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4 yrs ago
Death Note.
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4 yrs ago
After a painfully long hiatus...I'm finally back, and hoping to write + meet people again.
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6 yrs ago
Time to go on semi-hiatus. I'll reply once in a while when I can find the motivation, but until then, I need a break.
7 yrs ago
When you finally stand up for yourself but you stutter. Feels bad man.
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8 yrs ago
writing helps with my depression but when I'm depressed I don't have the motivation to write.
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Thank you Siaya Dragalorn for creating the banner/header!


Hey, welcome to my profile. I've been writing since I was a kid, and it's something I'm very passionate about. I'm not sure what else to put here, but don't hesitate to reach out if you think we'd hit it off. BTW, I'm an adult, so I would prefer to write with people closer to my age.


Seeking: Not...sure...
Limits: Romance-wise, nothing explicit. But I'm pretty lenient for everything else (within reason).
Reply status as of 1/13/24: Getting back to a decent pace.

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Ghent never got the chance to prepare himself. One push later, he found himself inside of the portal he'd been so critical of. His panicked shout echoed in his ears as the alley fell away from his line of vision, replacing him with a look into the strangest place he'd ever seen.
It was difficult for Ghent to believe that this was his second time going through the portal. Perhaps it should have been familiar, but it wasn't.
The feeling of drowning without water was surreal. Was he in a small void, or a large one? There was no way to measure the area around him, and there was no way to tell how far he was falling.
Was he falling? Ghent didn't know. For all he knew, he could have been rising, or not moving at all.
The hood of his hoodie drifted behind him while his sleeves hung loosely around his arms and wrists, defying gravity and logic all at once. Ghent didn't speak, he couldn't think. Awestruck, he watched the colors around him change from a calm blue to an unsettling shade of red, but that was all he saw. Elayra hadn't come through yet, neither had Miles. In that moment, Ghent felt completely and helplessly alone, and that's precisely when the first voice shattered the silence.
"Advice?" Ghent could barely speak. The mystery speaker sounded close. Too close. Swatting his still-floating hood over so he had better visual, Ghent looked behind him. No one was there.
The booming chortles of two females were next. Ghent swallowed hard and didn't respond. The voices were in his head.
The battle cry belonged to a male, and was louder than the rest. Unlike the others, the man almost sounded familiar. How could that be? Ghent wished he could see the man responsible, but a cruel laugh, followed by the menacing voice of a woman sounded louder than all the rest combined.
"WAIT!" Going into a full panic, Ghent blurted out the first thing that came to mind. He wanted to stop the female, but he never saw her. Instead of offering him a look at the ones responsible, the portal glowed with a blinding light. Hissing a breath, he used an arm to shield his eyes and felt the motion of falling fast shortly thereafter.
Ghent's frantic yell ended in an 'oof' when he hit the ground. The landing wasn't enough to knock the wind out of him, but he was breathless regardless. The experience through the portal left him in a state of complete and utter disbelief.
The world was quiet again. Ghent stared up at the tree and drew in a sharp gulp of air, mind echoing with scattered dialog of the disembodied voices. The portal itself was strange, but the voices, especially the last one, disturbed him greatly.
Strange. His surroundings weren't anything like he would have expected them to be. This was almost...nice.
A single leaf freed itself from the tree, drifting carelessly until it met the lush ground. Ghent watched it, exhaling as he soaked in the feeling of magic around him. The sensation brought him an odd sense comfort after what the portal put him through.
As his luck would have it, Ghent didn't get to appreciate the haven for long. Just as he'd started to calm down, he felt a second wave of panic when he saw the glint of a blade from the corner of his eye.
Drust. Ghent wasted no time in sitting up.
Being reunited with the knight wasn't exactly a relief. Ghent certainly didn't want to be alone in Wonderland, but he would have preferred the solitude after seeing the expression on the man's face.
While Drust demanded to know Elayra's whereabouts, Ghent looked back to the portal with a sinking heart. Elayra. Of course! The portal was such a spectacle, he'd nearly forgotten about the girl.
"I...I don't know." Ghent winced, expecting that his answer wouldn't go over too well. As Drust stepped forward, he inched back, raising both hands so the madman might allow him a moment to elaborate.
"She was at first! Coming, I mean." Ghent choked out the beginnings of an explanation, fearing that Drust would decide to put the sword to use if he didn't provide a satisfactory answer.
"Elayra was right behind me, but a shadowmire showed up, Miles pushed me -- everyone's always pushing me! -- so I fell into the portal, and..." Ghent's jaw went slack. What if, in some cruel twist of fate and irony, he was trapped in Wonderland while Elayra was confined to earth? The thought was so horrible, he jumped up to his feet and made a beeline for their only doorway to Elayra's location.
Without Elayra, Ghent knew his chances of surviving were slim to none. Elayra knew Drust her entire life, plus she could hold her own against him. Ghent couldn't. He barely understood the sickness plaguing the man.
Stupid Miles! This was exactly why Ghent didn't want to go through the portal first. Much of his decision to accompany the Wonderlander's stemmed from his the fact that he felt guilty. If Elayra wasn't in Wonderland, he didn't want to be, either. He'd agreed for her sake, and she wasn't even there!
If the situation wasn't so dire, it may have been laughable. Two minutes of being in Wonderland -- in probably the safest, calmest spot the world had to offer -- and Ghent wanted to go home. Immediately.
"It's still open!" In his hurry to reach the portal, Ghent almost tripped over his own two feet. He was desperate not to be trapped as Elayra had been trapped all those years ago. "Drust, come on! We have to go back!"
Posting tonight! :3 Sorry for the delay, unexpected road trip.
I really like both of those! xD I can imagine a logo and everything.

Thank you so much! I will definitely speak up next time I need help. If you notice me making any other mistakes or have suggestions to strengthen/improve my replies, don't hesitate to let me know. When it comes to writing, I am always eager to learn.

Sounds perfect! I read your reply before I went to bed and couldn't sleep because I was so stoked.
I can't believe they've made it to Wonderland!



Oh my gosh. I never even thought about that! Yeah, Mrs. Saxon is set for a good long while. I wonder how many versions of the story will be passed around. By the time Ghent's parents hear about what went on, it's going to be quite a tale indeed.

I'm on a mini road trip with my family and grandmother. Five hours in, I'm ready to go home .
Thankfully, I have my laptop, so I'll have you know that I wrote my reply in the back of a crowded minivan surrounded by utter chaos.

Before I forget! When I get back home, I want to show you what I've been working on. I put together a few aesthetics for the role play. I made one for Elayra, Ghent, and one with both. I'm planning one for Drust, too.
I also made a Pinterest board to pin aesthetic-y pictures that could work for the story. If you want, I can link you to that. I've even edited some of the pictures so they look more dark and fitting...heh...did I mention I love this role play?
The sound the monster made was otherworldly. Droplets of water and flecks of blood hit Miles as the shadowmire shook out its coat. Cringing at the combination of the screech and blood, Miles aimed to shoot again when the pistol was knocked out of his grasp for the second time.
Unable to keep his balance, the drunkard fell backwards from the force of the hit and stared up at the salivating monster in horror. He attempted to scoot himself back, hoping to put any distance possible between himself and the shadowmire while Elayra instructed him what to do.
"It's already stupid!" Miles' response was automatic. Using insults was second nature to him. "There's nothing I could say about this idiot that hasn't already been said!"
Neither Wonderlander got to see if Elayra's advice worked. The second the insult left Miles' lips, Elayra escaped, and he felt a change in the air that caused him more pain than his injured wrist. The portal died, and the shadowire seemed to die with it.
"No, no, no!" Scrambling to the wall, Miles slammed a fist against the bricks, breathing heavily as he unleashed his frustration. The portal was gone, and so was his chance at world jumping. He gripped his bleeding wrist and started cursing again, unintentionally quoting some of the profanities on the surrounding walls.
"This can't be happening." Crippled by defeat, Miles finally sank down to a crouched position, gripping handfuls of his graying hair by the roots. He sat there for a full minute, muttering weakly about missing his chance. The sight of him babbling to himself while rocking back and forth was something better suited for an asylum.
"I'm not crazy," Miles began to argue with the wall, turning defensive as he did with Ghent and Elayra. He nodded to the scrap of fabric left behind and continued to argue his sanity. "See? This is proof that they were here!"
Loosening his grip on his dripping hair, Miles reached for the evidence, freezing at a sound that made his blood run cold. The blast of sirens sounded in the distance, alerting him to the fact that the police had heard the gunshot, and they were close.
Swearing underneath his breath, Miles forced himself to stand. Visibly shaken, he fled the scene, leaving the fabric and pistol behind in his hurry.
"Nice to meet you, Sarah." Prompto rubbed the back of his neck, chuckling lightly as she spoke.
"Couldn't really blame you if you were trying to steal one," he joked, glancing towards the chocobo guilty of throwing the blonde. "They're so cute!"

Once Noctis and the others joined them, Prompto confirmed that he was with them. He felt a twinge of guilt as Ignis asked about the fuel needed for their vehicle. Ignis' annoyance was evident, but Prompto couldn't blame him. If the ranch wouldn't be able to help them, they would likely have to get the vehicle towed.

After the introductions were over with, the group of four followed Sarah. Prompto hung onto her every word, fascinated with the chocobos and their environment. The ranch for the golden birds seemed like the perfect haven, at least until Deadeye was mentioned. Even as Sarah explained their plight, Prompto's jaw dropped. Something had to be done.
"That's awful..." The blond eyed Noctis, silently pleading for the prince to offer their services. They could take the beast down, couldn't they? Lives depended upon it!

Before Noctis got a chance to answer, they arrived to the dining area of the ranch. Tables were set up here and there with several visitors eating their freshly cooked meals. The owner greeted them while Ignis took notes of what food was being served.

"Just here to buy some fuel, if you have any." Noctis wasn't oblivious to Prompto's hinting, but he chose not to address the Deadeye issue until their first problem was resolved. "And...to look at the chocobos," he amended, stepping aside so that Prompto might snap a few shots of the ranch itself.

"Fuel? Let me see what I can do." Wiz chuckled to himself when he saw Prompto photographing everything in sight. "If you can manage to get them to sit still, you might be able to snap a few good shots of the chicks. They're fast, though."

Wiz's friendly warning didn't deter Prompto, he was eager to try. "I'll come! If they're fast, I guess I'll just have to be faster." Using his free hand, he checked to make sure he had the correct lens on his camera and fell into step alongside of the girl, keeping a few paces between them. He smiled back to his friends, snapping a picture of them off guard. "You guys coming?"
Prompto could scarcely keep his cheeks from reddening in return. He found himself hoping he hadn't made things awkward by staring, but it wasn't every day that a pretty girl dropped in out of nowhere.
"Whoa, seriously? A chocobo did that?" Prompto was so fond of the creatures, he'd forgotten they were capable of more than being cute. When she offered him a grin, he grinned shyly in return. "You don't have to apologize," he insisted quickly. "I'm just glad you're okay."
From his spot on the ground, he glanced towards the tree behind them, thankful that the girl hadn't hit it instead. When she offered him a hand, he accepted and climbed to his feet.
"Thanks," he smiled and brought his hand back, rubbing his arm nervously. He wasn't half as skilled with speaking to people as Gladiolus was, at least not when it came to females. More often than not, he felt rather awkward and self-conscious. After a brief pause, he summoned the courage to speak up again.
"So...I guess you work here, right?" It felt like a silly question, but he was attempting to lead her into a bit of friendly conversation. The girl seemed nice enough, and he wanted to make sure she was unharmed after their collision.
"I'm Prompto," he introduced himself with a smile, holding his hand out to shake. "You're positive that you're okay?"
The stories didn't do the shadowmire justice, nothing could have. What startled Miles most of all was the size of the beast, and how quickly its sleek, ebony body moved.
"You're next, girl!" Miles made a move to push Elayra through the portal. One swift action was all it would have taken for the two Wonderlanders to join Ghent, but the shadowmire had other plans and lunged forward to attack.
Cursing loudly, Miles twisted out of the way enough for his coat to take the damage rather than his flesh. Three perfectly spaced tears in the fabric were evidence of the shadowmire making its mark.
Even though Miles was faster than most his age, speed alone was not enough for him to avoid the second attack. As he prepared to shoot, he felt a sharp, stinging pain go through his arm. The shadowmire's tail acted as a whip, and it succeeded in disarming him.
"No!" Ignoring the bloody gash across his wrist, Miles dived after the pistol in desperation. The weapon disappeared beneath a dirtied puddle of rain, just out of his reach.
Breathing raggedly, Miles had no choice but to crawl towards where he'd last seen the weapon. From his position, he couldn't see Elayra or the portal, and the pulsing of their exit felt weaker than it had.
"Where is it?!" Pawing through the water frantically, Miles finally felt the cool steel near the bottom. He removed the pistol and returned his finger to the trigger, fighting to keep his hands steady.
As he sat up, Miles narrowly avoided a second hit from the shadowmire's tail. Unlike before, the shadowmire wasn't aiming for him. Its tail flicked to the side as if taunting someone, an evil grin pulling at its lips.
While the monster focused on Elayra, Miles knew that was this was the distraction he needed. It was now or never.
Crouching on one knee, Miles aimed the barrel upwards. "I haven't waited this long to have everything taken away from me now, witch!"
Keeping both eyes open, he aimed for the shadowmire's head, and shot.
Prompto didn't believe in walking, not when he had something to look forward to. Unable to contain his excitement, he broke into a run, surpassing the others with ease. Grinning cockily, he looked over his shoulder. "See you slowpokes at the ranch!"
Unfortunately, Prompto wasn't paying attention to his surroundings. At all. He'd just started to look forward again when out of nowhere, he crashed heavily into someone. Or someone had crashed into him. Everything had happened so fast that was impossible to tell.
"Oof!"
Hitting the ground with a thud, Prompto managed to thwack his head against the ground. The impact wasn't severe, although it was enough for him to blackout very briefly. As he lay completely motionless, he felt someone touch either side of his face. What was going on? He couldn't tell, and he didn't recognize the voice.
"What...?"
Eyes fluttering open, Prompto came to. Once the world came into focus, he was rather surprised to see a pretty young girl looking down at him. Their eyes locked, and his mind went blank.
For a few seconds, Prompto merely stared at her in shock. He was unable to piece together what had happened, as he hadn't any visual before the collision.
"W-whoa...sorry about that! I wasn't looking," he started to stammer out an apology of sorts, fearing that she'd been hurt.
Using one arm, he propped himself up, his worry evident. "Are you okay?!"
Sounds like a plan! xD May have to use that.

*stares* Okay...wow. That looks so much better and cleaner!



I'm impressed, and I totally appreciate your thorough explanation! I felt something click in that rattled brain of mine, so maybe...just maybe I can get the hang of this. Paragraphs have, and continue to be one of my greatest enemies. I regret I didn't ask you for help earlier. xD
And, noted about the capitalization for the stutter! (This will be very helpful, especially later on. I have a feeling Ghent's going to be stammering while in Wonderland).

That's perfectly fine! Figured we needed to wrap things up on earth. Ghent's in timeout mode.
Also...that last paragraph/sentence! *shivers* I'm excited, yet afraid for all involved. I'll work on a reply tomorrow!
Sounds good!

Hah, that was an awesome intro! I loved it. I will work on a reply just as soon as I get home. :)
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