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4 yrs ago
Death Note.
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4 yrs ago
After a painfully long hiatus...I'm finally back, and hoping to write + meet people again.
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6 yrs ago
Time to go on semi-hiatus. I'll reply once in a while when I can find the motivation, but until then, I need a break.
7 yrs ago
When you finally stand up for yourself but you stutter. Feels bad man.
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8 yrs ago
writing helps with my depression but when I'm depressed I don't have the motivation to write.
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Thank you Siaya Dragalorn for creating the banner/header!


Hey, welcome to my profile. I've been writing since I was a kid, and it's something I'm very passionate about. I'm not sure what else to put here, but don't hesitate to reach out if you think we'd hit it off. BTW, I'm an adult, so I would prefer to write with people closer to my age.


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Limits: Romance-wise, nothing explicit. But I'm pretty lenient for everything else (within reason).
Reply status as of 1/13/24: Getting back to a decent pace.

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Gandalf's timing could not have been better. As the trolls turned to stone, Kili sat himself up. Help had finally arrived, all thanks to Bilbo and his clever thinking. Perhaps he had been right to send their burglar after all. The youngest Durin smiled sheepishly as Saeril freed him from the sack, and he offered his brother a hand up before retrieving his weapon. "Well, considering everything...I believe this worked out quite well."

Dwalin looked to Kili, a light scowl of disgust upon his face. "You weren't the one roasting over the fire, lad." The tattooed dwarf found his axe and knives, then went to help Bilbo free the ponies.
Despite the fact that everyone had made it unharmed, Thorin was not pleased, and he wanted answers as to what happened. Once he sheathed his sword, he looked to Gandalf. "Where did you go, if I may ask?"
The threat was one they would follow through with, and Thorin knew that. All members of the company came to a halt, and Kili looked to his uncle in desperation. What were they to do?
Finally, Thorin planted his sword into the ground. Kili tossed his own weapon aside, frustrated with himself for having failed to guard the ponies in the first place.

After their surrender, the trolls got to work sorting out the hostages. Dwalin, Bofur, Dori, Ori, and Nori were tied to a spit over the fire. Thorin, Kili, Fili and the others were thrown into sacks with the drawstrings tied so tightly that they had no real way to escape. Once they'd been tossed into a pile, the trolls argued how to cook the dwarves on the spit. This gave Bilbo an idea.

As best he could while in a sack, he stood. "Wait! You are making a terrible mistake."
"You can't reason with them!" Dori called. "They're half-wits!"
Bofur scoffed in response. "Half-wits? What does that make us?"
Bilbo grimaced lightly, then continued with his self made plan. “Uh, I meant with the, uh, with, uh, with the seasoning.” To his relief, this caught the attention of their captors.

“What about the seasoning?” Bert demanded, and Bilbo tried to shrug. This was not easily done while in a sack.
“Well have you smelt them? You’re going to need something stronger than sage before you
plate this lot up.” This earned him plenty of yells from the dwarves, and Gloin called him a traitor for such a remark.
Tom's beady eyes narrowed. “What do you know about cooking dwarf?”
Bert moved closer, obviously interested. “Shut up, and let the, uh, flurgaburburrahobbit talk.”
Unfortunately, Bilbo hadn't thought this far ahead. “Uh, th-­­the secret to cooking dwarf is, um­­..”
Bert leaned in to hear better. “Yes? Come on."
Bilbo was inwardly panicking; he needed to stall for time. “It’s, uh­­...”
Bert was impatient, however. “Tell us the secret.”
Bilbo closed his eyes and nodded. “Y-­­yes, I’m telling you, the secret is . . . to skin them first!”
Once more, this got angry, shocked responses from different dwarves. Thorin was the only one out of them to be quiet; he seemed to understand what their burglar was up to.

The trolls started to argue again, however. Tom did not trust Bilbo's advice in this instance; what hobbit knew how to properly cook a dwarf? It was here that Bilbo caught a glimpse of Gandalf, and he felt his heart speed up. They had a chance.
Finally, William had enough. "Nothing wrong with a bit of raw dwarf! Nice and crunchy," he grabbed Bombur up as if he weighed nothing at all, and Bombur protested and squirmed about the best he could, moments away from being eaten.

Bilbo was quick to speak up. “Not-­­not that one, he...­­he’s infected!”
Tom looked to him critically. “You what?”
Bilbo nodded, then glanced towards the others as he tried again to think clearly. “Yeah, He’s got worms in his … tubes.” This was not good enough to save the others, so he added on to his lie. "In-­­in fact they all have, they’re i-infested with parasites. It’s a terrible business; I wouldn’t risk it, I really wouldn’t.”

Kili's eyes widened a bit, and he could scarcely believe his ears. This was outlandish. "We don't have parasites! YOU have parasites!" Comebacks were not his specialty. The rest of the dwarves claimed that Bilbo was a fool. Bilbo rolled his
eyes as they messed up his plan.
Finally, Thorin kicked the others, and all was quiet. Kili now understood as well. “Mine are the biggest parasites!" He sounded quite childish, his fear getting the better of him. Even if they did make it out alive, he still had to face Thorin. "I’ve got huge parasites!”
((Sure!))

After so much persuasion, Bilbo had no choice. The hobbit left to put his burglar skills to use, and Kili edged forward closer through the shrubbery. If Bilbo needed help, he wanted to be ready, but he also hoped that he might manage to pull through for them. Gandalf had vouched for him, hadn't he? This was his time to shine.

"Where did Delva go?" Kili knew their godmother's rightful name, but he couldn't help but use the name he and Fili had given her so many years ago. "Thorin will not be pleased with us -- he's finally entrusted us with a task and now Myrtle and Mintie may be turned into stew!" Despite his worries, he made sure to keep his voice down. No use alerting the trolls of their presence.

From where they were, he could overhear the trio arguing amongst themselves. This was a good sign; they were so busy bickering that Bilbo may go completely unnoticed. Unfortunately, this was not the case. There was a bit of commotion and a few shouts of surprise, and then Bilbo had been caught.

One of the trolls had sneezed all over Bilbo, and in his grasp he had him, the other two crowding around to catch a glimpse of such an odd creature. Again, they argued as to what Bilbo was. Finally, the one called William had enough. "Hold his toes over the fire! Make him squeal!"

Kili would hear no more of this. Without even briefing Fili, he suddenly charged out of the woods, his sword drawn. As quickly as he could, he swung the sword, and he sliced William's leg so deeply that the troll howled and fell to the ground.

"Drop him!" Kili yelled, his heart racing faster than it had the entire trip. In his hand, he kept his sword at the ready, and he wanted nothing more than to lunge for the one holding Bilbo. "I said drop him."

What happened next, Kili was not prepared for. Tom threw Bilbo right towards him, and Kili hastily dropped his sword so that he might break Bilbo's fall rather than skewer him. Both crashed to the ground, and then the rest of the company suddenly emerged from the shrubbery with varying shouts and battle cries, weapons drawn and ready to fight.
“Well, uh...look, s-­­something big uprooted these trees.” Bilbo stammered a bit, his nerves getting the best of him. Sure enough, there were some trees recently uprooted and laying on the ground.
Kili's eyes widened when he saw that their godmother was now suspicious too; there was really no use in hiding their blunder from her, but he'd wanted to all the same. "That was our thinking." The youngest told their hobbit, and then Saeril confirmed everyone's fears: something was out there; they were not alone.

"Something very big, and possibly quite dangerous." Bilbo agreed with her, and then he took notice of a light just ahead. Faint, but a light all the same. Fili must have noticed it too; before their burglar might protest, Kili ran forward to get a better look, then crouched behind a fallen tree to conceal himself.

"What is it?" Bilbo scarcely made it without spilling the stew, and he looked to Saeril in mild alarm as if silently asking her to stop these two before they were spotted. In his opinion, Fili and Kili were both reckless. At least in this instance.

Kili had his jaw set in a grim line. "Trolls," he announced, and Bilbo was clearly distressed by the news. Sure enough, there ahead lumbered a giant, hideous creature, toting along the ponies as if they weighed nothing more than a sack of potatoes.
"He’s got Myrtle and Minty! I think they’re going to eat them!" The very idea made Bilbo feel faint. "We have to do something!"

It was here Kili decided that this was the perfect job for their hobbit. "Yes; you should. Mountain trolls are slow and stupid, and you’re so small." This was completely unfair, of course, but in his mind it made perfect sense.

Bilbo seemed to pale on the spot. "No. No, no, I don't think that--" his feeble protests went unheard, for Kili went on with his encouragement. "They'll never see you," he insisted, then looked to Saeril and Fili for their input. Surely they had to agree with him; this was the perfect job for Bilbo.

Kili would have preferred a job of more importance, but if Thorin wanted the ponies to be watched, then that is what he would do. Or, that is what he should have been doing. The task was so mundane that he did not treat it with much seriousness. They were in the woods, after all. The ponies could not get far, and they would be sure to make noise if a threat were to approach.

As a result of such carelessness, it wasn't long until he realized that two of the ponies were nowhere to be found. The youngest exchanged alarmed glances with Fili, and he signaled for him to keep quiet. He didn't want to risk telling Saeril. Carefully, he and Fili approached a fallen log, and both brothers stared out into the darkened forest. Somehow it seemed ten times as intimidating right now.
Before Kili could decide their next course of action, he overheard footsteps easily identifiable as Bilbo's.

"Here you are." Bilbo had managed to carry three, and he passed one to Saeril before he took notice of both brothers being more quiet than usual. "What's the matter?"
Kili didn't look away, his eyes remained on the trees ahead. "We were supposed to be watching the ponies." He glanced to Fili nervously, as he was also to confirm the fact. "We had sixteen. Daisy and Bungo are missing."
Bilbo blinked in surprise, bowls still in hand. "Well, that’s not good. That is not good at all. Shouldn’t we tell Thorin?"
Excellent! Thank you so much for that; it makes things so much easier. :) I definitely agree! I have a feeling I will be editing quite a bit. I am so intrigued by Drust's current condition -- in two posts you've developed your characters so much! <3 Also, I am also totally amused by how opposite the lives of Elayra and Ghent are.

As for the magic idea, I love that! It makes perfect sense to me, and it would add another interesting aspect to his entering the world of Wonderland. This will be a lot to take in. I can't help but fear for all involved. x'D
The apartment complex could have benefited from some improvements, but the rent was cheap, and a family of three didn't need all that much space. On a day like this one, Ghent couldn't help but miss their home in the country. Miles underneath the awning, a middle aged man who was never seen without a cigarette in his hand. "Hey Miles."
Through a puff of smoke, Miles acknowledged him with a nod as he often did, and Ghent allowed himself inside. The building was drafty, and Ghent headed up the long, creaky stairway in order to reach room number 08. Ghent could tell by the overwhelming aroma of perfume that Mrs. Saxon had graced their apartment with a visit.

Mrs. Saxon was in her early 50's or so, and she was never without an interesting tidbit of gossip to pass on. Ghent wouldn't have minded her, but she was critical of him as if he were her own son. "You wouldn't believe what she told me, Elise." Once again, she was busy telling tales, and before Ghent had a moment to listen in, Mrs. Saxon gave an unearthly shriek.
"You almost stepped on William!"

One may assume that William was a child, but this was far from the truth. William was an overweight Persian cat, one that shed without being pet and couldn't be left alone, hence her bringing him on her daily gossip run. Ghent could already feel his eyes watering; he could have sworn he was allergic to the beast. "Sorry," he mumbled under his breath, annoyed at both.
"Ghent! You're soaked!" Elise abandoned the coupons she'd been clipping in order to greet her son. There weren't many so kind nor hardworking, Ghent was certain of that. How fortunate he was to have been found by her and not Mrs. Saxon. The very idea was enough to make him shiver, which did not go unmissed by his mother. "Go on and get changed before you catch a cold; there's a surprise for you upstairs."

* * *

The hall was narrow and lined with photographs of various family members; some that he'd yet to meet. Ghent fixed one of the frames as he passed it; it seemed to fall crooked every morning, and it was part of his daily routine to adjust it. When Ghent came to his room, he was unprepared for what he was to find.
"Surprise!" There stood Elise's nephew, Henry. Henry must have been around fourteen (Ghent couldn't quite remember) and he jumped over the Legos he'd been busying himself with in order to greet the older of the two. "How goes it, cousin? Wow, look at you! All grown up and everything!"

If there was ever to be another live action Huckleberry Finn movie, Ghent was positive that Henry could have fit the role. "I saw you last year, Henry." A year hadn't changed either very much; his cousin looked just as he remembered him. Red mussed hair. Brown eyes. More freckles than he knew what to do with. Back home, they had lived only an hour apart. Now they lived half a day away. "So...how are you?"

"Oh, fine and dandy. I was just cleaning things up in here. You're not very organized, are you?" Henry clicked two Legos together, then nodded towards him. "You're drippin' water all over the carpet, cousin. You should probably change your clothes."
It was here that Ghent took notice that the spare cot had been set up, and he came to the assumption that 'cousin Henry' was here for a lengthily stay. "Yeah...right. I'll get right on that," he tried not to stare, but he was mildly alarmed. Henry was a decent kid -- he'd known him his entire life, and he was the only one who didn't believe Ghent ridiculous for his former belief in Wonderland. Despite the age gap, they'd always been fairly close, but Ghent could only take so much of his company. "Here, I got you something." The older of the two removed the comics from his jacket, and Henry lit up like a kid on Christmas morning.
"Whoa, really?! For me? Wow, thanks!" Henry admired the covers, then sat himself on the edge of his bed. Organizing the room could wait; he hadn't any comics of his own back home, and so this was quite the treat.

"Don't mention it. I'll be back later." Once he'd grabbed a t-shirt and jeans, Ghent left the room in hopes of obtaining some answers as to what was going on. After he'd changed into dry clothes, Ghent returned to the too-small kitchen. Mrs. Saxon and William had left by now, and for that he was grateful. Mrs. Preston was preparing dinner, and she smiled once more to see her son. "Were you surprised?"
Ghent rubbed the back of his neck wearily, he had planned an array of questions, but he hadn't the heart when he saw how pleased she was. Elise was very close to her sister, and she doted on her nephew. While nothing had been said to confirm it, Ghent had an inkling that Henry's family was going through a difficult time. "Yeah, I was," he cleared his throat, then used his shoulder to wipe at an eye. William was to blame for this.

"Ghent! Are you crying?" Elise was astonished; it was rare to see him cry, and the sight warmed her heart. "I know you've missed him; oh, you should have heard him talking about you! He really looks up to you -- do you think Frank will mind if you bring him to work? We're out of milk, sweetie." Though a beautiful soul, his mother had the tendency of covering several topics all at once. Understandably, it was a lot to take in.
"I'm not crying! I'm allergic to William," Ghent quickly denied such an accusation; he was so busy with coming to terms with Henry staying that he'd forgotten his former job. "No. Frank won't care." Now was not the time to break the news to her; she had enough on her mind. "Don't worry about the milk, alright? I'll run down to the gas station and pick up a gallon. The rain's stopped."

It took a while to talk Mrs. Preston into allowing him to leave, but after he promised to bring the family cellphone, Ghent left once more. The milk was only an excuse; he needed a chance to clear his head.

Miles was still outside, they exchanged 'hey's' for the second time that day, and once Ghent was out of the vicinity of cigarette smoke, he took a breath of the evening air. Even in the city, the aftermath of rain smelled good.

Life had been repetitive as of late. Aside from Henry, not much had changed, and Ghent did not believe his current circumstances would ever allow him the chance to amount to much. While the thought was somewhat depressing, he accepted it. Bettering the lives of his parents was his first priority; they had taken care of him, and he felt it his duty to return the favor.
Just as Bilbo had predicted, the afternoon greeted the company with a downpour. A deluge, as Dori called it. Unfortunately, Gandalf could do nothing to stop such a storm, and by the time it had finished, it left them drenched clean through. There were plenty of grumbled complaints here and there from various members, and Kili had opted to walk part of the way in hopes of drying his layers of clothing sooner.

"Bilbo was right after all," he wrung out the hem of his tunic, and glanced over at the others to see how they were managing. A few must have had the same idea as he did, for they were on foot as well. Up ahead, he could see Thorin speaking with Dwalin. Both were in deep discussion about the orcs they had heard the night earlier. So far, none had been spotted, but that did not mean they were not close by.

Kili couldn't help but feel a little on edge, and for the third time that day he checked that his quiver was full of arrows. "I wonder if we'll see any," he mumbled to his brother, as he did not want their godmother to overhear his saying so.
Oh no, I love detail. It's something that I need to include more often -- I have a feeling this will help me with my writing! The same goes for you of course. Feedback is always welcome. And thank you so much; that makes me really happy! Admittedly, I am a touch rusty so I was nervous.

I was thinking a bit, and I was wondering if it'd be alright if I hold out just a littleee bit longer on editing his character sheet -- I am feeling out his character more through the next few posts. I will keep him close to the same, of course, but I just want to make sure I won't contradict myself when I write for him and his history. When I wrote his intro post I was rethinking a few things I had put on his sheet. :'P
Kili was disappointed to have been denied the details, but he understood, and he realized that he may have been a bit too bold in his asking. The battle must have brought back painful memories for all involved. "I'm sorry," he apologized for any insensitivity he may have shown; it hurt him to see their Delva so very troubled. How could he sleep if he knew he may have upset her? The youngest closed his eyes for a time, but no rest would come to him. "Tomorrow should be nice." This was his attempt to change the subject, and hopefully lift his godmother's spirits somewhat.

"Hm. No. I believe it will rain." Bilbo passed by them, as he had to retrieve his coat from Myrtle's saddle. It was cooler than he was used to. "Smells like rain, at least..." The hobbit mumbled some to himself, then returned to his bedroll, disturbed by the stories told to him.

Leave it to Bilbo. Kili grimaced lightly, then thought again. "Well, at least that way we won't be hot." As much as he could, he tried to be optimistic about their circumstances.
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