his father, the creator of the flame Taijutsu style, was astounded by just how proficient he’d become with manipulating fire natured chakra at such a young age. It allowed him to focus on teaching Jenso the art of Taijutsu, which he’d needed far more guidence in mastering.
As he grew older, Jenso’s teenage years were often spent training, taking as many missions as he could manage, and making new friends among his fello shinobi. His father had finally brought his own shinobi career to a close, instead opening a dojo to teach his unique style of taijutsu to new pupils, wher e Jenso would often help as a supporting Sensei of sorts. Life was calm, until The Hamajō Confederation overtook the world. Everything proceeded as usual, until Jenso’s father began voicing more and more negative opinions of The Hamajō Confederation in the public eye. This didn’t last for long, as expected. One night, while Jenso was asleep, his father was taken away, and ultimately executed for his beliefs against The Hamajō Confederation.
To this Day, Jenso is not aware of his father’s fate, but he’s pretty sure he knows who’s responsible. He closed his father’s dojo, and decided to carry on flame taijutsu, developing it at his pride and joy, not only for himself, but for his father before him. 【Rank】 Chūnin 【Family ties】 One day, The Hamajō Confederation found where they lived and executed his father and mother. Jenso himself however, managed to escape while his father fought the forces of the The Hamajō Confederation. After seeing all of this happen, he was determined to do his best to protect the innocent and try to make the world a better place.
Name | Relationship to character | Age, living place, profession and additional info
【Dreams and fears】 He tries to fight for a better future, one where peace reigns. Along with his own sense of justice, he also likes to adventure around the world. He will do his best to follow this dream. His biggest fear would be to lose his friends, and will do anything to make sure they're safe. Combat reports. Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.
【Fighting style】 Jenso is primarily a taijutsu specialist, with exception mastery over custom fire-based Jutsu that coincide with his physical prowess. His style is sheer offense, which when mixed with his natural strength and insane durability, becomes a deadly force, even for experience shinobi to face against. 【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】 Bloodline limit name: Soul Release Description: The user’s chakra network can excell to astounding levels, directly affecting their strength and speed as they continue to fight. In a very short time, the user’s physical strength can more than quintuple, and continues to increase with each passing minute he remains in combat, up to a very vague limit. On average, spending only 3 minutes in combat will allow the user to reach their full potential, rivaling the strength of the fifth gate release. Unlike the eight gates however, Soul release does not place immense strain on the user’s body. Advanced users are capable of matching the capabilities of the sixth gate release, and it is assumed that soul release could potentially outright invalidate the eight gate release altogether. However, using this technique alongside the eight gates proves to be fatal, even upon unlocking only a single gate.
Strengths: Soul release has the potential to be the most powerful resource for a taijutsu master. In some cases, this Kekkei Genkai puts its user on a completely different level than even the most proficient users of the eight gates release, without any of the strikeback. Due to the excessive chakra flow, Soul Release also makes the user relatively immune to pain, and gives them hightened reflexes. Additionally, their chakra flow makes it extremely difficult for Genjutsu to affect them at all, only making them susceptible to high ranking genjutsu techniques. Weaknesses: Although Soul release does not put an inherent strain on the body or chakra network therein, it cannot be sustained if the user’s chakra reserves run low, and will actually weaken them if they expend too much chakra during a fight. This Kekkei Genkei also makes using the eight gates, one of the most powerful techniques avaiable to taijutsu specialists, impossible, as it will put too much strain on their insanely fast chakra flow. Additionally, due to the lack of pain, the user cannot possibly know if he’d sustained internal injury of any kind. In many cases, Soul release users have unknowingly sent themselves to an early grave by sustaining significant interanl injury and not recieving proper treatment from a medical ninja. Their bodies can practically stop working without warning if they go too far when fighting. 【Ninja techniques】 Fire Release: Flame bullet Ninja Art: Smokescreen Technique Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique ---
Name: Flame Taijutsu: Flame Dragon Punch Rank: A Range: Short Description: An absolutely devestating technique that invests a large amount of chakra to create concentrated flames around the user’s fist. These flames both increase the sheer power, speed, and of course, heat of the punch. This attack is so powerful, it can easily pierce most defenses, with minimal drawback, aside from its chakra consumption. [Tex agreed this could potentially pierce Silver Release: Solid Mail without much difficulty]
Name: Flame Taijutsu: Meteor Rank: B Range: Long Description: Channels fire around his entire body momentarily before launching himself in any given direction. While midair, his body spins rapidly, gaining momentum until he is within range of a target, at which point he can unfurl into a kick, punch, or decide to outright collide with his target. The technique can be canceled mid-air.
Name: Inferno Saw Rank: B Range: Long Description: Forms a spinning blade of intense heat between the palms of his hands, which can then be throw like a large shuriken. This heated spinning blade cuts through most weaponry like butter, and can be controlled momentarily after it’s thrown, dissappearing after a few seconds.
Name: Flame Whip Rank: C Range: Medium Description: Creates a long whip out of condensed chakra that can wrap around objects, and burn them simoltaniously. This whip’s bond is very strong, but its range is limited to about 40 feet.
Name: Flame Anvil Rank: C Range: Short Description: Creates a hammer made of condensed chakra, covered in flames. This hammer can be conjured almost instantly, and has considerable crushing power behind each of its swings.
Name: Flame Taijutsu: Dragon’s Claws Rank: C Range: Short Description: The basis of all Flame Taijutsu. The user’s fists launch flames with every punch, expending chakra and increasing in heat/velocity with the user’s physical strength and speed.
Name: Flame Taijutsu: Dragon’s Roar Rank: C Range: Short Description: The user can release a concussive shockwaves of flame from his fists with each punch. When slamming their fists together, this can create a larger shockwave around their body, strong enough to knock away projectiles, and burn enemies nearby. Requires a considerable amount of chakra to activate constantly.
Name: Flame Taijutsu: Dragon’s Lash Rank: C Range: Medium Description:. Using their feet, a user can create low-hanging waves of fire with their kicks that hug the ground and grow as they travel forwards. These vary in heigh and width depending on the angle and power of each kick.
【Weaponry, tools and objects.】 Weapon, tool or object name: His fists, obviously. Weapon, tool or object type: The type that are attached to his wrists.
Description: That thing you do when you curl your fingers together and tighten your knuckles. A fist. Two fists, actually.
