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9 yrs ago
Happy 10th Anniversary, RolePlayer Guild! Its been one hell of a ride (Definitely didn't misspell that as "help" the first time, and have to re-post it)
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9 yrs ago
Thank the lord for the Roleplay Guild. Otherwise I might actually have to pay attention in lectures
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9 yrs ago
"Remember the times you could have pressed quit - but you hit continue" Hope everyone's having an alright day. If not, I hope things pick up for you
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10 yrs ago
You shot Church, you team killing fucktard!
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10 yrs ago
My sister saw me watching the Co-Optional Podcast and thought I was skyping my friends. How ridiculous! I don't have friends.
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Dead Cruiser said
So here's what I propose: X town in X prefecture, Japan. Having our setting specifispecifically in Japan doesn't limit us to purely Japanese myths, nor purely Eastern myths. Indeed, the juxtaposition of Western and Eastern legends could add a certain flavor to the story.Thoughts?


My knowledge of Japan and Japanese culture is fairly limited, but if elements of Western mythology can be implicated then I'm sure I'll be able to make do.
Ah, I see. My personal suggestion would be a town somewhere within Europe or America (Perhaps never specifically stated, to add an element of mystery) that appears fairly normal to the outside world, yet secretly has strong ties with the supernatural world. Players could take the role of folks who have just recently moved to the town, and gradually over time they become aware of all the strange goings on.

Just an idea, though.
Dead Cruiser said
Well, many things begin as "just ideas." What I am most currently in need of is the opinion and input of my potential player base.


What sort of input are you after specifically?
This looks right up my alley. Interested.
Next Chessa post is up. Lemmie know what y'all think.


” There are no heroes...in life, the monsters win” -George R.R Martin.


They moved quietly through the park, huddled closely together, the unbridled chaos of the city barely out of reach. A downpour of rain had turned the ground to brown mush, and the cold weather had frozen it solid, making the terrain immensely uncomfortable to cross. A thick line of tress ran around the park, their branches and leaves blocking out the moonlight, shrouding the area in an almost unbroken blanket of darkness.

Chessa pulled her jacket tightly around her body in an attempt to fend off the cold, as she shambled awkwardly across the park, fighting to keep up with her brother. Kyle soldiered onwards, the large rucksack slung uneasily across his narrow shoulders, Pump-action shotgun gripped tightly in both hands.

Her brother had set out with steely determination burning in his eyes, his body pumping with adrenaline, his one and only objective to get him and his sister as far from danger as he could. The unfaltering drive was still very much present, but his face was thick with lines of strain, bags hung beneath his eyes, and he was using every ounce of his strength to maintain the rapid pace he had grown accustomed to. He was tired.

“Kyle!” Chessa called out to him, fighting to speak through ragged breaths. She had never been particularly fit to begin with, and the seemingly never-ending walking was really taking it out of her. “Let’s just rest for a minute, yeah?! Neither of us can keep going like this for much longer!”

He stopped and turned to face her, that same frantic look he’d been wearing since the apartment still dancing across his eyes “We keep going.” He told her firmly, an unspoken authority hidden beneath his words.

“We have to get out of here before-“

“Before what, Kyle?” A voice, thick and deep, boomed from the shadows.

They appeared seemingly all at once, figures of varying shapes and sizes all sliding out of the shadows, slipping into existence. Pete himself appeared last, tall and imposing as ever, surrounded by a small mob of his men.

Within seconds the group had surrounded them both, an impenetrable net, ensnaring them in its vice-like grip.

“Leaving without saying goodbye?” Pete chuckled as he spoke, a dark and terrible laugh.

“Pete…how did you-“

“Find you? We just followed the gunshots.”

Chessa’s eyes darted from man to man, taking in the sheer amount of thugs that surrounded them. When her brain could devise no escape plan, she turned to address the mob boss.

“We did what you asked!” She pleaded with him “You’ve got no reason to hold us here!”

Pete raised one dark eyebrow at her, an amused expression crossing his likeness. “You mean he didn’t tell you? How very un-brotherly of him.”

“Tell me what…?” She turned to face Kyle. He was gazing meekly at the ground, defeated.

“I want my money, Kyle.” Pete said authoritatively, fixing him with a dark stare.

Kyle rested the gun against his leg, reaching into the rucksack and pulling out a large wad of cash, all wound up in a rubber bands, before tossing it at Pete’s feet. The money landed on the floor with a gentle thump.

The large man bent down and scooped it up with his thick hands, grinning broadly to himself.

“That’s everything.” Kyle assured him.

“I’m sure it is, but you see…I promised my boys some fun.”

The figures begun to edge forwards, and Chessa realised what they were holding; Pipes, tire irons, machetes, knives, and a whole manner of improvised weaponry.

Whirring to life again, Kyle fired a round into the nearest thug, blasting him backwards and turning his chest into red mush, the spray of the shotgun sending a few others sprawling to the ground.

Before he had a chance to fire again, a steel hammer slammed into Kyle’s leg, a sickening crunch echoing throughout the park as his knee cap was shattered. He screamed and tumbled to floor, dropping the shotgun as he clutched at his bloody leg.

Chessa wailed and went rushing to his aid, but someone tripped her, and she ended up face down in the mud, her mouth full of blood and earth.

Please! Don’t” She looked up just in time to see hatchet smash into her brother’s face, biting through skin and bone, and knocking him into the dirt. He shakily raised his head, unrecognisable amidst all the gushing blood and ripped flesh, his breathing broken and raspy, but the hatchet swung again, and this time he didn’t get back up.

Chessa made a frantic dive for the shotgun, but Pete’s boot clad foot cam slamming down on her hand, crushing her fingers beneath its heel. She sobbed and spat, lying helplessly on the floor, gazing up at the large man as he towered over her, surrounded by his ruthless posy.

There was a flash of steel, and then suddenly he held a machete in one hand, glistening grimly in the darkness.

“It’s all fun and games, until someone loses an eye.” He lectured, that sickly broad grin plastered across his face.

“Or an arm.”

He brought the machete down in a vicious ark, still pinning her down with his foot, and sliced straight through her forearm, severing it at the elbow, blood pooling out across the floor as she shrieked and wailed, pain overloading her system, burning throughout every fibre of her being until it was all that she knew.

Over her own screams, she could hear the men laughing.

They left her there, screeching and crying and writhing in the dirt, slowly bleeding out, with her severed arm lying next to her.

”I’LL KILL YOU, YOU PIECE OF SHIT! I’LL RIP OUT YOUR FUCKING HEART AND EAT IT!” before too long she no longer had then energy to keep screaming, so she curled into a ball and wept, as the world went dark.
Lo Pellegrino said
@KingFisher: Good post. Looks like Chessa has first blood, huh? Can't wait to see how she reacts as things get worse.


Cheers! I'm still very much an ameture when it comes to writing, but I'll try and make Chessa's character development as interesting as possible. I really like your narrative pieces BTW, you paint a very vivid picture.
Ink Blood said
Not to be nitpicky, but King, in your first post you said Kyle had a pump-action shotgun. In your second post, you said he had a hunting rifle.


Woops. Not quite sure where I got hunting rifle from. Fixed it. Thanks for pointing that out :)


“Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster... for when you gaze long into the abyss. The abyss gazes also into you.”- ― Friedrich Nietzsche

The city shook. Streets were crammed with people and cars, all bunched together in a claustrophobic mess. The frantic voices of the confused all tangled together, becoming one worried shrike that drifted throughout every walkway and back alley.

Chessa and Kyle scurried along a pavement, trying their best to keep out of the way of the disorderly mob of people that jumbled on by. No passer-by had drawn any attention to the fact that Kyle was holding a shotgun, which did little to calm Chessa’s nerves.

Up ahead a bedraggled looking man, garbed scruffily, was trying desperately to get the attention of anyone who was willing to listen, but so far his attempts were proving to be unfruitful. Kyle tried his best to pass unnoticed, but the man caught his eye, and came bounding over to the both of them.

“Please, you gotta help me, man!” He shrieked “My girl’s giving birth and I can’t get through to the hospital.” He waved a blackberry hysterically in Kyle’s face, the phone displaying the same message that they’d become accustomed to seeing these past few minutes.

“I’m sorry, but we can’t help you.” Kyle bowed his head and tried to move on by, but the man frantically grabbed at his collar, pulling him tightly towards him.

“I’m beggin’ you, man!” There was a shaky quality to his voice now, as though he were about to cry.

“There’s really nothing we can do for you.” Kyle said firmly. Chessa could see his muscles tensing.

“You can’t just leave me like this, man!” He cried, getting right up in Kyle’s face.

“I’m sorry, but this really isn’t our problem.” Kyle barged passed him, gesturing for Chessa to follow him.

However, the man persisted, rushing after them both, and tightly grabbing hold of Kyle’s shoulder.

“Please, man-“

“Get the fuck off of me!” barked Kyle, giving the man a sharp shove, sending him sprawling backwards onto the pavement.

A few passers-by turned to look at them, but otherwise they remained generally unnoticed by the confused mob.

The man scrambled back onto his feet, staring daggers at the both of them. “What the fuck sort of shitty people are you?!” He demanded, pulling himself up to his full height.

“The kind who are gunna make your life really fucking brief if you don’t get out of our faces.” Chessa said, out of nowhere, calling on a confidence she didn’t know that she had inside her.

The man looked stunned, but then he took a sudden lunge at her, something hysterical and rabid flashing in his eyes.

kiLL

Before he could reach her, she snatched the shotgun out of Kyle’s hands, and blew a gapping whole straight through his chest, his body erupting in a fantastical spray of dark red. He fell to the floor in a crumpled heap, a bloody stain on the ground.

”SHE FUCKING SHOT HIM!” People were certainly taking noticed of them now, screaming and rushing about the place. The mob quickly dispersed, panic-stricken onlookers rushing off in this way and that, leaving Chessa and Kyle alone on the pavement.

She turned to face her brother, stunned by her own actions.

“I’m so sorry, I don’t know what-“He raised a hand to her lip, silencing her.

“Better him than us.” He stated, matter-of-factly.

Kyle took the gun back from her, and they continued on their journey.
Lo Pellegrino said
Absolutely!


Okie dokie! First post is up, let me know if anything needs changing.
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