Avatar of ML
  • Last Seen: 4 mos ago
  • Old Guild Username: Mercenary Lord
  • Joined: 12 yrs ago
  • Posts: 1361 (0.30 / day)
  • VMs: 2
  • Username history
    1. ML 6 yrs ago
    2. ██████████████ 12 yrs ago
  • Latest 10 profile visitors:

Status

Recent Statuses

5 yrs ago
hey can i be a guild mod
7 likes
6 yrs ago
hey can i be a guild mod
13 likes
6 yrs ago
new name, same piss poor time management
2 likes
6 yrs ago
if you have a "craving", write a story on your own, that way when you inevitably lose interest and quit you're only wasting your own time
4 likes
7 yrs ago
factory-engines roar like false lions, blood thunders in the dock-pipes

Most Recent Posts

Lower Deck 1

It was rapidly becoming clearer and clearer to Edward that this trip did not follow the same general laws and logic he was used to back on the United Isles. He realized that following a tightly sequenced series of events which left him sprawled on the floor, gasping, as what felt like a ton of seawater came pouring back down on him. He spluttered with indignation, but a lip on one of the doors caught him as the ship tilted again at the crest of the wave.

This time he clung to the support like his life depended on it: which of course it did. He didn't want to fall down the hallway dry and comfortable, much less soaked and exhausted.

When the water rushed past him from his back on the way down, he wanted nothing more than to hit something hard in frustration. He'd known what he was getting himself into, of course, but even that hadn't been as harsh as what they'd already been through. "And this isn't even supposed to be the worst of it," he muttered.

Still, as they slid down the back end of the monster wave, Ed was endlessly relieved to realize that the world was finally coming back to its senses. The floor reappeared beneath his feet, and after a few long moments of frozen contemplation, Edward stood.

Captain Conway stood as well, with that Constance woman clutching at his coat like some kind of street hawker. He couldn't help but smirk good-naturedly at the woman's deflated ego. "Doesn't seem like there's any room for ego on this ship," he said, to no one in particular.

"Cap'n Conway," the PA system crackled again. "We're clear of the Ring of Thunder. Barrin' that hellish storm, it's actually quite a nice day out. Also, Supply Officer Gante wants to have a word with you at your earliest convenience."

Conway cursed as he switched directions. "We better not 'ave lost the food," he muttered, heading toward the rear of the ship. "Can't be eatin' steel, yeah?" Then he had unsealed one of the doors and left. Edward nearly followed him before he was struck with a sudden furious, raging delight.

They were outside the storms! This was historic! He lurched into action, pulling up next to the man and woman who had saved his life only moments ago. His entire right side stung, but the adrenaline and excitement dulled the pain considerably. "Come on, Luna! And...sorry, I don't know your name. Come on, Constance!" He waved to the bewildered-looking woman, then to the pilot. "You probably already have seen this, but come on anyway! We made it!"

After all those exclamations, he was off, bolting for the nearest ladder up. He'd risked everything for this, it was time to collect.


Main Deck, Fore
Ed climbed out of the ship's underbelly with barely contained glee, his feet clanging on the metal steps as he poked his head up and over the lip of the deck. He gasped as soon as he looked up. "No way..." he croaked in awe.


He whipped his head behind him: sure enough, a raging wall of thunderclouds greeted his eyes with rippling fury. The clouds remained still, however, and Edward could tell that they were moving away from them. "This is..."

It was the most beautiful thing he'd seen. Back on the Isles, the Ring of Thunder prevented early morning and late night light from reaching the landmasses directly: light always sort of bounced up and over the storms, which resulted in the most gorgeous rising and setting of the sun behind the clouds. Crops grew well despite this lack of sun, as there were less clouds above the islands, and more sunlight went through. Or something. He was a reporter, not a god damn scientist.

All that was forgotten now as he slowly sank to the ground. "This is what I've been missing," he mumbled, content to sit there for an eternity.
I'm not on Chicago anymore, I'm at Northwestern U now

What a wild adventure, I share my story to people on the internets
Okay so I'm trying to post but I'm in Chicago and I have no idea where I am so I think I'm probably not gonna get to post tonight
I always figure how are people supposed to get more comfortable in their writing ability if everyone is constantly beating them down about their writing? All that matters is that everyone does their best and has a good time

You all have been great so far, and I'm glad to have gotten such a diverse cast of people too
Oh wow everyone except azkott has made a post, that is very nice and I didn't realize it
sigh look man i can only do so much with the time i got
you ever been on an incline that steep? now add to that a raging thunderstorm, the pound of the smaller waves, the rocking of the ship, and its pretty dramatic ill have you know

and with a slippery slippery floor inthe hall its even worse

im tryna be realistic here guys, at least a little bit
YEEE SKEPBAMA

oh hey i should probably mention that in the research I did, a hundred foot swell on a ship like the Garrloch is going to have a steep tilt, but it's probably not going to be much more than 50-55 degrees from the horizontal

that's a ballpark guesstimate, I really have no idea
lolnp, it was good regardless
I'm on it

Check the bottom of the Codex post
© 2007-2026
BBCode Cheatsheet