NytefallFury is alright, he can still pull his Unbridled form out if required to ensure his own survival, though he probably wouldn't use it on the General, it would piss him off.
Like a Saiyan changing form to defeat a human, sort of embarrassing.
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Where would the fun be in that?
My next post will be a relatively short one, because I want to separate Fury from the General on the floor of the office building, and I can't really make a coherent post until I know what the general himself does.
Plus, it would probably be a good time for a showdown/dialogue interlude/staring contest.
My next post will be a relatively short one, because I want to separate Fury from the General on the floor of the office building, and I can't really make a coherent post until I know what the general himself does.
Plus, it would probably be a good time for a showdown/dialogue interlude/staring contest.
LeeRoy said
I don't see how they're constantly joking, I'm reading over them and I don't see anything joking about it. Light-hearted, but not comedy.
Maybe you should ask the people who have a problem with it exactly why then, I suppose.
LeeRoy said
What do you mean by: "Acceptable characteristics"? What's unacceptable about them now?
Whatever it is that people don't like about them. Probably their attitudes to life in general, constant joking is kind of annoying to read.
Well, maybe if the characters start exhibiting some more acceptable characteristics in time they'll get more attention, but I wouldn't expect too many people to be rushing to make compelling narrative with you both too soon.
The problem is, you've had only a few posts, that I can accept (sort of...) but that's all you really had to entice others to play with you, now you're stuck in web land and have to hope someone doesn't mind your characters and wants to join them.
The problem is, you've had only a few posts, that I can accept (sort of...) but that's all you really had to entice others to play with you, now you're stuck in web land and have to hope someone doesn't mind your characters and wants to join them.
Not taking being dropped into the Nexus seriously is by all accounts ridiculous. Hysterical joking I could understand, perhaps, but then everyone else would as well and everyone else seems to dislike the characters.
Not wanting to die is a motive everyone has, but if nothing else drives him he won't work in the Arena. People like that have no reason to seek out fights, and without seeking fights a character who everyone seems to want to avoid isn't going to be doing much.
Not wanting to die is a motive everyone has, but if nothing else drives him he won't work in the Arena. People like that have no reason to seek out fights, and without seeking fights a character who everyone seems to want to avoid isn't going to be doing much.
You seem to be assuming that there are two different types of character in this here universe.
- Your characters which don't take anything seriously (which aren't very accurate I might add, because I literally live my life this way, no one is outwardly funny all the time, though I don't dislike them, I just think their motives are going to be hard to define because in reality, only people with a certain edge would survive in this universe.)
-UBA SURIOUS BATTLE MONSTEZ WIT NO MOTIONS
That's just not true, try taking a gander at some of my characters and their back-stories, they all have incredibly poignant reasons for what they do and how they act. You'll find the same with most of the characters here, they don't have to be comic relief or serious war masters to make good characters, but if you expect people to want to interact with you then a balance is required.
Probably coherent, yeah, sure.
- Your characters which don't take anything seriously (which aren't very accurate I might add, because I literally live my life this way, no one is outwardly funny all the time, though I don't dislike them, I just think their motives are going to be hard to define because in reality, only people with a certain edge would survive in this universe.)
-UBA SURIOUS BATTLE MONSTEZ WIT NO MOTIONS
That's just not true, try taking a gander at some of my characters and their back-stories, they all have incredibly poignant reasons for what they do and how they act. You'll find the same with most of the characters here, they don't have to be comic relief or serious war masters to make good characters, but if you expect people to want to interact with you then a balance is required.
Probably coherent, yeah, sure.
Were those last two paragraphs there when I made my post? I swear I didn't see them.
You only described the damage it would do to the Clockwork Man, not anything else, I couldn't really just leave it floating around in my post.
Feel free to swing the idea by. As Skallagrim is so intent on having rivalry's form from conflict I was thinking last night that one of the Mystan's captured could be the little girl the Clockwork Man escorted earlier on, that would ensure he pursued your forces.
Feel free to swing the idea by. As Skallagrim is so intent on having rivalry's form from conflict I was thinking last night that one of the Mystan's captured could be the little girl the Clockwork Man escorted earlier on, that would ensure he pursued your forces.
That, and Khan's video.
Mostly the video.
Mostly the video.
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