Jozarin

Red Skies

@Defacto
How about prolonged exposure (like, multiple weeks non-stop) can leave permanent effects.

[High Casual]Will There Be Blood?

Somewhat interested.

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You need at least to have 18 years to fly planes (in any flight school) and your character spent 7 years (although you can learn while off duty) as marine

@Defacto

He only has a recreational license, but I'll just remove that element anyway.

... Also the time is 1997... I can't say that we have high tech videogames about flying.

@Defacto

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Micro..

You still need to explain me the red eyes.

@Defacto

I'll remove this. It just didn't make sense to me that the virus would rewrite the DNA of the divergents in a different way than the aces, I thought it was just luck that most of the traits were beneficial. I was trying to add a non-beneficial trait that was created by the virus.

Also, can you provide why you character is on the army? If he is rich... why? I'm just trying to make sense to the stuff writen.

@Defacto

His family had this "you still need to do something" thing going on, where, even though he didn't need to, he should take a proper job for mental health reasons. (The universal right to work is about having a sense of productivity, not being paid.)

I don't want to sound like an "evil GM" but can you rework your CS taking note that there's no reason to your power work better in divergents or worst in aces (plus all the questions raised)?

@Defacto

I did.

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@Defacto

Sorry, Knowing how to fly a plane and helicopter is the result of being rich, playing some videogame, and thinking "I should do this IRL", not being a marine.

Also, I tried to fix my abilities.

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@Mr Allen J

His eyes are (RG = 215, 0)

Epic RP Experiment (Middle Fantasy Germanic)

roleplayerguild.com/topics/85925-the-h..

The Heroes of Denmark Epic Poetry RP Experiment

Lathing was the son of Loki; lucky, then was he.

Favoured by fortune, but not the gods; for hated was Loki.

He adventured by himself; and angry thunder struck.

He entered a village; each there gladdened to see him leave.

But one; behind her house they met.

Hence she had a son; Handsome was he, called Wulf

Young, Wild and Free

@Adamina@Savi@Phaesaris@User

Young, Wild and Free

Name Missy Baum
Age 17
Appearance i.imgur.com/LF5TOtj.png
Personality: She can be a bit of a diva, always wanting things to go her way. She likes to be the centre of attention wherever she goes.
Favorite color: Pink
Reason for running away: She felt Shelly needed her.
Room i.imgur.com/bhS4Bfm.jpg

Name: Shelly Chambers
Age: 16
Appearance: i.imgur.com/mxQFcez.png
Personality: She is really quite shy and tender, despite trying to give off a "tough-girl" appearance to everyone.
Favorite Color: Red
Reason for running away: Her family turned her out, and the Baums couldn't shoulder the judgement from the rest of the town over harbouring a homosexual.
Room: She shares with Missy

The Heroes of Denmark Epic Poetry RP Experiment

This will be a collaborative epic/eddic poem. Every post must be in fornyrðislag, with the tropes used in these poems - mentions of great ancestors, redundant lines, catalogues, lists, and tales of heroes. We will worldbuild at the same time as we RP, and our first post will be the story of the first in a character's lineage, just after one of the norse gods.

Posts must be five to eight full lines long (lines are to be divided in half by semicolons), except in conversation between two characters, when single (but longer) lines are required.