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1 yr ago
Current I'm about to enter my senior year. So close to that astro degreeeeee
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2 yrs ago
Act two of the original three is done. It is about 100 pages and 23k words. I'll be merging the first two acts into one and the book will end up being about twice as long as originally projected.
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2 yrs ago
Act 1 of 3 is done. It’s about 100 pages and 23k words and has a prelude, 8 chapters, and an interlude. I’m looking at 100k words as an approximate goal.
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2 yrs ago
Progress on draft 2: 8200 words and 32 pages.
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2 yrs ago
96000 words, 330 pages, 45 chapters, 8 viewpoints. First novel, done.
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Thrawn: "I have read about the nightswan. Have you?"

Nightswan: "You refer to the fact that it sings only as night is falling?"

Thrawn: "Yes. You do not expect your stand to succeed, do you?"

Nightswan: "I know that it won't succeed."

Thrawn: "That does not necessarily mean the end. I can give orders for you to be taken unharmed."

Nightswan: "They will be ignored. Half the troops here are Batonn Defense and Restos is determined to get rid of me."

Thrawn: "Then come with me now!"

Nightswan: "A man must do what he must, Admiral Thrawn. Even if his stand is against the fall of eternal night."

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@World TravelerShould I post my sheet in the CS section? Or are you going to organize that in a specific way?
@World Traveler How in-depth should we be with the pre-hogwarts and hogwarts part of our characters timeline? Because, my character is muggle born and as far as I’m aware nothing exciting happened at hogwarts in that time. Should I just be like, this is what my character’s life was like before magic, also he went to a magic school for an uneventful 7 years then get into the grittiness of being an auror in a post-Voldemort world?
I'm interested and, to follow the pattern, I'll be applying for D.A.D.A.
There it is, a juicy squelch sucking sound from the Denny's dumpster. The neighborhood was alerted to check the street. They felt that Chinese people had entered their cul-de-sac. The paparazzi wanted to steal photos implicating that Steve ate paste
Banned for misidentifying Ser Arthur Dayne!
Banned for pointing out patterns!
There it is, a juicy squelch sucking sound from the Denny's dumpster. The neighborhood was alerted to check the street. They felt that Chinese
Any past version of me is smarter than and future version relative to that version.
Bagpipes
Tokyo, Japan
Evening // January 24


She didn’t understand. This handler of Five’s simply couldn’t understand. She was human. A well built and really rather strong human, but a human nonetheless. She craved normal things, exercise, familial connection, entertainment, money. Five desired none of these things. From Five’s perspective, he was cursed to chase an ever-fleeting pleasure. He had the constant urge to feed. The pleasure diminished each time he fed. By now, as he ate he used the derived pleasure to draw foggy memories of the first time he fed.

He could hardly see it now, he vaguely remembered the pleasure he experienced as the irony blood rushed over his tongue and fed his pleasure centers. Now it was a slow creep by comparison as the pleasure coalesced. It was evanescent at best but it filled Five in an otherwise empty and hollow existence.

More than my siblings? Five couldn’t help but think that the others weren’t living up to their potential. He had grown to despise certain humans. He wasn’t sure if Father had built this hunger into him but it was the one thing he detested in an otherwise perfect man. If his father had made him to desire human flesh but had put him in a world where these humans, these cattle, had such a visceral reaction to him feeding, then that was cruel.

After some fifty metres or so, Five had began to properly use his feet again. The pain had dissipated to a dull and barely noticeable throb in the back of his head. Manageable. The had pushed through the growing crowd. The density increased as people realized that whatever the threat was, it was gone. Eyelids parted in the back of Five’s neck and a small eye took rapid glances around. Spotting carnage and tens of dead, if not more. More and more police arrived and seemed to be shifting into a rescue operation. Some military types were getting into their vehicles and were on their way out, letting the police do their thing.

“The monster that appeared suddenly plowed its way through the evening crowd with three hundred and seven confirmed dead.” The woman on the side of a building was saying to the crowd, describing the disaster they had all just experienced. As she spoke her image was moved to a corner and shrunk as a playback of the event was shown.

The clip began showing the large evening crowd. Hundreds, if not thousands, of people were eagerly making their way home or to work. All bumping into each other, the classic Japanese politeness had died when the cities became so ridiculously overcrowded that it was simply impractical. Then, a small gap formed somewhere in the center of the crowd and in seconds the gap was filled with this shadowy mass of unmatter. It rapidly grew into an amorphous blob with several legs holding it up and it began running through the crowd, large tendrils lashing out and tearing into the crowd as they tried to run away.

The clip went on for another few minutes and Five couldn't help but wonder what had happened. His mind had gone blank and his body experienced so much sudden pain in every receptor that he shut down for several minutes. Now seeing the result, Five couldn’t help but feel fear. Father would be furious. If it hadn’t been for the handler, he might have been captured. Five would need to control himself in the future. Perhaps the handler was right.

His view of the video was cut off as they passed into an alley and Five was sat against a wall. He wasn’t sure what their next move would be but he knew that he wasn’t going like his immediate future. He had lost contact with the handler and he had just killed hundreds, not counting the tens of people he’d eaten in the last few days. Humans were so irrational when it came to other members of their species.
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