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The Dust

I would like to start making a character already, but... I would really like to get more details on those Factions before I do it. Can't very well say that my character is a wanderer and hates the Factions if it turns out that there is actually one or two factions that have the same ideals as her xD Although... Her being Immortal and all... Not sure they're gonna be all that welcoming xP

Equestria Divided: In Nominé - MLP RP

IST - Indian Standard Time, also translates into Indian Stretchable Time. If they say "9 O'clock," they'll probably arrive at 9:10 at the earliest. There's not a lot called Planning, and everything is sort of jumbled together. People are insanely friendly, but holy hell is it dirty. There are also a million and one dogs on the streets, and while most look like they get enough to eat and are healthy, there are those who look absolutely miserable. Also, no, I haven't posted lately. Being in India has forced my thoughts away to other stuff, and before that was Christmas, mom's birthday, new year's, etc...

Equestria Divided: In Nominé - MLP RP

Been alright. In India atm, and looking forward to getting home (2 more weeks). Lost my voice the other day, finally have it back (freaking Ariel wasn't satisfied with only losing her own. Noooo, had to give mine away too), and such... Things are OK. Also, I was talking about PoorYorick's depicting of an Alicorn Mockery: 3-ish heads, lizard-y tail, lots of horns and lots of wings; all of which are useless. I'm alright with those you described as being Alicorn Mockeries, so don't think I want you to change it. Just pointing out how they were originally intended to look like according to the creator of EQD.

Worlds Collide - A Futuristic Fantasy RP

You have full right to keep the power, I'm just warning you that, if it ever comes to combat, you will probably be knocked away :P

Equestria Divided: In Nominé - MLP RP

An Alicorn Mockery looks quite a bit more... monstrous according to Yorick, but s'okay. Just wanted to make sure that it was sewn together rather than anything else.

Equestria Divided: In Nominé - MLP RP

Looks okay, Bright, but just one concern: How did those two married ponies get those horns and wings? I assume they're simply stitched on?

Worlds Collide - A Futuristic Fantasy RP

Editing done. ^_^ Additional powers added. Comments please so I may refine if I need to. Thanks for the patience, guys. ^_^

@Kyrisse

Fair warning: She's a Fae, so getting close to the enemy (trailing the tail across the ground thingie) is a bad idea. She's likely to get knocked out immediately. Not saying you can't do it, but I advice against it. Also, her blue flames still can't unravel illusions. Please remove it.

Worlds Collide - A Futuristic Fantasy RP

medical team under the Twin Souls Program that provides medical care to Shifters injured in battle.

They have Mythics capable of bringing you back from the brink of death (almost). Doctors and nurses aren't necessary.

Out of necessity, it didn't take long for the Program to be perfected. In five years time, there were so many volunteers and so many compatible humans that Earth had its own army of magic wielding beings. More and more young adults were tested and infused with Mythic Essence.

Please change the wording of this a bit. It makes it sound like it took five years for the project to be completed (when it only took 6 months). Just a minor nitpick. Aside from these two, there is only one thing that "grinds my gears" so to speak, and that is how her flames can someone rid people of illusory attacks. One thing that I need to make clear here is that illusions are (most often) targeted directly at the victim's mind, meaning that the Caster is affecting the brain itself, and all of the senses (most often it's only vision). Flames and fire are physical, and as such can't reach the mind, and because of that can't dispell illusions. As for the fire cyclones... Sorry, but even for a Fae that's overdoing it. A ~1,2 kilometre tall cyclone? Moving over 400 kilometres an hour? While I like the idea of a rotating thing of fire and death, this is just too much. Make it ~200, or so, metres tall, and move at max 100 kilometres an hour. It'll be quick enough to catch Demons, but in return it would also be a bit slow when it comes to changing direction. A tornado doesn't just change from going forward to suddenly turning 90 degrees and continuing without pause. Also, may I suggest that you don't just stick with fire tornados? Fire is her element and she can do a lot more with it. Like a Napalm, for example. You don't have to write down a thousand examples of how she can use her fire, but just one or two more to make it seem like she has a bit of diversity. That... should be all :)

The Dust: [Post.Apoc//Meta-Human//Non-linear//ShapeShifting][OOC is up]

uhm, hmm...I...I--dunno yet either... ^^

Leviathan

UH. UH. I DUNNO YET. YOU?

Firecracker_

Dibs on Light!

Worlds Collide - A Futuristic Fantasy RP

Alrighty. Thanks for the comments. Will edit soon. :)

I made a bummer. I read something as km/h when it was mph. Keep the diving speed as 160-180 km/h, but still reduce the rest by the requested amount.