MrDidact

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

Very nice Golem is accepted.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

Ok we just need at a few of the other players to weigh in.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

LeeRoy you kinda gloss over the crisis :P

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

It's fine we all miss things. Thank you for your explanations they alleviate my concerns for the sheets as long as it's made clear Golem and Regeneration are high-cost. If Petrification isn't going to be used much anyway, I'd rather it be discarded. I just want Golem to be on the same level as say Zaphkiel when in stone and now he sounds reasonable enough.

Just include all the weakness, drawbacks, and limitations discussed and we should be good to go.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

In comic-book fandom the 90s were the time where every hero was a jerkass that was almost as bad as their villains, thankfully the era is past but its remnants are still present in modern comics.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

The sheet is very very good but my only concerns are with powers. His first two abilities are pretty damn potent already, I'm not convinced the latter three could be included without making him overpowered, if he was just like an Earthbender from Avatar that wouldn't be a problem but as his abilities stand so far I'm pretty sure his is literally the most powerful person so far and as such I believe the last three abilities can be taken out or limited even more.

Also if he's going to turn into stone there should be weaknesses like perhaps extreme heat or water eroding his stone, things like that. As a Superhero RP there's going to be a lot of Physical confrontation so he can't literally be somebody nobody could physically challenge like the sheet says. Also since he's such a gifted athlete I suppose his gymnastic prowess bleeds over even when he's stone making him a lightning bruiser which considering his physical prowess already is problematic. I could buy him being more light and acrobatic out of stone but in stone he should more slow and lumbering to balance things out.

And he'd need some kind of reason to be associated with the League no matter how tenuous.

Other than that it is a fine sheet.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

Yog, Admittedly a lot of the attitudes are pretty 90s. Seriously after this point I think any new characters should balance out all the anti-heroes.

And he could probably get there pretty fast.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

The second thing is more my fault, it's more of an inference based on the descriptions of her youth. Reminds me I need to put up the Ally gallery.

Ok then so that's just IC stuff like I thought it might be.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

Uh just so you know HWWB I think it's been stated multiple times that the League has been doing charity work and that the crime rate has dropped down significantly because of them. More than 50% is no joke and that 50% comprises violent crimes not littering. Also there's a difference between bitching and being a bitch :P And Emily is actually the same age as her. She's calling her out for entertaining all the fantasies of killing everyone in the room. Although I guess you can just chalk that up to her overwhelmingly negative attitude in the first place.

Also it doesn't really acknowledge the whole red alert thing.

The League - First Blood (Persistent World Superhero Sci Fi and Fantasy, Always Open)

Very nice sheet but let's keep his strength levels around the same as the upper-tier PCs such as Ocean Warrior and former PCs like Michael and Furious.

Accepted.