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Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.@Dead Crusier I understand, that makes sense. How should I descibe it then? Should I say that they used destructive magic? Also, I would like to see an example of the style section.I think what your CS could benefit from most would be more detail, especially pertaining to the Plane you've invented. Red magic and executions in a coliseum give me a very sort of Klingon feel to the Plane, or at least that culture within the Plane. I'll leave it up to you what the specifics happen to be. I'll write a sample CS when I get off work tonight.