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Am I missing something? Their posts look long enough to me. Also, I don't recall there ever being a 14 sentence minimum when we were on the Sporum.


It's not an absolute. But there is a tendency of our posts to degrade into:

Statistics and population

-couple lines of text-

Stone tools: 1/8
Cat domestication: 1/6
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I'd just like to ensure a reasonable standard of depth is all. We can't be Precipice of War, with twenty-paragraph long posts.

After all, the Casual label says "a few paragraphs, medium depth".
I would really prefer posts that are longer than the two that you guys just posted, at least initially. Fourteen sentences (or roughly two paragraphs) is what I would recommend at a minimum. You don't have to change the ones you have, but just for future reference. Longer posts are always preferable to more frequent ones.

In other news, I plan to post today.
Glad to see some new people. All your sign-up sheets look quite good. I will update the OP with the new map and races.

Also, we're not planning any time jumps, it's more of a smooth progression of advancement over time. For now the pace of time should be fairly fast, though, since if we did it a couple months at a time we'd be to medieval on page 1000 or so.
The Cindorayi, Population: 86, Year 5 IL (Inland), Age of the New Moon

Music Under The Moon

As the fire crackled in the shadow of the green canopy that covered the sky, one of the Cindorayi foraging parties made camp in preparation to explore more the following day. Sylvya, one of the females that chose to accompany the foraging party, took a carved piece of wood with twine strings drawn across it off of her back.

"What is that thing you have there, Sylvya?" one of the males asked curiously.

"It makes beautiful sounds," she replied. "Here, let me show you." She took her fingers and began to pluck the strings. The tension of the string caused it to vibrate melodically, and it appeared that having different lengths of string caused it to produce different sounds.

At this point, she had acquired the attention of everyone nearby, and she said, "Here, yesterday I put the Song of the Ancient Empire to the different sounds." She began strumming the small instrument and sang,

"Their fame will never die,
So grieve but do not cry,
Their fame will never die,
Their spirits are in the sky."

At this point the others who knew it broke in, and the chorus grew to pierce the silent black veil of the night.

"From the dark ages they rose,
They knew what no one now knows,
They conquered all their foes,
Their armies marched in rows."

A second chorus arrived, as the Cindorayi repeated the same melody again, this time without words, before proceeding to the final stanza.

"Their great empire is now done,
Of it many songs are sung,
This little song is but one,
It will be sung in every tongue."

"That was beautiful!" exclaimed Natalya, the other female present. "We should make more of them, and we can have many people play at once!" The others snapped their fingers in approval.

Sylvya beamed. "Thank you very much." "I would like to see if I can come up with another idea for a soundmaker as well, if I have time. I'm sure you could make deeper or higher sounds if you changed the way the strings were tied."

"That would be amazing." Natalya nodded in agreement.

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Back in the village, Ekatyrina was examining a crude map of the area as described by the foraging parties. She looked out the small opening of the wood-framed cave she used as her home, out at the several new trees that were growing in front of it. As the Zemlyarodians had suggested, she had placed a few types of fruit in the fertile soil close to the beach and already small trees had sprouted out of the ground with branches she was sure would bear the same types of fruit in a few years' time. However good the fruit was, she knew that no matter how many trees she planted it was unlikely that they could feed the entire village with them. She had asked the foraging parties to keep a lookout for a different type of plant that provided a lot of food and grew compactly, but there was no such luck yet.

Ekatyrina had come to the conclusion that with the addition of the new village of Zemlyarod to their growing civilization, she needed to have a few people to assist her in organizing things. Shylia, a skilled builder, was put in charge of construction and planning out new huts. Andrei, with some dissent from the other females, was put in charge of managing the foraging teams and food. Ekatyrina felt that the person in charge of something should have experience in it, regardless of gender. Finally, Viktorya, a deft thinker and the chief of the other village, was in charge of figuring out new tools to help in their day to day work. Already the simple coral tools they had been using were quickly breaking when used to try to cut down trees or break rocks, so Viktorya was trying to figure out what they could use instead. These three made up what would be considered the first Cindorayi Council.
Yeah, a three or four day gap won't hurt anything. We haven't even met each other yet.
I have it on good word that oZode is dropping Colombia.

Just as an FYI.


Victory for the Federative Republic.

I also hope to do a post covering the election this weekend, with my rekindled interest in RPing.
That, sir, is splendid.

Also, you don't need to wait for everyone to post before you post again. I'm probably going to compose another tomorrow.
Regarding astronomy, I should have been more specific. Can total eclipses happen? Because moons blocking the sun happens everywhere within our solar system, but a equally proportionate total eclipse is a strange coincidence that is only relatively recent in astronomical terms. Does that happen on Nova Mondial, though? Statistically, it's unlikely, but I think for story purposes, I think it would work well.

As for time measuring, I think as none of us had made contact yet, as long as we don't go too far advanced or populated than anyone else, I think the rate of events isn't that crucial for now. We should be able to adapt it when contact is established, though. I have been going by days, but after Darbu's storyline, I'm planning a significant jump.


I would be inclined to agree, considering the emphasis the Cindorayi place on the moon. I was thinking of naming naming a particularly violent or unfortunate era the "age of eclipse".

On the subject of time I concur with Aweirdgamer.
The problem I sometimes have with time is that, let's say the RP takes place over a few thousand years. That's hundreds of generations that your civ would go through, and therefor no realistic persistent characters. Not to mention that even simple interactions between civs would often last decades.


Time in this RP is like Fight Club.

I usually do my posts as discrete rather than sequential events, so they stand as little snapshots of what is going on at the given time. As well, I always said that interaction actually takes place during the time period of the first post, but that subsequent interaction posts are just what happened in the past. It's not a perfect solution but it resolves some of the inconsistencies.
My timekeeping is just by thirteen cycles of the full moon, and hence approximate. But I figure someone should have a timekeeping system just to keep reference for later history. I am going at two years per post, but feel no need to conform to that. I always found that letting things progress dynamically is the best way to run an RP.
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